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A young man wakes up in a forest naked and covered in blood. He doesn’t know why, He doesn’t know where and He doesn’t know when
The First Of His Kind, The King Of The All, The True Alpha
The Original Wolf
Set in the TVD Universe.
I don’t own anything other then my Oc
This is my first fanfic please be gentle with me
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It's a really great story, well written and has everything you can ask for. I hope it gets completed. For now we've only seen original characters and no character from the original series have been introduce yet, I look forward to how author will write them down. It's very important that they're written right, otherwise it would just ruin it for me.
I usually try to write a detailed review but I just can't this time. This ff is very divisive. Try reading the first 5 or 10 chps to see if it's for you. Personally, the grammar and misspelling is bearable, it's not absolutely unreadable but certainly several mistakes are present. Now this is where I just went nope I'm out to this story. I can bear quite a substantial amount of cringe and edginess, but this one. Ohhh boy, the amount of cringe just sapped the life out of me. I couldn't continue past chp6 or so. The idea and setting is good enough but the execution and portrayal of the MC as some kind of Original Alpha Wolf is not entirely correct. His personality is unbefitting for one and rarely acts his age, in fact he's very very playful in an obnoxious and unfunny way. TLDR; Try to read first few chps, if u can bear the cringe, you're in for a fic that is read to past time, not because it's amazing.
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Quite intriguing and interesting how the Nemeton talks about Alexander not to mention of course how it punishes the witches and vampires while making the Wolves more stronger and everything I'm curious for what will happen next especially by Alexander having the packs look for The Nemeton but also be staying there to protect the people from dangerous supernatural creatures that can be harmful to them and well act as the middle man so to speak look forward and wonder if he will meet with The Hale Family can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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hey, I'm just curious if this book will be updated as soon as I am cleaning my Library of Book I finished or don't get any more updates
Really liked it please wright more ! I would even pay for chapters oghaigjiang+piajg+pin+pfgnp+skadgnp+sdgp+ksdag+pksdgp+kndapkgpsda+gp+kksdngpsdf
Most definitely enjoyed reading this latest chapter especially the fight that happened and coincidentally how OC did what Klaus would have done years later and tell him or in general someone that they live their pathetic miserable lives only because he allows them to not to mention wonder how Elijah might react especially when learns how powerful OC truly is cant wait to read more of this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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Definitely interesting and intriguing how the MC was quick to go get vengeance for his pack and people under his protection and the way he brutally but effectively decimated those vampires but also how he helped Niklaus get in contact with his wolf more look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance and wonder what will happen as a result of what has occurred to the Strix
Definitely enjoyed where OC/MC created his pack as well also the gift that Morgana gave to Liam along with the ball that they got a invite to from the mayor and the Mikaelson family was quite interesting wonder what will happen next look forward to reading more of this book when ur able to get the chance
when will you give us more chapters I'm excited about how teen wolfs will be connected to it and how will it affect present time line of your fanfic universe
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Best TO-(/TVD) fandic of the site, while the grammar isnt the best, the plot is just well thought and interesting, starts before the burth kf the mikaelsons and there arw alot of tile skips, which summarize the years. MC isnt bound be the canon (yet) and does what he wants, instead of most fics here, which just follow Hope etc. around. Needs improvement: grammar and update stability 😅 - But a really satisfaying read!
