/ Anime & Comics / True Magician (FatexDxD)
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Waking up in the body of a Romani Archiman is acceptable. Getting 3rd and 1st True Magics is nice. Getting Beasts as pets - delightful. The world of DxD is unforgivable. It's a world where some teenagers who aren't even two decades old somehow mystically defeat the descendants of legendary heroes, ancient demons, powerful dragons, etc. Why does this happen? Simply because! Simply put, this world only makes sense because it doesn't. And now, I have to put up with the fact that I live here. Such pain. (DxDxMulti)
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World Background are neutral due to not having much development yep (though, Alaya being aika of the DxD world is dumb). Character Design, the MC is bland and not realy interesting. For Story Development, it's trash, the MC is forced to help the original MC (Issei) so that Issei can defeat the main "boss" or it break the "story" and the MC is erased...
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saying that "The world of DxD is unforgivable" and then right after saying that a few teenagers managed to get overwhelmingly strong easily doesn't really enforce the idea that dxd is unforgivable, if anything it makes it sound goofy, if a shmuck like Issie managed to thrive in a place like dxd then someone who has true magic shouldn't even sigh over being in dxd.
MC is forced to help Issei and can't change the plot much even with two true magic in his hand so what's the point of coming to dxd world just for the plot to continue like in cannon .
too much wrong with it premise was good but the way it was written and then doglicking for issei really soured my reading experience
This is an interesting idea, that was completily wasted. My homies would call this IDP( Interesting Idea done Poorly) The forcing mc to help Issei and not letting he change to much just sucks, both in concept and in paper, there is also the issue of mc being just boring. (It shows that i fin't read, the reason is that i was reading it with wattpad)
I would give it a negative review if I could, simply because the author seems to misunderstand the grandeur of true magic. Introducing him to the 'High School DxD' universe is akin to placing a level infinity boss with maximum stats in a level 1 map, without considering all of his additional powers. I've only read two chapters, and there would be several layers of infinity if we included all his other abilities.
I haven't read any of this, but from the reviews I need someone to confirm that the Mc is Issei's bootlicker or not? And they don't change the plot in some way and I don't see the harem label which means that Issei will get everything
5,3,2,2,2 Sorry author, but this plot is super strange and the comedy wasn't great. But the grammar and number of words are ok. ......................
I swear to god web novels readers are just the worst. They won’t appreciate a story where the main character isn’t using his op powers to dominate everyone and create a harem. This story feels like a breath of fresh air compared to other fics. Although not perfect and yes Mc is forced to help out Issie, majority of the time the story isn’t focused on that. The author does a good job in keeping the story interesting. Yes the mc is Op but he also has heavy restrictions which keeps the story from being bland. In Conclusion, this story is an under appreciated fic with great potential so pls give it a chance to read.
not as entertaining as I was expecting. mc is op to the point there's no motivation to achieve something, he's just there to watch
I just say - get him Boyz! Hero become Alaya dog. Become a nanny for Isei... whats a ANY point of taking care of a stupid schoolboy who is synonym of nothing... Whats a point of force-stopping development of the story; FORBIDDING the hero from changing canon.... give hero infinity powers and strength, but ban him from act...
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I have to say that this is the type of Fate DxD fic that I have been looking for and so far, I really like it. The MC is endering and different from what I'm used to and his actions feels very mischievious but not illogical. It's still in its early stage and there's obviously a more detailed background to him that just hasn't been revealed yet for story reasons. But despite all the positives that I have for this fic, there is an obvious glaring problem. This book is very obviously translated, and has the occasional errors and missuse of certain words. Like instead of saying Peerage, the word used is "entourage". Instead of Saint Graph, this book says "Holy Graph", they say "The Ophis" instead of just Ophis, and some others. It's not so bad that it makes the book unreadable, but it feels like a very easy to solve issue. Other than that, I would say that I look forward to the next chapter.
The writing is not prefered by webnovel readers you should change it like " is for characters talking and ' is for them to say in their thought.
The moment I saw the of "quotation" I knew there was no way I was going to turn off my brain to enjoy this.
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Love it Hope you can continue the story ❤ 💙 💜 💖 💗 💘 ❤ 💙 💜 💖 💗 💘 ❤ 💙 💘💖💝💗💔❣💓💕🧡💞💛💚💗💜💗💞💖💚💓💙💞💜💟💕🤎❣💋💔💝💗💟💗🖤❤💟💖💙🤍💚💗💞💓💟💗💜💗💘💓
MC is forced to help Issei babysit him. He has everything, true magic, summons servants at will, and probably can solo dxd verse but he can't do that since apparently, Alaya said he can't do that. That's what you need to know, I can't read further