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Li Jing transmigrated in the xianxia web novel he was reading before his death. Unfortunately for him, he didn’t become the main character.
With the help of his knowledge of the web novel and a system gifted by a mysterious god, will he be able to surpass the main character and reach the apex?
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The story has a unique beginning that we dont see alot in story's it shows creativity of the author I recommend to read this it's really good so far even though it has a system the mc dosent have a OP start where he can rule the world and it shows that he isn't cocky.
It is a well written story. More than 80% of the cultivation novels the I have read, the MC is either retard or an idiot. Provoking powerful people left and right for no reason, and when they lose " I want revenge 😤😤 and yada2, this and that without making any sense" . And have suddenly the ability to defeat people way more powerful than then, and can jump cultivation realms without side effects. I hope this doesn't becomes one of them and please don't dropped the story.
This is relly a well written novel. I don't mind giving all the power stones i have. It's worth reading if u like novel abot cultivation. The character development is also good.
I love the idea.The cliche of reincarnating as a non-MC is one used a lot but this does it well and manages to use a system while providing sufficient opposition that doesn’t make the power scaling ridiculous but doesn’t make the challenges impossible either.
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Great Novel Highly Recommended. ............................................................................................................
Plzz dontt addd hareem it so boring and make MC like some sexual type beast who only wanna **** women nivel is best i lije it and add more poerfull villain
I nicely written novel with the MC being aware of the tropes a typical xinxia has. It has a lot of potential to be developed. I really hope that it doesn’t get forgotten or dropped
Good story.................Very excited to read more..............Good luck author and I hope you finish the story............................................................................................................................
Very interesting, a third person pov of watching the MC of a xianxia novel and manipulating events to his own advantage, only worrying point is that his progress is too fast, and novels tend to get dropped by the author when he can no longer progress with the story. Hope author-san can plan his progression so the novel can reach chapters in the triple digits...😁
Starting was super,it made me to read upto current chapter last night, i would like to read more chapters, please post more chapters,you have my full support 😀😀😀
Aku berharap di cerita novel ini ada cerita romance dan harem or polygamy......... Soalnya menurut saya cerita ini cocok bila ada elemen itu. Apa lagi merebut pasangan dari pemeran utamanya.....
Hey, got to say that this is a good novel. However, I noticed that there are some inconsistency. For example, the MC contradicting himself (chapter 24). Another example, MC's first meeting with the novel's original MC. The interaction ended awkwardly and were a bit abrupt with the MC's response. Other than a few bits and nitpicking those, the overall story is interesting and have a sense of story flow. Also, a last bit of advice to improve the story is by making a story map. The story map doesn't need to be fully or well made, the story map must be able to guide the story direction. That's it for this review.
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I've read this more than 9 months ago, The plot about having a Mc and the protagonist of the story his in and the Mc stealing the stuff of the protagonist trying to overpower him is quite unique, the Mc also isn't a arrogant and dumb one who provokes everybody, I really hope the author can continue this he can
My review just personal opinion. It was well written story with nice world building and brilliant premises than other transmigrate in another world novel. BUT , I DECIDED TO DROP IT ! , The reason is: 1. Author seem still trying tuning his story with asking reader opinion what to do. For some people it was plus because author's interactive, for me it's a mess! 2. He decided not to add harem. Maybe you will find this is good. Harem just make mc idiot or something. Let me tell you bro, it like the author wasting free resources, cultivation story is boring enough, level up then fight, level up again, why you stripped it from harem. Harem is a spices for MC boring life. It's his second chance! So for now that was my review. Maybe i will read it again when he adding HAREM tag 🖐️. Lastly im man of culture, im gonna say : able man without harem is like seeing pokemon but you had no pokeball. U know that feel bro?
I can recommend it for everyone that is looking for a nice cultivation novel! So far (ch46) the story is quite interesting and the mc is manipulating the events to his benefits. I can see that the author makes him act smart, and he won't go crazy and take advantage of every single situation, just the tactical more important ones. There is, in a way, a second mc in this story. He is the actual mc, and also the competitor of OUR mc. Some 10000-year-old grandpa who is reincarnated, and now he is kissing little ****y girls. No, seriously. That dude is extremely strong with his experience and so on. Yet, our mc has knowledge as well and manages to fool that guy pretty good so far. The story is still fresh, but I can see that it is developing nicely. There is also a system, which is a bit op but not broken etc. It required the mc to be active and work hard to work properly. It has some quite interesting features, too. Anyway, grammar etc. is good enough. Waaaaaay better than the translations from the Chinese works. All in all, READ IT! ... and enjoy your day.
This novel is one of my best read so far.. as Im reading the "Omniscient Reader" I also got hook by your novel cause its the same.. where the MC got reincarnated in a novel that he was reading.. Here Li MC is smart and always thinking a head.. like with the newest chapter where his thinking if what his going to do will be beneficial to him or not... thanks for the great read.. hope you dont drop this.. and also please don't listen to those "INTERNET EXPERT" and just do your thing..sorry for my bad english :D
This novel is better than 90% of cultivation novels out there. The starting is great. The mc is a unique one. Rather than follow the protagonist like lost puppy he is pretty much doing what he wants and hinders the protagonist. I've read upto the 20th chapter. Very good novel.