摘要
Atlas was just a seemingly regular 22-year-old college student with occasionally wacky dreams. In a twist of cosmic "bullsh*t," the remnants of a powerful Void-Scar, and the fiddling of an Entity with too much free time, he gets thrust into the Alpha world of Sellene. Now reincarnated as a [SPOILER] [REDACTED], one of the mysterious Arkien species, Atlas must navigate a life filled with loyalty and betrayal, swords and spears, and divine interests. As he unravels the truth behind his strange new world, his [Void Corruption] and The Legendary 'Great Path,' he faces even greater mysteries: "What truly brought about the fall of Velathra? Why do these three lil' bandits keep following me?!" What lie in the shadows that speak at night? How will the gods react to the [VOID]? And what is his role in the unfolding chaos?
Follow Atlas on his journey through a world where ancient beings play with fate, where kingdoms rise and fall, and where comedy meets danger in equal measure. As he builds alliances, uncovers hidden secrets, and discovers his destiny while bringing others with him, one thing is certain—this adventure will change him, and the world, forever, unless he changes them first, that is.
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Hello, this is my attempt at writing a story that has haunted my dreams for ages. It’s set in a vibrant fantasy world full of gods, magic, beasts, and monsters, and a bit of humor. Expect kingdom and faction-building elements to pop up pretty quick, along with twists you won’t see coming. While I haven’t yet decided on romance, this story will never have harem. Ever.
Thank you for taking the time to read this and my story, it means the world to me. If you like it enough, consider adding it to your library/collections and leaving a review or commenting your favorite quips.
Now, come brothers and sisters, let us sally forth into the great unknown, leg to leg!
"Eh? Why do you only have two?"
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Below is a character art of a (hopefully soon) fan-favorite character, at least I am one of their fans. The image is considered their armored form, but the main purpose of my sharing it is because the BODY-FORM is what Atlas and the other two characters after chapter 4 look like. Take a look:
https://ibb.co/qdCP2nc
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Ridiculous. Just read it, if you’re monster evo fan like me, it has mutation system in it, so we have good food coming. Lore and world building is even more crazier though. Author please just write, stop living and write more chapters for me or maybe I consider options you don’t really like!
Hello everyone, I am the author of "The Primordian," Aeys. The following is a shameless author self-review, more akin to my thoughts on the story and what to expect going forward. First, thank you for checking out my story and for reading this review, the synopsis, or even just stopping by. I’m not sure how long "The Primordian" will stay online, but for the near future, this journey will be shared here as well. I'm not sure what the future of my posting holds, but it will never be hard to find. At least for the significant future, as I aim to properly do this beautiful universe of my dreams the justice it deserves, you should expect regular updates every 1-2 days, which may reduce to 2-3 days as the first arc of the story begins to rear its head. I don’t want to go too in-depth with what to expect because I don’t want to spoil anything, but I’ll start by saying that the first three chapters were originally one 9000-word chapter. These three chapters are an emotional rollercoaster for multiple characters who are very dear to my heart. As such, they won’t be edited, shortened, or cut in any way that removes important aspects of their interactions. In short: please bear with a slightly longer (more words, yay!) and deeper first few chapters. As for the rest of the story, I intend for it to follow the tone set by the first three chapters. Expect a more light hearted and easily digested tone, while the overarching concepts and world of the [Fold] are quite a bit darker. I don’t love tragedies, since I’m kind of a big baby, but in the end, only Arkeus might know what the future holds. The [Fold] is a beautiful but dangerous place, and the future seems grim, so buckle up and tuck in your legs—prepare for a bumpy ride. Also, consider wearing a helmet, you're going to need one if you don't want to be caught in the System's cross-fire. Kingdom building will be introduced quickly, with loyalty and the relationships between various Arkien species and allied races as a major theme across different arcs. There will always be humor where Atlas is involved—it’s the only way he knows how to deal with things, at least for now. There are quirky and funny characters on the way, darker and more sinister ones as well, but at the end of the day, this is supposed to be an adventure, so I won’t spoil where our map leads us. Romance is something I’m deeply considering. Maybe because of my upbringing, it’s a very important and meaningful concept to me. I don’t believe many web novels on this platform depict romance in a respectful way. A ton of s*x scenes does not equate to romance. That is not romance. It’s something you read near paper towels and don’t talk about. Romance is about genuine emotional connection, trust, and growth. It’s much deeper as a concept and harder to convey, but as I said, I’m heavily considering it. There are already a few characters whose romantic endeavors I support, so we’ll have to see. As for tropes and clichés? I don’t really care whether I use them or not, but Atlas definitely does. If I write one egregious enough, I won't escape it without being called a "dumb*ss of properly cosmic proportions." I’d stop him if I could, but unfortunately, his sass is part of the deal. This story is written with a far more overarching mystery behind it. One that definitely can not be solved by the minds of only those in this novel alone. Thus, I'm not even going to try. I have a universe in my mind, these are only some of my favorite characters that take place in it. Thank you for reading, and thank you for stopping by. Stay healthy, and feel free to ask any questions you might have. I’ll answer any that I can. And before you ask: No. There will never be a harem in my stories, at least not for any protagonist. Unless I get struck by lightning and cursed by the Dorito-Trio, don’t expect a harem. Ever. Thanks, and have a great day! — Aeys, or to some of my family, Grid.