/ Anime & Comics / Uchiha Itachi's Twin brother {COMPLETE}
摘要
Reborn in a world of Naruto as Itachi's twin. His old Life doesn't matter, now that he care so much for others, his village, and especially his brothers. He will do everything for them. Taking Itachi's pain and place. Changing and protecting everyone from the shadow in exchange of his own life.
Disclaimer!
*Naruto and Naruto Shippunden are owned, written, and illustrated by Masashi Kishimoto. Animated and Produced by Pierrot Co., Ltd. and Aniplex Inc.
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4.75
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this fanfic was short but It was so good. from character design to story development, everything was amazing
this story has many plotholes , pretty much same story like Itachi but still iIshed tears , truly beautiful
It was a bit difficult to read in terms of grammar, however if you can overlook it then the story is well worth the time
Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 2 Character Design 1 World Background 0
Let me tell you this Author you deserve my Highest Respect for this Fic the only one that made me go soft during the final Chapters
Even though it was fast paced and short it was beautiful and near perfect for a fanfic. Thank you very much~ 📝📖📚
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It's a great story, and I personally really liked it. The grammar is not very good though but that's the only thing I disliked with the whole story! Definitely recommend that everyone reads this.
It's one of those different PoV stories, where you dont really change much, just one element, but it slowly with cause and effect starts shaping a whole new story. I like it, and kind of inspiring me to write another Naruto Fic xD. 4.6/5 for me up to the opening 10 chappies. My advice would be to develop the MC's character a bit more, as well as Itachi's new development, for now the MC kind of doesnt have that impact. Maybe give him a quirk? yes watching clouds as laying in the grass is a good start, but give him more character ya know? anyway good luck.