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揭示劇透Wuxia. Xianxian. Chinese protagonist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
揭示劇透what expectations could one have for this trash Chinese novel, and what was strange was that the author had the audacity to charge for trash writing. How shameless
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It's overall good and would recommend for you to read. It's not the best out their but it unique. The story is somewhat bland because of how op the mc is and how he interact with all the powers he has. Which makes the story predictable. However, personally I think it works in its favor because most people like op mc just absolutely wreaking the character we've read or watched.
It was interesting until all the high from the fighting crashed. The story development is weak, or you might say there's no room for any development since MC is invincible. The characters are either too flattering or too scared, so you could guess how bad the dialogue would be.
Truly an underrated gem. It’s been a while since I read a fanfic. That got me this interested. A unique take where Mc is not a young and naive idiot who runs after woman. But a battle harden warrior who has the strength to be the strongest. I would suggest give it a try. And I guarantee you would not be able to stop reading.
this idea is very good, how can an old MC who is highly respected by the village fight like a god. Even though this looks like a Chinese FF with an ancient ancestral background, it's fun to read. the author also makes each chapter interesting with various conflicts that occur.
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The might feel a bit overwhelming, and a bit immature, but at the end all that matters is that this is a fun read. Keep it up author.
2nd best naruto ff I've ever read. So good I can't explain. It's sure to get its readers out of their minds. Whenever we say, "Now it will connect to the original story and the novel will deteriorate", that's when the author puts the things we said back into our mouths with his big pen. I'm completely satisfied with everything, whether it's Konoha, Madara, Minata, or Azagure. I am actively following. Please keep writing.
in the beginning I liked the story a lot but then realized characters like the head captain aren't meant to be MCs. honestly this MC is so boring and mediocre in his existence. nothing exciting about him but the true error in this story is the brainwashed thug Kushina. why would you change her personality? she was perfect the way she was. you didn't change so many other characters that needed it. she runs around bullying people talking about how brainwashed they are lolololol. while she's the literal definition of brainwashed. Its sad. not sure why the author thought this would be a good idea but thats exactly the reason why this story is rated a 4 only. author has been brainwashed too obviously. I was a pat reon member for a week but lost interest in the stories for their fundamental flaws almost instantly.
very interesting Naruto fanfiction i like itand please more update...[img=recommend] thanks for your hard work
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Se podria decir que esta es una historia de nafuto con un mc de bleach... pero enrealidad es una historia china llena de llena de mentirosos e hipocritas, jovenes maestros, golpes de megilla, primer abuelo segundo abuelo esto y aquello, para mantener mi cara te mato por mirarme feo, etc. Tiene todos y cada uno de los cliche de novela de cultivo chinas pero con nombres de naruto. Ningunbpersonaje pare una persona real. Solo jovenes maestros uzumakis, jovenes maestros de konoha, jovenes maestros ninja jounin de otras aldeas etc. Todos actuan como jovenes maestros chinos... La historia deberia llamarse "La arrogancia de los jovenes maestros ninjas y la armadura de protagonista de los jovenes maestros uzumaki"
started good, with the mc gaining the template of Captain Yamamoto, and fought an entire army by himself, but then it just got worse and worse. With the mc acting like a wuxia character, and eventually everyone else associated with him also turned into wuxia characters. The last few chapters have not even had the mc in it at all, just being mentioned to throw his name around. Kushina has completely turned into a "young master" and is arrogant to the extreme and will kill anyone that looks at her wrong, and will hide behind the mc's name to not face any repercussions.
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this story is unoriginal you should have done the chunin exams differently then the show because in the show it is always done differently the writing quality is great though but still unoriginal
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揭示劇透Wuxia. Xianxian. Chinese protagonist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
揭示劇透what expectations could one have for this trash Chinese novel, and what was strange was that the author had the audacity to charge for trash writing. How shameless
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It's overall good and would recommend for you to read. It's not the best out their but it unique. The story is somewhat bland because of how op the mc is and how he interact with all the powers he has. Which makes the story predictable. However, personally I think it works in its favor because most people like op mc just absolutely wreaking the character we've read or watched.
It was interesting until all the high from the fighting crashed. The story development is weak, or you might say there's no room for any development since MC is invincible. The characters are either too flattering or too scared, so you could guess how bad the dialogue would be.
Truly an underrated gem. It’s been a while since I read a fanfic. That got me this interested. A unique take where Mc is not a young and naive idiot who runs after woman. But a battle harden warrior who has the strength to be the strongest. I would suggest give it a try. And I guarantee you would not be able to stop reading.
this idea is very good, how can an old MC who is highly respected by the village fight like a god. Even though this looks like a Chinese FF with an ancient ancestral background, it's fun to read. the author also makes each chapter interesting with various conflicts that occur.
Sin sentido alguno esta historia era entretenida al inicio pero se volvió aburrida [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The might feel a bit overwhelming, and a bit immature, but at the end all that matters is that this is a fun read. Keep it up author.
2nd best naruto ff I've ever read. So good I can't explain. It's sure to get its readers out of their minds. Whenever we say, "Now it will connect to the original story and the novel will deteriorate", that's when the author puts the things we said back into our mouths with his big pen. I'm completely satisfied with everything, whether it's Konoha, Madara, Minata, or Azagure. I am actively following. Please keep writing.
in the beginning I liked the story a lot but then realized characters like the head captain aren't meant to be MCs. honestly this MC is so boring and mediocre in his existence. nothing exciting about him but the true error in this story is the brainwashed thug Kushina. why would you change her personality? she was perfect the way she was. you didn't change so many other characters that needed it. she runs around bullying people talking about how brainwashed they are lolololol. while she's the literal definition of brainwashed. Its sad. not sure why the author thought this would be a good idea but thats exactly the reason why this story is rated a 4 only. author has been brainwashed too obviously. I was a pat reon member for a week but lost interest in the stories for their fundamental flaws almost instantly.
very interesting Naruto fanfiction i like itand please more update...[img=recommend] thanks for your hard work
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Se podria decir que esta es una historia de nafuto con un mc de bleach... pero enrealidad es una historia china llena de llena de mentirosos e hipocritas, jovenes maestros, golpes de megilla, primer abuelo segundo abuelo esto y aquello, para mantener mi cara te mato por mirarme feo, etc. Tiene todos y cada uno de los cliche de novela de cultivo chinas pero con nombres de naruto. Ningunbpersonaje pare una persona real. Solo jovenes maestros uzumakis, jovenes maestros de konoha, jovenes maestros ninja jounin de otras aldeas etc. Todos actuan como jovenes maestros chinos... La historia deberia llamarse "La arrogancia de los jovenes maestros ninjas y la armadura de protagonista de los jovenes maestros uzumaki"
started good, with the mc gaining the template of Captain Yamamoto, and fought an entire army by himself, but then it just got worse and worse. With the mc acting like a wuxia character, and eventually everyone else associated with him also turned into wuxia characters. The last few chapters have not even had the mc in it at all, just being mentioned to throw his name around. Kushina has completely turned into a "young master" and is arrogant to the extreme and will kill anyone that looks at her wrong, and will hide behind the mc's name to not face any repercussions.
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this story is unoriginal you should have done the chunin exams differently then the show because in the show it is always done differently the writing quality is great though but still unoriginal
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