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摘要
The legendary journey of The Trash Ascendant follows Max who is an ordinary orphan, but one day he had had enough of bullying and planned his vengeance by destroying his entire city on graduation day. Now reborn thank to the deal with the goddess where he will live his life to his fullest.
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I don't want to be rude but, I cant help but say the grammar isn't of the best quality, but all in all, the story has a decent flow, and we can see how each character voices their thoughts and opinions quite nicely, thank you Author San!
Overall a nice story In my opinion but I think you are lacking in writing in grammar and especially your updates are quite unstable I think you should increase the rate of production or else the reader would not read it.
First time seeing such a unique approach in writing including the plot. Its certainly interesting and I hope your writing style would change a bit because it feels like a short story. Like past passive and active for example. GG
Everything is a 5 out of 5. Just amazing story line that Carries everything. This is a great parody book. Love it and hope you pick it back up in the future. I’m giving you 5 stars for update stability as you were updating fine before you began a break
I might rate myself 2 Star cause I know that my grass and writing absolute terrible and especially the stability of updates which would be one star cause I write as a hobbies so reader pls bear my terrible grammar ok.