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First of all I want to say that I don’t usually like romance novels but this one is very easy to get hooked on. The writing style is very easy to get into and it simple and charming. The main character seems like a free spirit and you feel for her but sometimes she can be frustratingly airheaded, which is an entertaining read. Recommended, even if you don’t like romance give this a try! You might be in for a surprise.
Great short bood that I just ran across,✍🏼✍🏼👏🏼👏🏼 I’ll just say I’d like to sit next Kelvin at dinner too🥰🥰🥰 I highly suggest this read🫵
A beautiful love story filled with conflict from scheming family members. This was a classic reaping and sowing story, you will fall in love with Amanda and Kevin ‘s story immediately. This book fulfilled my needs as a reader, even with it being a quick read, all loose ends was tied up and addressed. Thank you Loctavia for another wonderful story!
It is a good, short novel. You will not regret reading it. There are multiple novels woth simliar number of chapters and they come across as rushed.
This has been an enjoyable read. Well written, straight to the point yet some surprises along the way. I love the FL character, she started as a naive, somewhat gullible young lady but in actual fact a prodigy. The ML - hmmm , even full of surprises . The author impart family and social values that are sadly deteriorating in our current world. These values are beautifully embedded and author drew comparisons with other situations. The background stories are kept to just background and that kept me glued to the story (else I get distracted ). A good, succinctly written story with all ends tied nicely.
It is a wonderful book. Needs a little proofing. Some of the characters are extremely sociopathic and others extremely loyal though vengeful. The characters have a solid and well-thought background but could have a little more depth. The plot is not totally predictable and entricate enough. I am excited to read more from the author and see the progress.
What a hidden gem I just found out! This story is just going amazing. I get hooked to this book from the first few chapters and is continuing reading it still now. Highly recommended!🤗
Dude..........your writing improves every passing chapter.........thats natural though.........but if you have time give a read through previous chapter and correct some of the mistakes or maybe you can make it even more impressive. The plot is actually quite chilling................ just dont give it a romance aspect please that will ruin that chill in it..................make it as manipulative as you can............thats what we lack rn............ This story is a total thrill ride
Interesting read so far, i look forward to more of it. The characters are really neat, I just hope to learn more about the world's background and such.
Just like the title already says "twists of life" this is definitely a rollercoaster and it'll show you the twists of life indeed. It's a fun story to read as it progresses. Good job!
I liked it. That's my review. It's my first time reading this genre here, so I don't have much to say besides this. The writing quality is very good, and I felt the pacing was balanced for the plot. The characters feel alive even though the author writes more from Amanda's point of view (it's not first person, though) Keep up the good work and congratulations on writing this good art.
I really liked reading this book. It had good writing, with some errors here and there and the pace was well kept. It is very interesting and will keep a reader hooked. The world background is alright, since it was not explored more. The character designs are also good and the characters seemed to have a consistent personality. Although there is one thing I would like to let the author know. You use double inverted commas for speaking AND thinking. Because of that it is a bit confusing for me to understand if someone is speaking or thinking. I have not read the whole book, so if you did change it later in the chapters, then its all alright. Anyway, so all in all, I definitely recommend this book. Good Work Author!
Secrets can kill us sometimes and affect those that are innocent. I love Amanda and her relationship with Kelvin. I wish them well in the future and looking forward to what is coming. A wonderful story, filled with drama, excitement. love it
World building is great. The story is great, the characters had a lot of potential. Hope Amanda can get stronger and personally, I don't like Eddy, I don't know if is my impression, but he feels like a two timing man... Even so... I want to continue reading, it's addicting. Keep going, author, I love your work!
My biggest thing is where is the inner conflict? If eddy is the best friend a natural fear is losing that friendship to a bad breakup. I'd push that a little more in the first three chapters. The main characters friends are spot on, though nosey intrusive eager to live vicariously through the main character
Twist's words have a lot of suspanse what's next this thing made the reader addicted to your story. The start of your story is superb. your grip on the plot is strong.
The storytelling is gentle and is very well made. The author wise choice of words made me to hook onto it from the very first chapter. Good job author👍🏻
Pretty nice.. Amanda has a good personality. Her roommate also seems interesting. I also like coca cola.. hehe.. the writing style is great, good word choice. I'll be looking forward to it.
Whoa! Heheheheee...I screenshot a part that the book said, you should marry your best friend. That's quite a good misherring, author. Your writing style is good, the flexibility, the characters' emotions are well conveyed. I love the twists, the cliffhangers and all. Just with the few chapters I've read I probably went through three phases of emotions. Seriously, I laughed out loud in some places. You are good, author. I recommend this to every romance readers out there. You are gonna love this. The only mistake that kept repeating was separated dialogues of a character with no indication which would make us think it is said by another author. Eg She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it." "And don't touch that cake!" "I won't, I promise." The rectification is below; She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it. And don't touch that cake!" Or She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it." "And Don't touch cake!" She finalised. I hope you understand what I mean.
So far the story seems really good. The author does a good job of setting things up and things like conversations between friends sounds very natural and realistic. I was instantly hooked onto the story after a few minutes of reading.
Love the story so far, don't get me wrong. But he did her dirty and for that. I'mma go cry and eat a tub of ice-cream now. Peace out. Imma keep reading tho, I recommend it!
This story has a great premise, and it does a good job of having a diverse set of characters! Amanda is sweet and down to earth, and her story is definitely one to watch out for.
The novel bought me when I read that one should only be with their best friend. Such a great insight. The writing quality is top notch, the updates are good so far. The plot is amazing, I love the bubbly personalities of the characters to support the plot. It was a wonderful read. Stop reading my review and read the book because you're missing a gem!
Twists of Life is the perfect title for this book. There are so many unexpected turns in the plot that I couldn't predict any of the most exciting events. I enjoyed reading about the characters' backgrounds. It helped me understand their behavior later on in the story when I was surprised to see that their decisions weren't the ones I thought they would make. This is a beautiful story about love and life!
I like that it immediately starts off with dialogue and that it helps us understand their certain actions. Great writing and I hope you continue to write like this.
The book is intriguing, I just wanted to check out a few chapters but I stay gue to my screen. A must read [img=update][img=update] Check it out and you will be glad, you did.
The author has a cute writing style, the novel flows smoothly, you can easily relate to it and I think it's very promising! Give it a shot!
I like the pacing most of all about this story. The characters are very recognizable because they are given time to meet the audience.
The writing is fairly good, albeit there are some gramamtical errors here and there, but overall the author excells on characters. You can really tell each character has a personality and voice. I fell in love in Amanda's friend Tasha because boy she's one hilarious ride. The love story going on between Amanda and Eddy is something I'm curious to see develop out in the upcoming chatpers. So far, I like it and I think readers should give this book a shot!
It is extraordinary. I love your story. your style is unique and your plot is well organized. you deserve a big applause. keep it up and well done.
First, I want to say the synopsis is so nice!! It’s like a trailer to an amazing romance movie with its happy beginning and end with suspense! After reading a few chapters I realized that ✨Tasha✨ is already my favorite character ❤️. She’s hilarious and blunt, but not only that, from the beginning, readers can tell that she’ll be a great friend to Amanda…(I’ll come back to this review if I turn out to be wrong 😅). — Lovely and simple writing that is very enjoyable to read, and a stellar job progressing the story. The pacing is great so far. Amazing job, author!!🥰
First of all I want to say that I don’t usually like romance novels but this one is very easy to get hooked on. The writing style is very easy to get into and it simple and charming. The main character seems like a free spirit and you feel for her but sometimes she can be frustratingly airheaded, which is an entertaining read. Recommended, even if you don’t like romance give this a try! You might be in for a surprise.
Great short bood that I just ran across,✍🏼✍🏼👏🏼👏🏼 I’ll just say I’d like to sit next Kelvin at dinner too🥰🥰🥰 I highly suggest this read🫵
A beautiful love story filled with conflict from scheming family members. This was a classic reaping and sowing story, you will fall in love with Amanda and Kevin ‘s story immediately. This book fulfilled my needs as a reader, even with it being a quick read, all loose ends was tied up and addressed. Thank you Loctavia for another wonderful story!
It is a good, short novel. You will not regret reading it. There are multiple novels woth simliar number of chapters and they come across as rushed.
This has been an enjoyable read. Well written, straight to the point yet some surprises along the way. I love the FL character, she started as a naive, somewhat gullible young lady but in actual fact a prodigy. The ML - hmmm , even full of surprises . The author impart family and social values that are sadly deteriorating in our current world. These values are beautifully embedded and author drew comparisons with other situations. The background stories are kept to just background and that kept me glued to the story (else I get distracted ). A good, succinctly written story with all ends tied nicely.
It is a wonderful book. Needs a little proofing. Some of the characters are extremely sociopathic and others extremely loyal though vengeful. The characters have a solid and well-thought background but could have a little more depth. The plot is not totally predictable and entricate enough. I am excited to read more from the author and see the progress.
What a hidden gem I just found out! This story is just going amazing. I get hooked to this book from the first few chapters and is continuing reading it still now. Highly recommended!🤗
Dude..........your writing improves every passing chapter.........thats natural though.........but if you have time give a read through previous chapter and correct some of the mistakes or maybe you can make it even more impressive. The plot is actually quite chilling................ just dont give it a romance aspect please that will ruin that chill in it..................make it as manipulative as you can............thats what we lack rn............ This story is a total thrill ride
Interesting read so far, i look forward to more of it. The characters are really neat, I just hope to learn more about the world's background and such.
Just like the title already says "twists of life" this is definitely a rollercoaster and it'll show you the twists of life indeed. It's a fun story to read as it progresses. Good job!
I liked it. That's my review. It's my first time reading this genre here, so I don't have much to say besides this. The writing quality is very good, and I felt the pacing was balanced for the plot. The characters feel alive even though the author writes more from Amanda's point of view (it's not first person, though) Keep up the good work and congratulations on writing this good art.
I really liked reading this book. It had good writing, with some errors here and there and the pace was well kept. It is very interesting and will keep a reader hooked. The world background is alright, since it was not explored more. The character designs are also good and the characters seemed to have a consistent personality. Although there is one thing I would like to let the author know. You use double inverted commas for speaking AND thinking. Because of that it is a bit confusing for me to understand if someone is speaking or thinking. I have not read the whole book, so if you did change it later in the chapters, then its all alright. Anyway, so all in all, I definitely recommend this book. Good Work Author!
Secrets can kill us sometimes and affect those that are innocent. I love Amanda and her relationship with Kelvin. I wish them well in the future and looking forward to what is coming. A wonderful story, filled with drama, excitement. love it
World building is great. The story is great, the characters had a lot of potential. Hope Amanda can get stronger and personally, I don't like Eddy, I don't know if is my impression, but he feels like a two timing man... Even so... I want to continue reading, it's addicting. Keep going, author, I love your work!
My biggest thing is where is the inner conflict? If eddy is the best friend a natural fear is losing that friendship to a bad breakup. I'd push that a little more in the first three chapters. The main characters friends are spot on, though nosey intrusive eager to live vicariously through the main character
Twist's words have a lot of suspanse what's next this thing made the reader addicted to your story. The start of your story is superb. your grip on the plot is strong.
The storytelling is gentle and is very well made. The author wise choice of words made me to hook onto it from the very first chapter. Good job author👍🏻
Pretty nice.. Amanda has a good personality. Her roommate also seems interesting. I also like coca cola.. hehe.. the writing style is great, good word choice. I'll be looking forward to it.
Whoa! Heheheheee...I screenshot a part that the book said, you should marry your best friend. That's quite a good misherring, author. Your writing style is good, the flexibility, the characters' emotions are well conveyed. I love the twists, the cliffhangers and all. Just with the few chapters I've read I probably went through three phases of emotions. Seriously, I laughed out loud in some places. You are good, author. I recommend this to every romance readers out there. You are gonna love this. The only mistake that kept repeating was separated dialogues of a character with no indication which would make us think it is said by another author. Eg She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it." "And don't touch that cake!" "I won't, I promise." The rectification is below; She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it. And don't touch that cake!" Or She smiled, "I would see what I can do to it." "And Don't touch cake!" She finalised. I hope you understand what I mean.
So far the story seems really good. The author does a good job of setting things up and things like conversations between friends sounds very natural and realistic. I was instantly hooked onto the story after a few minutes of reading.
Love the story so far, don't get me wrong. But he did her dirty and for that. I'mma go cry and eat a tub of ice-cream now. Peace out. Imma keep reading tho, I recommend it!
This story has a great premise, and it does a good job of having a diverse set of characters! Amanda is sweet and down to earth, and her story is definitely one to watch out for.
The novel bought me when I read that one should only be with their best friend. Such a great insight. The writing quality is top notch, the updates are good so far. The plot is amazing, I love the bubbly personalities of the characters to support the plot. It was a wonderful read. Stop reading my review and read the book because you're missing a gem!
Twists of Life is the perfect title for this book. There are so many unexpected turns in the plot that I couldn't predict any of the most exciting events. I enjoyed reading about the characters' backgrounds. It helped me understand their behavior later on in the story when I was surprised to see that their decisions weren't the ones I thought they would make. This is a beautiful story about love and life!
I like that it immediately starts off with dialogue and that it helps us understand their certain actions. Great writing and I hope you continue to write like this.
The book is intriguing, I just wanted to check out a few chapters but I stay gue to my screen. A must read [img=update][img=update] Check it out and you will be glad, you did.
The author has a cute writing style, the novel flows smoothly, you can easily relate to it and I think it's very promising! Give it a shot!
I like the pacing most of all about this story. The characters are very recognizable because they are given time to meet the audience.
The writing is fairly good, albeit there are some gramamtical errors here and there, but overall the author excells on characters. You can really tell each character has a personality and voice. I fell in love in Amanda's friend Tasha because boy she's one hilarious ride. The love story going on between Amanda and Eddy is something I'm curious to see develop out in the upcoming chatpers. So far, I like it and I think readers should give this book a shot!
It is extraordinary. I love your story. your style is unique and your plot is well organized. you deserve a big applause. keep it up and well done.
First, I want to say the synopsis is so nice!! It’s like a trailer to an amazing romance movie with its happy beginning and end with suspense! After reading a few chapters I realized that ✨Tasha✨ is already my favorite character ❤️. She’s hilarious and blunt, but not only that, from the beginning, readers can tell that she’ll be a great friend to Amanda…(I’ll come back to this review if I turn out to be wrong 😅). — Lovely and simple writing that is very enjoyable to read, and a stellar job progressing the story. The pacing is great so far. Amazing job, author!!🥰