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Imagine waking up in a dangerous Hunter x Hunter's universe.
That is what happened to Raymond.
But instead of fear, he feels a surge of ambition, setting his sights on conquering this fantastical realm.
Join his journey on his quest for world domination!
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Well to be honest I didn't like it, it's rushed and it's feels like it's written by an Ai.
I made it a grand total of 8 and a half chapters before stopping at the part when the mc didn’t want to higher a hunter to teach him nen simply because "I don’t want to attract attention"…… from who? 8 chapters in and you’re already hiding from imaginary people that keep there eyes out for kids learning nen. Seriously… who cares about you man!? Your a nobody who could possibly be looking for you? Author give me 3 reasons on why he shouldn’t of hired a hunter to learn nen in chapter 8 and I’ll continue reading. If you can’t then there was no reason other than you felt like it. And why just why would you make the mc partner up with someone who already failed in making a business? I’m extremely tired of people making excuses to prolong arcs in a story because they "don’t want to attract attention"
It's not a bad read, but it needs more dialogue. It feels more like a summary than a book.
I don't really normally write reviews, however I saw a lot of one star reviews which in my opinion is a bit of injustice towards this novel. What motivated me to write this review is that the author did not delete the negative reviews (like other authors on this app) which I really appreciate. Now on the actual review: The story is not bad as we follow the rise of a person from the slums to the top of the world. The main character and the original supporting characters are well done in my opinion. My issues with this novel ar3: 1- The MC's impact on canon is minimal (especially when he transmigrated a long time before the canon starts). 2- His paranoia at the beginning of the novel to hide himself from the hunter association. This does not make sense as there is no prior indication that the association targets unofficial Nen users. 3- The long flashback which spanned around 35% of the novel. A flashback should be short and add context to the story, not tell the story from a flashback as all the tension disappear. Overall an average story that could be much better 3.8/5.
great work. really impressed with the previous translation of kuroko fanfic. hopefully this will be the same
The Tsun- at the beginning got me🤣 here's 5stars for mythoast because i know it gonna be good but i just hope you post more chapters at important fight scenes
Can the author please check chapter 11 and 12 You have rewritten a part of chapter 10 in both chapters By the way, I have read your previous work and it was amazing Thanks for the amazing book
I hope it is at least half as good as his previous novel, that would already classify it as a good novel, thanks for sharing it, the note in the review is based on the confidence in his other novel, which has several strong points highlighting the fact that I tackled it before the beginning and ended it with a good ending, thanks for sharing another story :)
I'm not read this book yet but based off his previous book this one should be really good from his previous book has updating stability was solid usually most of the time it was two chapters a day sometimes three sometimes one but generally two times the world design was great for his last book so I'm sure there's going to be good for this one too the story was also great the character design I loved it the only thing I really have to say I was sad about from his previous book was there was no Romance but it was a good book I recommend reading it and I recommend trying this one as well
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Jusqu'à maintenant c'est une superbe fanfic . Mon seul problème reste l'intrigue je me demande si avec se rythme assez rapide l'auteur pourra faire durer sa fanfic à plus de 100 chapitres comme nous l'avons vu avec l'autre sur kuroko no basket , qui a vraiment fait monté la barre haute dans nos espérances So far this is a great fanfic. My only problem remains the plot, I wonder if with this fast enough pace the author will be able to make his fanfic last more than 100 chapters as we saw with the other one on Kuroko no basket, which really raised the stakes. high bar in our hopes
old and loyal fan, here if you want a new and refreshing take on hxh fanfic, join me here together with the author to explore his very own hxh fanfic. will continue to review as chapters have stacked and a part of the world background has been explained. so stay tuned!!
Hope you don't miss this time around! Great story on your last one, just do half as good would do the trick hahaha
Pretty good so far, though it would be best if it's not too rushed. But well, hoping there would be at least some flashback on it so we weren't left hanging about some of the details.
I have nothing to say..I just want to give the author the 5stars he well deserved. im not sure if i have given his other story a 5star..but that 1 was amazing too.
Shameless review from the author as usual!