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摘要
The war between the Autobots and Decepticons transformed Cybertron from a planet of life to one decimated by war. Megatron, in his quest for freedom and equality, led his followers in a war against government corruption, a noble cause that slowly became an unstoppable quest for power that corrupted his soul. Orion Pax, a close friend of Megatron, even considered a brother, rejected the violent attitudes of the revolution, with his noble and predestined heart, received the Matrix of Leadership, becoming a true Prime, taking the nickname Optimus Prime, commander and leader of the Autobots. In the midst of the climactic battle, Optimus Prime, fearing that Megatron would use the power of the Allspark, an object of unlimited power, threw it into space to protect it from the evil intentions of the Decepticon leader. The Allspark wandered aimlessly through the universe, the object itself mysterious and emblematic, but the fact was that it held great power and the ability to bring life to any aspect, and its solitary destiny would be defined by an anomaly that would affect the future of this universe.
======================= AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story takes place in the Transformers Prime Universe, the rights to the work and characters belong exclusively to their creators, this is merely an entertainment story with no intention to offend or criticize.
======================= AUTHOR'S NOTE: The story will contain, among other things, violence and adult content. Mainly, the story will have significant changes as the story progresses, with extra characters in the work to proliferate the entertainment.
Ps: I don't know if there is a similar story out there, but I will try to be original and entertaining.
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It looks interesting and has potential, but for the 12 chapters, the Mc just apear in like 3 or 4 chapters for a few paragraphs while the rest is just showing his little intereferences in the original story (that in the end, didn't really changed anything) You can se the Mc as a little Easter egg in the story, he will appear sometimes and do something funny for half a chapter
right. allspark fall on earth, primitive kid touch it and become allspark. why not. Time skip of 300 000 years and the guy still discover his powers, and has basically done nothing. That's too much for my suspension of disbelief to handle.
massive dissapointment mc barely seems involved in the story and he's human. idk why author thought yk transformer prime fic as an human with the allspark majorly dissapointing for me wouldn't read or recommend.
it's a good concept but poorly executed. the MC is a little bit*h. he has unlimited power and thousands of years of time but is seriously weak. what did he do in all those years? laze around ? also why is he so easily flustered? did he get no action in those thousands of years. all in all this is a disapopointment.
the only reason it has a rating above two is because Of update stability and world background other than that the Story is plain bad. its bad in a way that is simply unexplainable. the mc is useless in every aspect he's not even the allspark as he's just a rando human with no special powers per say cause bro has been running amd tunning from the race he created. its super annoying i wouldn't have guven this low rating but the arachnid chapter is just plain disgusting in this context.
This is awful and don't feel like wasting my time to criticise on an review the author doesn't look at
Ah, I just realized you wrote Avatar: Third Son of The Fire Lord! No wonder I love your writing style so much. 10/10, can’t wait to see more chapters!
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The story was at a good pace at the beginning, then it went downhill with each chapter, the MC barely appeared and then it simply started with a flashback that lasted like 10 chapters that practically tells a transformation movie.
writing Quality (3/5): feels like it's run through MTL software. though they don't switch people's gender willy nilly, or if they do it's not that often. story development (4/5): immortal, cool. potential goth robo girlfriend. transformers are cool in general. character design (4/5): I don't think anyone can hate a big robot regardless of personality. MC actually tries to avoid conflict like he says he wants instead of charging head long into it saying "OH WOE IS ME, LEAVE ME BE!!!!" while he is killing entire families in the middle of the day in plain view of his enemies and the allies of the people he is killing. so better than most on the platform. updating stability (2/5): does update relatively frequently, but the chapters are relatively short and there aren't many when released. (so it's just a personal preference that isn't met, not bad otherwise). world background (5/5): BIG.. ALIEN.. ROBOTS. no more need be said.
Mediocre story, neither good nor bad. The main problems are that the world feels like wallpaper, but with many blank parts. For example, the fact that the protagonist has no identity in the world is already a huge problem, since he says that he lived thousands of years as an observer, but the moment he enters modern society, he can no longer forget his mark,The protagonist does not have a personality, he says he wants to avoid problems but he makes a car appear out of nowhere, but the main character's biggest problem is that he does not feel like he lived thousands of years, he feels like he has a few dozen years of emotional maturity, which he should have, would be essential to the story, but he does not feel that way, he feels like a teenager who thinks he is great but is not, humbly a reader
I really like this idea of a fanfic its not your usual style of reincarnation or transmigration also from the chapters I read so far the story is decent I really like where this is going on another note I am quite excited about the chapters to come I have great hope as there aren’t many FF of transformers
God, there are so few fanfiction on transformers with normal ideas, thanks to the author for this work, I will look forward to the chapters.I love transformers with all my heart.
an excellent find of transformers story not many people make such great entertainment and detailed but it also gives me a idea if the author is willing to give it a shot such as if a human was born before the Civil war on cybertron and it follows the storyline of the game or movie/comics it would provide astonishing results with the lack of good TF fanfics.
I’m assuming that this book was dropped. It’s sad because the book was good it’s just the whole flashback arc seems to be unnecessary as it seems more based off of the TFONE movie more than being connected to the actual story as of right now the flashback doesn’t have anything to do with the ALLSPARK I feel that the flashback should’ve just been Optimus talking to the cyber forest bot about a short story of cybertron’s history like in TFP then continuing the actual story. It’s a good story it’s just THE TOUCH arc is way to long if it was a normal transformers story beginning with that it would be fine but this book is about a ALLSPARK with a human mind and feelings
FINALLY A GOOD TRANSFORMERS STORY IN HEOR I HOEP THE AUTHOR DOES NOT QUIT IN THE END LIKE ALL TRANSFORMERS STORIES IN HERE. THEIR NOT MANY TRANSFORMERS STORIES IN HERE THOSE ANYONE KNOWS ONE BETTER THAN THIS THEN TELL ME DOWN THANK YOU. WE NEED MORE TRANSFORMERS NOVEL IN HERE.