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摘要
In Transformers with a system. A 21st Century soul has been reborn and the world is in for a surprise! How will Sam Witwicky win against the odds?
Stay tuned to find out.
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,........................................Has potential needs a lot of work
This is certainly a wish fulfilment fanfic with a potentially op protagonist, but it is certainly interesting. The author has done research and even though it seems a bit fast paced, the story is engaging. It seems that the story will go deep into the Transformers lore and i like it. The only things I'd like to know is if there will be romance (if yes, who is the love interest) and the update schedule. All things considered, this is a solid fanfic and I'm excited for more.
Considering the advantage of AI and ML in the early 21st century, the pace at which the story proceeds is quite good. Especially with energon, the MC is bound to grow stronger. The writing is elaborate and simple, which is appreciated. [img=recommend][img=update] Keep up with this one!!
don't even bother! it was literally info dump after info dump! and none of the info was even about transformers but economy!!! he makes stuff and sells stuff that he shouldn't even have to begin with!!!
Transformers is an interesting world and since you have touched upon energon, I think you are trying a fusion of the comics and movies. The Cover page is interesting and if it is what I think it is, then Sam would truly become powerful. Your writing style is quite elaborate and it seems you have included the actual stock prices in few places which means you have done your research. And indeed, Skye is awesome. The potential of progressive AI in the early 2000s was simple unimaginable.
It's worth reading this fanfic, It's a bit fast paced in the early chapter but we'll see in the future hoping the transformers timeline will be normal pace. So far its's good, keep up the good work author
Complete trash Mc can speak and walk at 4 months old no one finds it strange, perents are pushovers, plot moves as fast as light, no character development, ewerithing is instant and the story is boring. I dont even know how this has so many positive reviews unless author made separate acaunts and revieved his own fic
The entire fanfic itself is good, kudos to the author. Hopefully, this won’t just become a passing by fanfic that would be dropped around chapter 20 or so like the others.
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this app need more transformers fanfics haven't even read it yet I'll give you a five
it's good and hoping for more chapter but man can u write it straight like I got dizzy while reading this the way u write it like there dancing
Really well written and very captivating. Hope you continue to write more chapters of the same level.
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Has a lot of potential. The intro seems a bit long, but that's the intro, so it makes sense. Just hope that there aren't long drawn out mental monologs often. Other than that I have no complaints, I really like where this is going🫡
You know what you must do dear Author. Huhuhuhuhuhuhuhu