/ Anime & Comics / The Vasto of White (VoW)
摘要
One's fate is not decided by chance, but by choice. A hero will rise from the desolate sands of Hueco Mundo.
(A story about Shirou becoming a Vasto Lorde)
Well, after finding out that this story was already getting published here by another user, I decided to just make an account and just publish it all.
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Side note, I have no idea how to format properly on this website. I couldn't find an Italics button or bold button, so if anyone knows, please send a message!
P a treon. com (slash) Parcasious
I do not own Fate or Bleach.
-Parcasious
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Gave me Fing chills, Dont know a lot about bleach only first arc, but this story didnt follow it hope author hasnt dropped finished on a cliff hope it is picked up one day
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YOU'RE HEEEERE. HHAHAHA I HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY. One of my fav fate crossover along A demon lord's hero. Read it and I promise you wont feel regret :))
Writing Quality 5 - is great and readable and little mistakes Stability of Updates 3 - been following this in FF net, so i know how fast the updates are and its average for a fanfic Story Development 3 - im biased against this and i like it but gave it a low rating which ill explain below Character Design 3- which is a good score for a fanfic, cause it is a FAN fic World Background 5 - biased because i love it when an mc in another story goes to a different world and systems mix up ok.. first of all this aint a fanfic for everyone, as to truly enjoy this you really really need to know the source materials.. i keep getting triggered by the comment section because i know the main characters background fairly well and seeing people just assuming the worse of him pisses me off... which is understandable, i like Shirou as a character but i love Counter Guardian Emiya much much more....seeing shirous actions without understanding his backstory will make him look Stupid... which he is, cause at times even i feel frustrated about him, which goes to show how good of a character he really is.. overall this is a good read
Its shirou alright, but theres this thing thats been bugging my mind, shouldnt the fragments disappear afterward?
personally didnt want to read past around 50% of the novel but it was great. written very well, story is nice. i just really dislike the idealism of the MC. never liked shirou as a character, too unrealistic. he might as well be called jesus
best book I have ever read. it made me cry on multiple occasions. the only thing I think needs work is the length of the fights.
I love this story, I remember reading it 5 years ago, but it only had 30 chapters (I think), and the last uptade was a long time, so I assumed it was abandoned. Imagine my surprise when I discovered it was not abandoned but was even finished. You will not regret giving this story a chance. The writing is perfect.
One of my favorite fanfics without a doubt. I love how he develops the characters, although he didn't develop all of them, the ones he did develop were great.
One of the greatest bleach fanfic i have read you should read this it's great it's amazing you should read it all i have to say
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one of if not the best fanfiction I have read in a while. The characters are balanced and the interactions between said characters don't feel forced like most fanfictions (mine included).
really good novel something different from freaking soul society and soul reapers[img=recommend]........................................................................
the grammar is very good, the stability is not great I don't know if the author continues to write or stops, however the chapters are long enough, I don't like the development very much because being someone who has read bleach I find many errors on both the behavior of the empty spaces as well as how the power increases, the personalities and the various levels of power are also different and I don't like it very much, however it is developed well. mc I don't really like his personality, his ideals and how he expresses himself. the world background is bleach 4 stars
Made a mistake, I’ve seen a lot of plagerising that I assumed you weren’t the OG author. Lol that’s embarrassing for me. I really loved reading it on fanfiction .net so I got a little upset at thinking it was being plagerised (someone tried to copy this story before). I do recommend this story for readers who are looking for a nice crossover story, it’s a very interesting story. Also thanks to the person who pointed out that I mistook this for another copied work.