2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Writing quality is really good. And the updates are frequent even if the chapters are short. the concept was interesting but the story got downhill fast. The Characterdesign wasnt very good and then more got added in a random way without a lot of development. Then even children got added with adoption without consent of mc. But continue writing, the english quality is good and the rest is up for preferences or experience
揭示劇透
please come back I miss this so much I've been waiting since you stopped I think your book is amazing I love all the characters and the storyline I hope you come back soon
Writing quality is really good. And the updates are frequent even if the chapters are short. the concept was interesting but the story got downhill fast. The Characterdesign wasnt very good and then more got added in a random way without a lot of development. Then even children got added with adoption without consent of mc. But continue writing, the english quality is good and the rest is up for preferences or experience
揭示劇透
please come back I miss this so much I've been waiting since you stopped I think your book is amazing I love all the characters and the storyline I hope you come back soon