/ Fantasy / The Sword & The Arrow
摘要
Skye never knew what kind of adventure she would get in when her Father was taken from their home. Skye, Issac, and William must travel to a far off land to find the golden pocket watch that belonged to Skye's late mother and save her Father. In this multi-personal point of view story, you will experience adventure, action, and maybe some romance.
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寫檢討
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The story has a slow start so far and nothing within the first few chapter makes me care for the characters so far. I feel a bit lost in the plot as events seen to happen but it's hard to tell why or when. Overall, it seems too much is happening but not much to care for.
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