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This novel has been discontinued. I've decided finally to do a rewrite. Check it out! Its now called:
Harry Potter and the Descendant of Merlin.
The main plot will be the same however the story telling is completely different. From third person to first person.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter-and-the-descendant-of-merlin_19153840305448005
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Amazing ! Truly amazing !!The book is very well written and the chapter length is descent its neither long nor short and I hope the author doesn't drop it and keeps updating it at least weekly.....I'm really happy cuz i stumbled into two really good books today !!This one and the other one is called Rise Of The Magic Emperor-Fairy Tail !!!
My god!, this many good ho novels are starting to rise,this may be the golden era of hp fabrics. This was just amazing,hope you continue and Don't pay heed to hate comments if you see them, they may just want you to stop writing because you're better than those pricks!hope you don't drop this and continue to update it.:).
Yes, the truth is, I don't know how this work has so much audience I'll make it simple, it's not good ... the MC has no ambitions or a goal, it only learns magic because it has it, that's all, as in many fic cliches, it wants to help and engage relationships with the original mc making the work a follow-up to the canon, it does not aspire to show us something new or innovative about the magical world .. despite its desire it is super silly it does not take advantage of its potential at all nor does it have the smoked theories that every good fic has .. there are many things to emphasize in this work, it is not for me thank you author, I hope you improve
Love the fic, My only recommendations would be to limit the cultivation aspect and focus more on the magic. Elemental spells in Harry Potter ten to get neglected, perhaps explore bloodline traits like parseltouge and metamorphmagus. They had to come from a ritual or a contract of sorts🤔. since all gen1 wizards start from nothing, Honestly It would probably be more entertaining if oz doesnt limit himself and just test out of Hogwarts and just applies for the dark arts position himself after he explored the wIzarding world himself for a year. fics tend to always revolve around hogwarts the whole time. Especially since oz had almost already finished WIth the hogwarts library, Maybe head to romania and go see some dragons, instead of waiting for the goblet of fire. Could probably Do a little crossover wIth something else that matches the setting.
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While I did like the Book to a certain extent, it isn't amazing or fantastic or outstanding in any way or form and all the other 5-Star reviews don't know shit, typical Chinese if you ask me. Don't get me wrong, it isn't that bad, but the author made a really bad job with Original characters and I can't in any shape or form understand how the author can portray such amazing Characters in such a bad way! I would understand people changing characters so that they fit their world/Nobel but the author 'said' that he follows canon so the CH isn't changed. The Grammar is decent, and that's all I have to say. If the author wants to know how many stars I gave him in each category, then comment, because I am too lazy at the moment.
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Just finish reading till the latest chapter (50), and here's my review. The story development is good, it have a sense of direction meaning, atleast there is a good plot apart from the Canon. Writing quality is good and the author reviews the past chapters which is a another plus point. The author actually know how to use the '' authors thought '' which is rare from my past experience with the other novels. All in all, I give you my support author and keep writing.
deleted my old review, someone told me the author changes the canon and made harry in slytherin so i look it up and its actually true and then change my review, also good job to the author for not following canon specially he interferes and made harry go to slytherin and probably harry wont need to go back to the dursley, and you're right the butterfly effect is already strong it won't be possible to make everything the same as canon
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Good book but I suggest the rewrite by the same author much better plot and character depth. Keep up the good work author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This fanfic is awesome the chapter update are continues and only stop when the author is planning future part of the story. The qaulity of chapter are great with small grammar and punctuation and chapter length arent to short. The character design is well planned out with intentional character flaws and great character progression. The world design is built upon the more you read the story. in my opinion this is one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions out their and highly resommend to read
Rebirth - Yes Wish - one and the MC go for eidetic memory Mc I am reborn and its my Job to help/save canon MC - Yes -------------------------------------
this story is great, very unique, the changes in the timeline due to the MC is realistic, creative, and entertaining. added elements and mysteries fleshed out during the story is also excellent. Only downside is the MCs social life. 79 chapters in and he doesn't have one person who he relies on or speaks honestly to. any and all questions are always answered with lies or half truths and while he's grown as a character, this aspect has changed very little considering the amount of time and chapters written. at this point any drastic changes to this would just seem forced so I doubt this part of him will ever change much. maybe by the end of this story it'd be possible but by then it'll be too little too late. Being this guarded would take years to fix even with added events to spark change. other than this story is awesome. keep it up.
this is a great HP FF the author is really talented and this book is a good whetstone for him to brush up on his weak points personally I think he needs to pay a little more attention to background characters just an inch not a mile as is they only get shown when it directly ties in to the mc(I actually forgot his Griffindor friend's name and that he even had one besides Hermione). Keep up the good work hope to see an original from you one day
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I love how the MC didn't go full wuxia and he actually acknowledges his mistakes and shortcomings. This is a very enjoyable story. Great job!
The main thing I disliked about this so far was that there wasn't more to read. If what's written in the synopsis interests you, I don't think there's any reason you shouldn't want to pick up this great read.
Hey guys the author here. Thought I should give a quick note about this fanfic. I'd like you all to understand before reading that this is the first story I've ever truly written properly. With that, there will be errors and mistakes at times and you all need to understand that before going into read it. I'm sure there's a million better ways to do certain things however I was only ever planning on writing this as something to occupy my spare time, next thing I know im climbing the power/collection rankings and I have a decent amount of people commenting each chapter. I'm grateful for all the comments and reviews so far and do take criticism to heart in order to improve myself but if you expect perfection, go read another novel. Some great novels HP novels I can recommend are The rise of the protector and I'm Voldemort. Thanks! :)