摘要
"A Villain is just someone whom the Hero failed to save at the end."
[WSA ENTRY 2024]
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'Huh, I recognize this window.' A boy muttered staring at the interface in front of him.
After being shot to death because of helping an old man, a teenager is brought to life by the Goddess of the Void, Zephyra.
He is given the choice to reincarnate and kill the hero after he annihilates the Ghouls in the world of the very novel he loves.
Torn between the choice to transmigrate or follow the flow of life and death, the boy chooses to take his second chance at life along with the power that is granted as a gift to him by the Goddess.
As he traverses the world in the new body of Amon Ashford - a character who was never supposed to exist and his past unknown-, he has to use his knowledge of the future to the best of his ability.
Will he follow the Goddess's orders or will he carve his own path?
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(READ CONCLUSION IN THE END FOR TL;DR)Seeing as how there is 40 chapters already, I thought it was about time for me to write a proper review... definitely wasn't threatened into writing this review. As always, let's start with the writing quality. The writing style of the author has gone through a dramatic change from her previous work, CDO. In CDO, the writing quality was one of the major problems, hence why I was worried about this novel starting out. However, defying all expectations, was the author with her brand new writing style. The writing style and quality is a fresh take in contrary with the over-descriptive chat gpt ahh style you can see in novels these days. Short, simple paras that convey what they need to. There are some mistakes here and there, yes. But they are too far and few to matter. Update Stability. IDK man, I want 10 chapters daily, but since the author agreed to upload one chapter every 12 hours plus extra chapters I will let her go for now. Story Development. The story of the novel is simple. Without spoiling much, the MC has to kill the OG MC of the novel, but only after reaching the end. Well it is obviously more complicated than that but that's the gist of it. From what we have seen so far, the story has had and will have more intricate thematic developments. Character Design. Without a doubt, one of the strong point of this novel. We haven't seen much of all the characters in the main cast just yet, but from the characters we have seen so far, all are unique and engaging. The best one is of course, Zephyra. If you are wondering you the fml is then, it's Zephyra. The author will say there are 3 love interests(no harem) and it has not been decided yet but screw that. I decided for her. No, I DECLARED IT. If Zephyra isn't the fml, then blood will run through the streets like water during a flood. Not a single drop of mine. World Background. It's fascinating. A world, neither futuristic, nor medieval-like, but rather, a blend of both. We haven't seen much of the world so far as the novel is only starting out, but I can tell without a doubt that this will shape to be one of, if not the best aspect of this novel. Another detail of this novel I would like to discuss is the power system. It's similar, yet different from the conventional power systems. And I can sense the potential it wields. Imagine a fantasy novel where each character possesses a power so distinct and captivating that it leaves readers spellbound. From the mystic ability to copy others' powers for a short while, an ability with so much limitations, to the abilities of manipulating blood, void and space alike. From what we have been shown there is also a crystal, energy and other interesting elements that aren't explored much on WNs. What makes this novel truly remarkable is how these unique powers intertwine with the plot, driving the story forward with unexpected twists and turns. CONCLUSION: In conclusion, TIGER(No, I ain't calling it TIGRAE or whatever) is a paramount of fantasy literature that excels in every aspect of the trade. With its intricately woven power system, immersive world-building, compelling characters, and masterful writing style, this novel sets a new standard for the genre. Not to mention, the frequent update rate. Truly, a masterpiece in the making. But would it be made into one? The answer to such a question shall be found in the journey of reading.
An excerpt from someone I know, "THIS WILL REACH THE PEAK". As one of the moderators, and one of the people who helped author plan this book, I shall give a review. I will start off by stating, yes "stating", that the FML is none other than "Changing Star" Nephis. So anyone, especially that other reader over there, saying the FML is someone else is completely wrong. Anyway, on to the review, this book definitely has POTENTIAL. Compared to the author's other book, the plot in this novel completely detracted from the complexities of CDO or, "Coming Down on Olympiad". Author has switched up his writing style, making this novel an easy read. You can surmise from this review if you plan on criticizing the less-descriptive writing, and more straight to the point. If that isn't for you, then no need to drop a 1 star review about it. (Totally didn't happen to me.) To talk about the novel, just like most novels in this platform, it circulates around the academy genre, but it's still written interestingly, so as to not bore the readers. Our MC is none other than Choso from JJK with his Blood Cursed Technique, with a mix of Amon Moretti from LOTM of the Mysteries. There's not much to say about the story development since the novel is still starting out, but as I stated, there is POTENTIAL. Update stability wise, do not fret since the author isn't named "Crypthh", so that leaves a lot to be desired. To increase my wordcount, I'll be taking an excerpt from MYSELF: Gomen, Amanai. I’m not even angry over you right now. I bear no grudge against anyone. It’s just that the world feels so, so wonderful right now. Throughout Heaven and Earth, I alone am the honored one.
As the first reader of this novel and an avid reader of the author's other novel, I felt it my right and duty to make the first review. For-
The novel's about a lad named Amon who died while trying to protect an old man. He left his brother behind and met a goddess who proceeded to send him in a novel. To be honest, this novel does have some potential. While the main character behaves weird often and starts crying in front of random people, his character is fine when he's normal. While his relationship with this one girl is progressing kinda fast, and the author doesn't exactly know how to write proper conversations between a guy and girl, down the road he could probably fix it. There's another character introduced that's actually a really small kid. Doesn't really feel like she acts her own age but this is something the author did even in his previous novel so we have no choice but to endure. The fights are detailed enough so that's a plus point. All the characters are supposed to have different personalities which will hopefully be fleshed out well in the future. Updates are regular until now and the world background seems quite big given how there's a lot of ranks and then gods too. There's a connection between our mc and the original protagonist of the novel which turns out into a friendly relationship. Kinda hope to see them mingle well like Ben and Kevin. Overall, I'd rate this novel a 3.8/5 as of now. Will probably change my rating later on. Recommend you guys to read this as you clearly don't have anything else to do, given how you read this long Ahh review.
Author, the story development and world building are quite good. This is just a suggestion but if you apply it to the story then the vastness of power structure of characters will increase. this will increase interest & anticipation of the readers . "<Suggestions>" 1) You should add more elements to the story like [Force, magnetism, curse, metal, wood, mass, structure manipulation (means atom manipulation), heat, light, radiation, poison, corruption]. 2) Add some special abilities to other characters like {summoning / mind control / physical transformation} etc. 3) [Force] / [Mass] can also be a called Reality Element. Force can also obtain through "ELEMENT INTEGRATION" of [Mass + Gravity] element. If you saw this review, then I want to thank you for writing such a good novel.👍🏻
I've read many novels here, and I can already see that the author has a good and well-refined writing style, neither too complicated nor weak. He knows how to flesh out scenes without making them confusing for the readers. It's simple and easy. I've only read up to ch. 20 and can already tell this novel has huge POTENTIAL. Don't drop it give it a chance. You definitely won't regret it.
As the sole gifter of this novel, as of now, I feel like I have a responsibility to drop a review! The book pulls out an kazuma outta nowhere with a delusional mc yet it keeps on engaging you with different twists till this point. Really enjoying the actions and character interactions!! Keep up the good work, Tsukasa!
one of the best novel on extra troupe take, though i am writing when the story is still in early phase but the potential this novel got is insane. well developed characters, great world building, unique prose. if you like authors pov or Extra's descent then believe me you gonna love it!. keep Cooking author, don't drop this novel pls!
i honestly like it in the first few chapters, but now I don't know. [img=Sigh]
I'm gonna be completely honest here, this book has POTENTIAL! . There were barely any flaws, maybe one or two mistakes but overall it's great. The structure of the writing was clear and concise . A definite 5 stars from me.
The author started another story. Why is everyone starting a new novel. Well it's good. Very good. I can vouch for the author. Keep writing. (Note: I don't know what the hell I'm writing. Looks like my brain injury is acting up)
leaving this review to brag that I'm second, will leave another once there are more chapters available
how hard it is for me to read chapters of this novel, only 34 chapters but I couldn't take it anymore, it seems that the author takes the character's brain away in several situations, like the clearest one, the one about blood, he forgives himself for the first use by cutting himself but then he was as stupid as himself, he didn't prepare any of that, not even after days or visiting the black market, ignorance with Daniel's obvious attention to his actions, world, characters and interesting story although a bit of a copy of others but it doesn't matter much as long as it's something good, but in my case I couldn't stand those little things so obvious, stressful
only on like the fourth chapter, and I've already laughed more than I think I should have. I can tell it's going to be a five-star read.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
I'm writing this review as of chapter 30 and I'm not sure how well it holds up in the future,but so far from what I've seen this novel holds almost endless amount of potential to one day become one of the greats of the platform and even if it doesn't its sure to scratch the itch that most of us fantasy readers have had after TAPOV and TNE. But now getting into the actual review here's what I would want anyone getting into the novel to take note of. 1.The setting of this novel is based on the standard academy setting and while some people may find it generic, I would argue that it allows most of us to easily understand the setting and get accustomed since this setting is something most of us are already familiar with and besides I'm sure the author has many plans to expand the world building of the novel gradually. 2.As for the plot of the novel the mc is transmigrated into a new world witht a mission to kill the protagonist however, diverting expectations the goddess who had assigned this mission actually gets forced into the new world with him full konosuba style and so far I have been enjoying the dynamic between MC and her and I hope to see more of it in the future. 3.Unlike the other novels in this genre where MC gets antagonized for no reason or prefers to completely avoid the main cast, in this one MC is best friends with the protagonist and the main cast and so far all the characters have been well written and fleshed out. In fact one of my favorite parts of this novel is the main trio of Amon, Michael and Ren all three of them have amazing chemistry together and its always a blast to see them interact with each other. 4 If for some reason you're still not convinced the author also has a very good upload schedule of 2 or more chapters daily and even the grammar and writing style in this novel is impeccable. So what are you waiting for? go read the novel and encourage the author with positive comments and powe stones. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is probably my first time ever reviewing , usually I'd never review any novels and read it. but this one deserves it. personally i loved authors pov and Extras descent. well...you can say i like novell with mc as Extra troupe. so this review will be a little based so bear with it. thought at the beginning i thought this was one of authors pov and novel Extras cheap off. but i couldn't be more wrong. mainly because i haven't read author's last work yet and thought the author is some newbie who will just copy authors pov nd novel Extra's plot but no, this one got an original plot, great world building, realistic characters. bet we all can relate with amon at some point in the story. I'd definitely recommend it to everyone. read it rn.
Being an author on WN, you can never get rid of your shamelessness. So here is another shameless 5 star review for my novel! Anyways, this is my second book and my first take on the extra genre, so I hope you guys can support me throughout this journey. Please treat this review as a Q/A section and I'll try my best to answer your questions. Thank you.