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You wake up in Westeros - Panic,
You have one of the most broken powers from a world filled with broken powers - Manic Laughter
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I used to have a schedule, but now I am simply doing my best to post a new chapter every three days.
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How long will he go around working for other people? If the MC was going to be this lackluster and unambitious, why give him such an OP power? Its like superman, very op but has a mundane job and zero ambition. Personally i dont like OC love interests, and i dont if this guy will end up her (or get a harem idk), but it wouldnt have been annoying if not for the already bland story. No goals, no ambition, no conflict, no progress. Thats what it feels like, a story thats at a dead end.
Interesting concept unfortunately the MC is content being a good dog ................................................................................
His laid-back attitude is pleasant, the pacing of the story is acceptable, with an interesting and underused type of power, and while there are points in the writing to improve on in the story, it doesn't detract from the fact that it's a good experience to read.
I like how your pacing it so far and I love his laid back attitude the grammar is great and there really is no need for world building as we all already know it’s game of thrones hands down it’s a great story and a clam story to the nearly always fast past fighting game of thrones fan fica out there
Artificial, Poor Prose, Cliche ridden Canon-Compliant(ish), and just overall rough as a story.
There are some reviews saying that the MC has no ambition and they give a low score, this is false because the MC does have ambition, not in gold or land but in knowledge, he studies the limits of his ability that can make him immortal so that if worry about being a lord? this is the good thing, but in chapters 15 onwards the MC starts to turn psychopath which I don't like and will probably make me drop, but who likes that I recommend it
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Главный персонаж то ли даун то ли блаженный. Имея такую способность максимум на что его хватило стать слугой у Старка. Идиот. Просто езжай в Эсос набери сирот улучши их и вот у тебя армия преданых солдат дальше а что хватит мозгов. Предложи Визерису армию и трахи дейнерис а потом стань королем вестероса.
Great novel. thank you! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
very good story, absolutely great and not cringe MC. Great story progression, love the way the story was going. Unfortunately, the story appears to be dropped, as no updates have come for months.
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Is such a nice story people usually don’t understand the concept of biokenisis it is a nice blend of everything and the concept of making his own dragons is a very interesting touch
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TLDR: story great, still need improvements in certain areas. WRITING QUALITY is great: 5stars STORY DEVELOPMENT needs a bit more direction, mc feels like aimless still in chp.30: 3stars CHARACTER DESIGN (3stars) needs more development on original characters & mc, assistant girl is still assistant girl in my head and not love interest at this point. again, mc kinda feels aimless to me. i mean sure pursuing the path magic and what not as next step is noce and all, bit what's next? what happens after that? UPDATING STABILITY (1 star) started fine with a day in between breaks in updates, now 2weeks updates. sure, it's nice that it's not dropped. but it doesn't really inspire confidence or assurance that ot won't be dropped if the interest of the audience wanes. WORLD BACKGROUND (4 stars) almost everyone knows of G.R.R. Martin's IP so doesn't really need much effort in improvements. this is honestly the first time i made a review, so sorry if I rambled a bit (or a lot)
.................................................................................................................. Would give a 5⭐ if you will update 3-4 times per week ..................................................................................................................
can he create his own military force like troll, dark, ellien pradator or uruk hai? people with changed minds and improved bodies = elf maids, hardworking goblins, guard giants (although he is more into war, it is very boring that he does everything on his own, and if he is so strong, it would be funny for him to be alone
This is really great! I love the concept, as well as the laid back personality of the MC. There're some inconsistencies for those die-hard GoT fans out there, but for the casual reader it won't matter much.