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personally didnt want to read past around 50% of the novel but it was great. written very well, story is nice. i just really dislike the idealism of the MC. never liked shirou as a character, too unrealistic. he might as well be called jesus
best book I have ever read. it made me cry on multiple occasions. the only thing I think needs work is the length of the fights.
I love this story, I remember reading it 5 years ago, but it only had 30 chapters (I think), and the last uptade was a long time, so I assumed it was abandoned. Imagine my surprise when I discovered it was not abandoned but was even finished. You will not regret giving this story a chance. The writing is perfect.
One of my favorite fanfics without a doubt. I love how he develops the characters, although he didn't develop all of them, the ones he did develop were great.
One of the greatest bleach fanfic i have read you should read this it's great it's amazing you should read it all i have to say
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one of if not the best fanfiction I have read in a while. The characters are balanced and the interactions between said characters don't feel forced like most fanfictions (mine included).
really good novel something different from freaking soul society and soul reapers[img=recommend]........................................................................
the grammar is very good, the stability is not great I don't know if the author continues to write or stops, however the chapters are long enough, I don't like the development very much because being someone who has read bleach I find many errors on both the behavior of the empty spaces as well as how the power increases, the personalities and the various levels of power are also different and I don't like it very much, however it is developed well. mc I don't really like his personality, his ideals and how he expresses himself. the world background is bleach 4 stars
si je devais décrire cette œuvre, je dirais un chef d'œuvre, l'histoire est bien développé, la personnalité des personnage tend à suivre de l'œuvre original, l'intrigue est bien là présent
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Gave me Fing chills, Dont know a lot about bleach only first arc, but this story didnt follow it hope author hasnt dropped finished on a cliff hope it is picked up one day
ALL I can say is that this novel deserves respect, almost made me rethink why the hollow really howls at the moon. makes me feel the loneliness coming from this novel. The novel deserves utmost respect didn't want to finish it cause I won't like how it ends.
If only you would write more of this and continue. It was one of my favorite Bleach fanfics.
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Hello, the fanfiction.net has more chapters there ! spoiler : Coyote Gingerback is back !
Sad to see not be updated in a long time so much left hanging and I hope this story is given a worthwhile update it’s such a great heartfelt story.
Writing Quality 5 - is great and readable and little mistakes Stability of Updates 3 - been following this in FF net, so i know how fast the updates are and its average for a fanfic Story Development 3 - im biased against this and i like it but gave it a low rating which ill explain below Character Design 3- which is a good score for a fanfic, cause it is a FAN fic World Background 5 - biased because i love it when an mc in another story goes to a different world and systems mix up ok.. first of all this aint a fanfic for everyone, as to truly enjoy this you really really need to know the source materials.. i keep getting triggered by the comment section because i know the main characters background fairly well and seeing people just assuming the worse of him pisses me off... which is understandable, i like Shirou as a character but i love Counter Guardian Emiya much much more....seeing shirous actions without understanding his backstory will make him look Stupid... which he is, cause at times even i feel frustrated about him, which goes to show how good of a character he really is.. overall this is a good read
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well it's my personal review,One of the best writing fanfiction’s I’ve read ever.. i hope you give up on this gem;)...............................................................................................
i already read this story before in fanfiction.net and decide to save this story in my gallery. This story was really amazing that i would love to give it five star :))
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Its shirou alright, but theres this thing thats been bugging my mind, shouldnt the fragments disappear afterward?
personally didnt want to read past around 50% of the novel but it was great. written very well, story is nice. i just really dislike the idealism of the MC. never liked shirou as a character, too unrealistic. he might as well be called jesus
best book I have ever read. it made me cry on multiple occasions. the only thing I think needs work is the length of the fights.
I love this story, I remember reading it 5 years ago, but it only had 30 chapters (I think), and the last uptade was a long time, so I assumed it was abandoned. Imagine my surprise when I discovered it was not abandoned but was even finished. You will not regret giving this story a chance. The writing is perfect.
One of my favorite fanfics without a doubt. I love how he develops the characters, although he didn't develop all of them, the ones he did develop were great.
One of the greatest bleach fanfic i have read you should read this it's great it's amazing you should read it all i have to say
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one of if not the best fanfiction I have read in a while. The characters are balanced and the interactions between said characters don't feel forced like most fanfictions (mine included).
really good novel something different from freaking soul society and soul reapers[img=recommend]........................................................................
the grammar is very good, the stability is not great I don't know if the author continues to write or stops, however the chapters are long enough, I don't like the development very much because being someone who has read bleach I find many errors on both the behavior of the empty spaces as well as how the power increases, the personalities and the various levels of power are also different and I don't like it very much, however it is developed well. mc I don't really like his personality, his ideals and how he expresses himself. the world background is bleach 4 stars
si je devais décrire cette œuvre, je dirais un chef d'œuvre, l'histoire est bien développé, la personnalité des personnage tend à suivre de l'œuvre original, l'intrigue est bien là présent
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Hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Gave me Fing chills, Dont know a lot about bleach only first arc, but this story didnt follow it hope author hasnt dropped finished on a cliff hope it is picked up one day
ALL I can say is that this novel deserves respect, almost made me rethink why the hollow really howls at the moon. makes me feel the loneliness coming from this novel. The novel deserves utmost respect didn't want to finish it cause I won't like how it ends.
If only you would write more of this and continue. It was one of my favorite Bleach fanfics.
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Hello, the fanfiction.net has more chapters there ! spoiler : Coyote Gingerback is back !
Sad to see not be updated in a long time so much left hanging and I hope this story is given a worthwhile update it’s such a great heartfelt story.
Writing Quality 5 - is great and readable and little mistakes Stability of Updates 3 - been following this in FF net, so i know how fast the updates are and its average for a fanfic Story Development 3 - im biased against this and i like it but gave it a low rating which ill explain below Character Design 3- which is a good score for a fanfic, cause it is a FAN fic World Background 5 - biased because i love it when an mc in another story goes to a different world and systems mix up ok.. first of all this aint a fanfic for everyone, as to truly enjoy this you really really need to know the source materials.. i keep getting triggered by the comment section because i know the main characters background fairly well and seeing people just assuming the worse of him pisses me off... which is understandable, i like Shirou as a character but i love Counter Guardian Emiya much much more....seeing shirous actions without understanding his backstory will make him look Stupid... which he is, cause at times even i feel frustrated about him, which goes to show how good of a character he really is.. overall this is a good read
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well it's my personal review,One of the best writing fanfiction’s I’ve read ever.. i hope you give up on this gem;)...............................................................................................
i already read this story before in fanfiction.net and decide to save this story in my gallery. This story was really amazing that i would love to give it five star :))
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Its shirou alright, but theres this thing thats been bugging my mind, shouldnt the fragments disappear afterward?