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One day, all the world's shook.
A Curtain appeared above the sky.
[Inventory of the top ten Battle Scenes!]
Top 10: Ichigo Kurosaki Vs Aizen Sōsuke
Top 9: WhiteBeard Vs Navy Headquarters
Top 8: Madara Uchiha Vs Might Guy
Top 7: ...
After the video's where played, The people where shocked one after another.
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I get the premise, but it’s horribly executed. For example, in a fight being played by the “curtain,” there will be a huge block of reactions after every move. Furthermore, it’s all the same reaction. It’s incredibly boring as it takes 10 chapters for one section of a fight to occur. It’s basically Dragon Ball where Goku screams for power, only stretched to 30 episodes with flashbacks and filler.
can you give me the raw link author-san ?............. .................................................................................... ............................
The author probably just used Google's translation feature since he released chapters way too fast for it to be manually translated. This could also explain why the translation just sucks, I would give it a 3 for writing quality. I would give the stability of updates a 5 since the author did released 53 chapters and he only started about 6 days ago. This could change though. The story development is a 3 since I've seen multiple fanfics like this before. Character design, 3. World Background, 3. So in conclusion, a badly translated Chinese fanfic can make you lose braincells. Also, is the author botting? He started 6 days ago and he has 500k views, 9 reviews, and he's in the top 20 for power stones? Sorry for accusing you author if you're not actually botting but I find that hella sus.
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writer don't drop this ok .I welll support youuuuuuu forever and I will recommend this book to my friends so keep the good work author you did Great
After that, you can bring this faloo fanfic : 次元:开局解锁鬼舞辻无惨模板 (Dimension: Unlock Ghost Dance Tsuji No Miserable Template at the beginning). Pls
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There are 2 things I have learnt about mtl novels. 1 - It is nearly impossible to read normally 2 - Despite that, they usually all have good story concepts
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A typical work from MTL. The idea is good, even amasing, but the execution, as always, is lame. I am always amazed at the inspiration of the Chinese. I am 1000% sure that the chapters of this work will reach 1000 in a short time
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