/ Anime & Comics / the straw-hats thief (dropped)
摘要
follows the life of Alex D Cara a young girl in search of riches and food, as she travels with the straw hat crew.
first time writing want to see if I’m any good at it.
Criticism and comments are much wanted as it let me know what I can improve on going forward and let me fix mistakes I made in previous
Cover photo not mine found on Pinterest by if original creator wants me to remove it let me know in comments or something
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have romance ???? If so who will the MC be with ???? -----------------;;;;---------------------------------------------;;;;---------------------------------------------;;;;---------------------------------------------;;;;---------------------------------------------;;;;---------------------------------------------;;;;---------------------------------------------;;;;----------------------------
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Very good and it's interesting and hope to see more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The stories idea is pretty good even though I wish Alex did more(lazy cat). Updates have been regularly released at least 1 a day not bad but may have a burnout if not careful. Overall I believe this is a pretty decent story in the works. RobinXAlex!
good ideas but you're skiping ahead way too much