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It is one of the best cultivation novels with very plot and character the only problem is that the is dropped author,can plz continue writing this story
I really found this novel when I lost hope in the Cultivation noves because? Nearly 90% has the same plot of offending young masters and then revenge and so but. I really appreciate the uniquess of this novel Alas sigh 😔😔 it already dropped sigh Alas good things comes with misfortune
the story is great I hope you can continue but I think it won't I think the author has died???????????????¿??????????????¿¿??????????????????
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I've read this more than 9 months ago, The plot about having a Mc and the protagonist of the story his in and the Mc stealing the stuff of the protagonist trying to overpower him is quite unique, the Mc also isn't a arrogant and dumb one who provokes everybody, I really hope the author can continue this he can
The novel was good, but MC got overpowered abilities way too fast. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
I loved it to bad Therese Are nO more chapters Dont mine this just traying to get the word count up ww w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w
A great story one of my most favorite stories in the web novel app .The mc(real) is a cautious individual but he takes action ,cares for his clan hinders the development of the protagonist, practices even with his system. The mc is not an arrogant person and does think things thoroughly. The updates were frequent when the story started but the author told that there would be a hiatus for a week or two but it has been more than 8 months and still no news from the author. Have been waiting this story will remain in my library tough. I recommend you to read it .It is on the better side of the eastern fantasy and cultivation novels out there.
I'm waiting author plzz continue this novel 📖🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁
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Writing Quality: Pretty good, no complaints. Not as bad as most webnovels out there. Updates: Its on hiatus when I posted this. Story Development: Very good. Character Design: The mc and fake mc both aren't idiots. I love that. World Background: Its great. It seems well thoughtout.
Nothing new here. just same stuff i see everywere sighhh. Transmigiration and system novels are just really.........boring. XD XD XD XD XD
This is a novel not real life, so for those who are replying to people saying that the MC is coward with, the MC is using his brain and doesn’t want unnecessary problems. Just shut up, as i said this is a novel, the MC needs an outstanding characteristic in order to stand out a bit and from the way the novel is going the only outstanding feature he has is being a coward. If people are calling him Smart, they would have also know that He could have killed the original MC when he had gotten stronger than him, and removed a potential danger for his future. and for those who will say that the original MC will have some sort of way to escape, u can also shut up, cause the MC has read this novel more than 20 times and knows everything and everything he has been doing this whole time is showing that he fears the original MC to the point of trying to be his ally.
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Hey bro are you going to write this novel or drop it can you please tell because after the last break you wanted to take there is no update about the novel wether it will continue or not ,I hope it is continued.
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This novel is great all I can see but it's hiatus So 😞😞😟... Exp......,..............expExp......,...... ........expExp......,..............expExp......,..............expExp......,..............expExp......,..............exp Exp......,..............exp
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Great novel, is there an update on the author; when is he updating the next chapter, or is the novel dropped. Heard he got cancer, i hope he is alright.
It is one of the best cultivation novels with very plot and character the only problem is that the is dropped author,can plz continue writing this story
I really found this novel when I lost hope in the Cultivation noves because? Nearly 90% has the same plot of offending young masters and then revenge and so but. I really appreciate the uniquess of this novel Alas sigh 😔😔 it already dropped sigh Alas good things comes with misfortune
the story is great I hope you can continue but I think it won't I think the author has died???????????????¿??????????????¿¿??????????????????
Not bad …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………...…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I've read this more than 9 months ago, The plot about having a Mc and the protagonist of the story his in and the Mc stealing the stuff of the protagonist trying to overpower him is quite unique, the Mc also isn't a arrogant and dumb one who provokes everybody, I really hope the author can continue this he can
The novel was good, but MC got overpowered abilities way too fast. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
I loved it to bad Therese Are nO more chapters Dont mine this just traying to get the word count up ww w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w
A great story one of my most favorite stories in the web novel app .The mc(real) is a cautious individual but he takes action ,cares for his clan hinders the development of the protagonist, practices even with his system. The mc is not an arrogant person and does think things thoroughly. The updates were frequent when the story started but the author told that there would be a hiatus for a week or two but it has been more than 8 months and still no news from the author. Have been waiting this story will remain in my library tough. I recommend you to read it .It is on the better side of the eastern fantasy and cultivation novels out there.
I'm waiting author plzz continue this novel 📖🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Writing Quality: Pretty good, no complaints. Not as bad as most webnovels out there. Updates: Its on hiatus when I posted this. Story Development: Very good. Character Design: The mc and fake mc both aren't idiots. I love that. World Background: Its great. It seems well thoughtout.
Nothing new here. just same stuff i see everywere sighhh. Transmigiration and system novels are just really.........boring. XD XD XD XD XD
This is a novel not real life, so for those who are replying to people saying that the MC is coward with, the MC is using his brain and doesn’t want unnecessary problems. Just shut up, as i said this is a novel, the MC needs an outstanding characteristic in order to stand out a bit and from the way the novel is going the only outstanding feature he has is being a coward. If people are calling him Smart, they would have also know that He could have killed the original MC when he had gotten stronger than him, and removed a potential danger for his future. and for those who will say that the original MC will have some sort of way to escape, u can also shut up, cause the MC has read this novel more than 20 times and knows everything and everything he has been doing this whole time is showing that he fears the original MC to the point of trying to be his ally.
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Hey bro are you going to write this novel or drop it can you please tell because after the last break you wanted to take there is no update about the novel wether it will continue or not ,I hope it is continued.
Hiatus Hkckgxgkxtkxkgxgixitxkgzyiditdlhsy ulseidyizjrdljdurdjpzgzkhxykxkgzhlxitxjlzgkdktsutdkyzurzkhzrudxitzkhdlhdijpjchetdutsihiboyehcoyddiyxl
Exp!!!!?¿?!!.........Exp!!!!?¿?!!.........Exp!!!!?¿?!!.........Exp!!!!?¿?!!.........Exp!!!!?¿?!!...Exp!!!!?¿?!!..............Exp!!!!?¿?!!.........😉😉😉😉
Exp......,..............expExp......,..............exp Exp......,..............expExp......,..............expExp......,..............expExp......,..............exp😯
Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical Its typical
This novel is great all I can see but it's hiatus So 😞😞😟... Exp......,..............expExp......,...... ........expExp......,..............expExp......,..............expExp......,..............expExp......,..............exp Exp......,..............exp
Novel in hiatus Xigdtkzkhdkhdkgzkgzkgzkgzkgxkhxkgzkgzhkzkgzkhzkv hlcmhsjgzkhckhxgkdiyxgkzkhxhkxkgzkgxkgzkgzkgxkgzgkzkgzgkzkgzkgzkgzgkzkggkxhc
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Great novel, is there an update on the author; when is he updating the next chapter, or is the novel dropped. Heard he got cancer, i hope he is alright.