/ TV / Tvd /The Originals : Harper Freed
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Three primordial entities decide to give a secondary character a second chance into The Vampire Diaries universe . English is not my first language so bear with me, I learn every day and make remarks in comments to help me improve my writing. I hope you enjoy reading
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It's been months since I gave 5 stars to a fan fiction, that's why I make them, rarely in a ff I said to myself (never) that's how I want to be. Most of the time, they say that the story is fun, that the hero is great, but not that we would like to be the character in his way of being. in any case it doesn't do it to me, But I have to see that the moral values, the behavior of the MC are perfect. I put him at the top of my list of my favorite characters ahead of John Reese & Root from the Person of Interest series or Fallon from the film The Prestique. Besides, for those who are interested, here are my top 6 1A Superman from the Lois and Clark series, the new adventures of Superman 1B John Cofee from the film The Green Line 2 Harper Freed/Franklin 3 Ryuzaki Shinji from The Dog of Orthros series (Orthros no inu) 4 Fallon from the prestige movie 5 John Reese & Root from the person of interest series
Please note, the author does not mention it in the description but it is a universe shared with the story of a famous video game (it fits perfectly with the universe (the era) of the series, I advise you to read it even if you don't like vampire series.
It's a good fan-fiction. But MC's personality changes too often, not development, it seems like multiple personality disorder.
avec l'ajout de red dead redemption, l'histoire prend un sens intéressant, bien que pas suffisamment exploiter, l'auteur s'assure malgré tout de crée une bonne histoire et mal très bien les deux univers
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Most of all, I don't like it when authors start talking about skin color, I don't care if it's white or black or yellow, for me there is only bad or good, and it doesn't matter what kind of skin color he has! Yes, in fact, nowadays there are few people who pay attention to this))) Well, I'm bored here! And I didn't understand what kind of gift was given to him? I thought he gets into a kind of dream where they teach him a lot and make him stronger than the oreginals, but no! In short, it's boring
I have to say this is one if my favorite Tv/To series as it finally fix the plot hole of the series such as the originals powers and strengths
This is one of if not the best TVD / TO fanfiction I personally have ever read.
This is great but I also finished reading your jacob story and I was wondering if you would ever do something like that for Jacob Keener from the Originals that guy actually had it even worse at least Jacob Black was still alive and a alpha at the end.
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Very good story 👌 ..........................................................................................................................................................................................
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I didn't like this character at all in the vampire diaries. Same goes for this fanfic too. Also don't call me racist just because I don't like this character okay. Also, the same generic formula fanfic. I don't recommend it.