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摘要
[R-18, Mature Element Warning!] [Multiverse!]
A young man with a questionable job dies, eaten by a shark. To his surprise, afterlife was a spinning roulette that decided his next world and powers, with an annoyed Goddess supervising the process.
The Gamer System welcomes him with open arms, and he shivers in the endless potential it holds. If used right, he knew The Gamer could step beyond even Godhood. Beyond God.
Out of desperation, that was exactly what his goal became. The Goddess was a snitch, and now she and her fellow Gods wanted him dead. What, and why?
In the end, [Soul 799], soon to be renamed as [Neji Hado], becomes a Cursed Soul.
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Tags: Gamer-System, Gray-MC, Harem, Incest, Mature, Multiverse, R-18, OP-MC, World-Hopping.
First World: My Hero Academia
Second World: Naruto
Third World: Fate/Grand Order
Fourth World: High School DxD
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Hypocritical and extremely irrational behaviour marks the whole story. Wouldn't recommend wasting time on this.....................................................
the story is good it's just too much drama and annoying side characters like her mother and kimi reading it is annoying... Tch [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Reading this up to the point I have, I am ready to give my full review on this novel. for starters, let's start with the overall writing quality and development of the story. What is fascinating about this book is that no matter how brilliant the MC is, his plans are always tested. The more he tries to walk between villain and good, the more violently he will be torn to one side or another. Neutral grounds are hard to follow because in the world of MHA it is a division between what is considered Good and what is Evil, the thoughts of taking the ability of both All Might could be considered evil but just the same as taking All for One's. There is a defined pacing of action behind each thought, and the looming threat that beckons beyond the world that he prepares for along the way is a most interesting way to twist the world as it is. As for character designs. It is hard to really rate this with what little characters are original and what are not, the design of what there already is however is enough. The conversations between Neji and the other women and characters in here is very well-written, elicted strong, and have very human emotions. The cast has very well-made characterization as well for pre-existing characters which all bend towards the will of the world that the writer bounded together in one perfect package. The updates are pretty frequent as well considering how well the chapters are put together. The only flaws really is that it depends on the preferences of the reader if they enjoy the story or simultaneously enjoy both character and story. Can't critique one or the other. Always as a whole. But I look forward to the day the Author makes a full-fledged book of original design. Grand Work.
All in all it's a pretty good story. Main issues i have with the story is the character design and the feel of the story, i don't know if the author wanted to create a story with an underdog feeling but the plot gives itself to this trope, the problem. is that the MC is a bit to unlikeable for that to really work as of right now. The MC is still in the development phase but some action and reactions kinda make me hope that the Gods come fast and kill him. Maybe it was my mood as i read the story but I kinda got a depressiv vibe from the story, when I hoped for something at least a bit more training and action heavy. All in all the story is fine and still developing but the MC Character just doesn't do it for me.
it's a 5 star, but it doesn't matter to me, if you nerf me it's a 2 star romance, I'll give it 3 because it's very good it's a 5 star, but it doesn't matter to me, if you nerf me it's a 2 star romance, I'll give it 3 because it's very good
It's a good fanfic, but it's not really multiverse, since so far the MC is in the first world. Something very annoying is the plot armor of the villains being absurd and the heroes nerfed. Stain, who has no super strength or stamina, was hit by a lethal laser and was only injured, was hit even more in a direct attack to the soul and is only injured, ja Mirko who has super strength and can fight the strongest Nomus almost died for some blades, this is ridiculous.
tired... it's boring, the mc is obviously strong but still suffers against some enemies that shouldn't even offer a threat, it seems that the author didn't measure how the skills would work, causing the MC to get out alive by 1 thread of some situations (large plot armor). And stop trying to add grace to some scenes to make them "better", it may be the author's inexperience but it irritates (there are still funny parts, but the realistic/dark theme of the story basically distorts this)
As the Proofreader-In-Chief, this is a really good novel that I recommend. Has good grammar and plot that can inspire a newbie to start writing. Without me, 4th would have been lost. I helped steer him in the right way.
The story went from good to bad after the mha arc after he started chasing every girl he met in naruto world all the girls will leave their crushes for him or something will happen to the person they are in a relationship seems like the author is getting fed up with this story for me
Wishy-washy character who can’t decide what he wants. Half assed morals. Forced developement. Literally made a joke outta that maid in one chapter. Not my cup of tea honestly.
A fanfic gem. Been closely following for a few months. My take on this: Writing Quality: Nothing much to say. Very readable, Author clearly has his English GCSEs. 5 stars. Updating stability: Consistent, good word count, high quality reads. 5 stars. Story development: Best point about this. It’s very different to ffs I’m used to reading. Several points author could have fked it up but comes out successful. Hoping turning to villain is done well too :) 5 stars. Character design: For me, the mc is great. Idk he might be a hypocrite/scummy but I enjoy him as the mc for this novel. Puts his goals before relationships (which he has several of) but relationships don’t lose out. Somewhat unique courtship too, you probably won’t be disappointed (Unless your deeply against the reverse r). I‘d like to point out he’s not beta despite what you may think of the maid situation. Harem does not become bland (good level of drama that doesn’t take away from plot) though I do feel they are slightly useless to Neji currently (Hope that’s seen to). 4.5 stars. World Background: No comment ;) 5 stars. Thank you for this gem and keep up the hard work Master4thWall.
I'm sorry to say it but for me the fic has been in decline, I didn't blame you or anything, it's that the mistake was to make a very good story from the beginning but not keep you at the same level, low quality. It's like comparing the first seasons of Games of thrones with the last one because it leaves a lot to be desired. I find that you had to start with a Medium level even if you are very Good to see what people like, because let's be honest you save or make love interests with the characters that you like the most when ok you want to put some of your favorite characters, but Remember that we do not have to have the same taste, you should or should find a middle ground between what people like and what YOU like.
No point. Sh*tty MC, the story idea is good but poorly done. Mc personality jumps around like he’s mentally unstable, author hyped up something then literally forgets and changes it so it makes no sense and becomes pointless to read and utterly trash.
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mc is a hypocrite, while I would has problem with he just accepted the fact the fact but what we get is a mc with victim mentality [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It's a generic gamer fic, it starts off very well, but develops into nothing very special. But I absolutely do not recommend reading it. Normally it would be a decent read to pass the time, but the plot of the Primordials (OC enemies) who became enemies of the MC for a stupid reason, and the MC himself who is sometimes an absolute villain and then suddenly decides he wants to be a guy decent and then it goes back to being bad and to make matters worse, extremely stupid moments. The stupidest moment occurs from chapters 363 to 379 in a fight between the MC and the Primordial of creation where he loses after going all out (except he didn't use his best weapon nor his two OP summons) only for the goddess not to kill him in place due to Plot Armor and right before he faints he uses one of the summons that he didn't want to use but could have used before without any problems, this summon saves him and protects him while he is passed out, until he wakes up and uses another summon which he could have used at any time (although this has a cost) to finish the fight. In short, the MC almost died because the plot wanted him to lose Round 1 and he didn't die because he is the MC. For these and other reasons, this fic is not worth reading. I'm going to continue because after 380 chapters I've gone too far to go back, but I don't recommend the experience to any fellow reader.
Was good in the first mha arc Afterwards it turned into trash As long as the person who wants to kill the mc is a girl he’ll justify not killing them. Also he now just considers lives usless and doesn’t care enough about anything Like he’s literally planning planetary destruction for no reason all the time It used to be a good novel with harem Now it’s just any other harem novel that isn’t even good
Quite an interesting story and I can say that I quite enjoyed it at first. I say in 'at first' because as the story went on, the author started giving more and more things and power-ups to the side characters with explicit instructions that the main character couldn't use them. Once or twice is OK, but it's like this all the time! In any case, it got to the point where they became even stronger than him because of it for a while... It's pretty gross and frustrating to me and I stopped reading at chapter 200.
This really depends on whether it suits your tastes or not. The protagonist has a kind of personality that would appeal to some people and repel some others. Also, there is too much System content. By that I mean the protagonist frequently calls the System to show his stats, etc, even when nothing has changed at all, which takes up a lot of space doing nothing to progress the story.
Yo I'm one of the few people being lucky enough to read chapters in advance and I can say that this book is worth your time guys. Ha rem, s mut, inc est, what else do y'all want? The author is experienced, he already wrote 2 successful books, so you don't have to worry about the writing quality. And the idea of the fic is original, and not just a simple gamer guy.. Anyway I won't spoil but give it a try and you'll see! big spoil for my fellow simps: mc looks like gojo 🥵
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you GOOD! GOOD! GOOD!
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