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摘要
My first language is not English, and the grammar is bad.
Mc is a degenerate and don't expect anything good from him.
That yes, he adores his wives.
It is My first fanfic, the mc, it will travel through different parts of the world of the universe of anime, manga, Japanese and Chinese novels, etc. Manipulative MC. MC female finder, great harem.
He will not hesitate to manipulate to get the girl he wants. The protagonist complains a lot about the rest of the MCs in the other novels. He will not hesitate to sexually blackmail women that he hates or is his enemy. Lots of time jumps, I'll try to be as accurate as possible, spelling mistakes I'll try to correct over time. Hypocritical MC sometimes.
The story begins in the real world, he is born in China, but then he is sent to Japan and grows up there. Current worlds, real world, devil 2, oregairu, avatar. He will have the ability to summon some characters from League of legends, but he will not go to that world, this fanfic will NOT focus on the world of Diablo 2, which is part of the system. This fanfic was created for self-satisfaction.
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A decent book held back by writer and translator errors compounding to make an unfun reading experience. Im also probably being very forgiving because both diablo 2 and Necromancer are my jam and dont get enough fanfictions.
I will give it a chance since i like diablo and lol. But this has grammar issues. But one thing thst its extremely bad for a novel. Is the complete lack of a proper synopsis or summary. Instead we are presened with. "I dont know english" and literslly nothing more. Aside that this has diablo and lol elements. We have absolutely no idea what is this about. And as a reader. I feel insulted. Who would wsnt to even read this? Much less offer support.
As I read this to chapter 9 I can make a conclusion that this one is actually good story-wise, what make this bad is the grammar and spelling mistakes. The story is about a young man that got reincarnated to a parallel world of Earth without superpowers. He got Diablo 2 system that can transport him to Diablo 2 world and LoL system that able to summon items and characters from LoL. Additionally, he can go to another world other than Diablo 2.
Man he really needs a editor and fix every chapter from the start. the concept of the novel is interesting but if you can’t read or don’t understand what you read it kills the joy
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interesting story, I've read up to the latest chapter and I like it until now. I hope the author keeps updating every day and don't drop this story.
Overall good novel if you like the tags, i just can not read it because it confuses pronouns. The mc is fking someone and calling her a him, poor grammer makes me stop reading.
the story is interesting, the problem is the grammar and the interaction between characters, it's very confusing like shit, you need to reread to really understand
The Grammer is bad but the overall story and everything else is fine Author no disrespect but please fix the grammer It gets confuzing on who you are referring to
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Writing Quality :1/5 ( Horrible, the biggest problem here) Stability of Updates 3/5 Ok but not good Story Development : 2/5 Meh Character Design : 1/5 World Background 1/5 --------- The first problem is the writting... this grammar sucks so much.. I understand if someone doesn't speak english well but at least have a basic level.... The story is poor in detail and the grammar makes it even worse to understand the little mentions he makes about everything. This story is just a big meh , not recomended if you are looking for quality or story development.
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The best novel about an antagonist as the main character that I have read in my life! The truth is, of course, the minus is grammar, but I really liked the novel
You can tell, I thought the story wouldn't be understood, for every chapter it was getting better. What I liked the most was the character development and what each one thought. At first I didn't like the MC's personality but in the end I accepted it. It's not the best grammar but it's understood for me.
it is so full of errors that it becomes unreadable. The only favor the author can do in the world is cut off the hand with which he writes or if you really don't want to suffer at least don't publish this rubbish.
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here the author, only 3 stars, because being honest, I have spelling mistakes, it is a fanfic that I only do for fun, not everyone will like it, those who do not like me, I hope they can find one of their liking, and those who read on, I hope you continue to like it. Sometimes I don't explain very well, time jumps may not be well explained, but I think I improve each chapter. And thanks to all who gave constructive criticism, help to improve as an author. some people may be confused with the dialogues, I will also try to fix that.