摘要
One man tired of his boring life, passed away at a predetermined age. A goddess took pity on his poor life and decided to give him a second chance. But things might be more than they seem at first glance. Will our MC live out a new, exciting life? Or will it be just as boring as the last? Find out in the next episo.... I mean, find out by reading now!
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Hey everyone, author here, I am alive and back. I decided to rewrite a good majority of the chapters to provide more details and add a bit of life to the story. I hope you all enjoy!
English IS IN FACT My native language, so if you see spelling errors, let me know through comments because I will fix them.
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Writing quality is really good. And the updates are frequent even if the chapters are short. the concept was interesting but the story got downhill fast. The Characterdesign wasnt very good and then more got added in a random way without a lot of development. Then even children got added with adoption without consent of mc. But continue writing, the english quality is good and the rest is up for preferences or experience
揭示劇透
please come back I miss this so much I've been waiting since you stopped I think your book is amazing I love all the characters and the storyline I hope you come back soon