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[WARNING: Mature content 18+] WPC #277
Amanda had always viewed her best friend, Eddy, as a little more than the friends they were. She had dropped subtle hints to him all the time and he had seemed to be on board with her. The day Eddy invited her out on a date, she was over the moon but did she get more than she bargained for? or did she just join the statics of the saying that 'love makes us blind'.
Had she really been that blind? or were the signs always visible?
Kelvin lived life without a care and did menial jobs all around until the day he saw her, the most beautiful girl his heart had ever laid eyes on. He decided then and there that she would be his only he would live for her! But was it as simple as “I want her?” And then he would have her?
Life has a funny way of making us face it and do what had been written down in the fates.
Find out the complex relationships, the heartbreak and the love that life can spring up on us. Because at the end of the day, what is meant to happen would be!
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Cover image is mine & commissioned by @korkor_gavi
I, Loctovia, published this story only on the webnovel platform and for the WPC contest only.
WPC #277 Silver Prize. Thank you, WN :)
Copyright Loctovia 2022
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First of all I want to say that I don’t usually like romance novels but this one is very easy to get hooked on. The writing style is very easy to get into and it simple and charming. The main character seems like a free spirit and you feel for her but sometimes she can be frustratingly airheaded, which is an entertaining read. Recommended, even if you don’t like romance give this a try! You might be in for a surprise.
Great short bood that I just ran across,✍🏼✍🏼👏🏼👏🏼 I’ll just say I’d like to sit next Kelvin at dinner too🥰🥰🥰 I highly suggest this read🫵
I am always my own fan because I give myself the encouragement I need on the inside to move forward as I look forward to other people loving my work! And of course, I always give myself a 5star review! This is shameless author here. This book is about love and betrayal of the everyday life of young Amanada who seem to have it all but have nothing in reality. Even though it is one of my first novels, I guarantee that you will be for the ride of your life if you take a read! Remember to leave your comments and love as well 😘🥰😝
The novel bought me when I read that one should only be with their best friend. Such a great insight. The writing quality is top notch, the updates are good so far. The plot is amazing, I love the bubbly personalities of the characters to support the plot. It was a wonderful read. Stop reading my review and read the book because you're missing a gem!
World building is great. The story is great, the characters had a lot of potential. Hope Amanda can get stronger and personally, I don't like Eddy, I don't know if is my impression, but he feels like a two timing man... Even so... I want to continue reading, it's addicting. Keep going, author, I love your work!
Very impressed with the authors captivating choice of words. Well done. An amazing story with an even more amazing author! Congrats on an amazing story!
I always find it difficult to read romance novels however a message stuck with me from this novel. That being that "one should marry their best friend" which is to signify that people often choose partners based on certain qualities which they filter out for yet forget to consider if they actually would get along with that person. Even so, I have a hunch that some people might not like this novel simply because of the norm in romance novels to create a perfect man which every woman would fall for and this novel aims to diverge from that (or at least that's what I took from what I read so far). It's like how harem dominates a lot of fantasy novels and for some reason a lot of people seem to enjoy them. I really like it when novels choose to be unique so please author, keep going!
A beautiful love story filled with conflict from scheming family members. This was a classic reaping and sowing story, you will fall in love with Amanda and Kevin ‘s story immediately. This book fulfilled my needs as a reader, even with it being a quick read, all loose ends was tied up and addressed. Thank you Loctavia for another wonderful story!
It is a good, short novel. You will not regret reading it. There are multiple novels woth simliar number of chapters and they come across as rushed.
This has been an enjoyable read. Well written, straight to the point yet some surprises along the way. I love the FL character, she started as a naive, somewhat gullible young lady but in actual fact a prodigy. The ML - hmmm , even full of surprises . The author impart family and social values that are sadly deteriorating in our current world. These values are beautifully embedded and author drew comparisons with other situations. The background stories are kept to just background and that kept me glued to the story (else I get distracted ). A good, succinctly written story with all ends tied nicely.
It is a wonderful book. Needs a little proofing. Some of the characters are extremely sociopathic and others extremely loyal though vengeful. The characters have a solid and well-thought background but could have a little more depth. The plot is not totally predictable and entricate enough. I am excited to read more from the author and see the progress.
What a hidden gem I just found out! This story is just going amazing. I get hooked to this book from the first few chapters and is continuing reading it still now. Highly recommended!🤗
Dude..........your writing improves every passing chapter.........thats natural though.........but if you have time give a read through previous chapter and correct some of the mistakes or maybe you can make it even more impressive. The plot is actually quite chilling................ just dont give it a romance aspect please that will ruin that chill in it..................make it as manipulative as you can............thats what we lack rn............ This story is a total thrill ride
Interesting read so far, i look forward to more of it. The characters are really neat, I just hope to learn more about the world's background and such.
Just like the title already says "twists of life" this is definitely a rollercoaster and it'll show you the twists of life indeed. It's a fun story to read as it progresses. Good job!
I liked it. That's my review. It's my first time reading this genre here, so I don't have much to say besides this. The writing quality is very good, and I felt the pacing was balanced for the plot. The characters feel alive even though the author writes more from Amanda's point of view (it's not first person, though) Keep up the good work and congratulations on writing this good art.
I really liked reading this book. It had good writing, with some errors here and there and the pace was well kept. It is very interesting and will keep a reader hooked. The world background is alright, since it was not explored more. The character designs are also good and the characters seemed to have a consistent personality. Although there is one thing I would like to let the author know. You use double inverted commas for speaking AND thinking. Because of that it is a bit confusing for me to understand if someone is speaking or thinking. I have not read the whole book, so if you did change it later in the chapters, then its all alright. Anyway, so all in all, I definitely recommend this book. Good Work Author!
Secrets can kill us sometimes and affect those that are innocent. I love Amanda and her relationship with Kelvin. I wish them well in the future and looking forward to what is coming. A wonderful story, filled with drama, excitement. love it
Twist's words have a lot of suspanse what's next this thing made the reader addicted to your story. The start of your story is superb. your grip on the plot is strong.
First, I want to say the synopsis is so nice!! It’s like a trailer to an amazing romance movie with its happy beginning and end with suspense! After reading a few chapters I realized that ✨Tasha✨ is already my favorite character ❤️. She’s hilarious and blunt, but not only that, from the beginning, readers can tell that she’ll be a great friend to Amanda…(I’ll come back to this review if I turn out to be wrong 😅). — Lovely and simple writing that is very enjoyable to read, and a stellar job progressing the story. The pacing is great so far. Amazing job, author!!🥰