/ Fantasy / The Refiner System In Cultivation World
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A guy from earth somehow died while playing a virtual reality game and woke up in a cultivation world.
His cheat was a unique system and he totally used his cheat for his own good .
Well then the story of joining a sect , becoming stronger and sometimes sex.. that's it .
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A few chapters are concerning but after that it's all smooth sailing 🤞👈👈👈👈👈🤸👈👈👈👈🤸🤸🤸🤸🤸🤸👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈👈🌋🌋🌋
MC is rubbish, he has no good characteristics, he treats his father like rubbish, he likes a girl but simply gives up easily because she is "weak" without talent, he ALWAYS fears the strong and KILLS the weak, in this work MC has no friends, no girlfriends and even his family he treats like trash (for no reason), there are NO interesting characters in the work in 60 chapters, the only good thing is that he gets strong fast, I doubt that here will be a harem, a pathetic character like this MC should shit in his pants if he talks to a woman, at most the author will take some woman with a super talent removed from the ass to be his wife and this loser does not become a virgin
Nice! This is really good and author makes a good work and only has a small mistakes. I suggest that the author put him into tribulations and don't just sail high smoothly
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great sustem novel doesn't make him too op and its good enough for him to rely on it way better than all the other cliches just give it a try and i doubt you will stop reading
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nice story. super fast updates. I suggest you have someone edit your novels to make it more presentable. . thank .
Good English and way to write it down for me. Story is a bit fast paced, with Mc kind of feel like disconnected.... MC have low talent but also high potential, a bit contradiction there but I don't care much.. World, kind of big-ish.... But he didn't explore it...
I love a good crafting/system book, sadly this isn’t one of them. 1st issue is between the end of chapter 1 and the beginning of chapter 2 feels like we missed a chapter. 2nd and worst issue is the author keeps forgetting that conversations need to have “ around them
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will there be r-18 in this novel? ................................................................ .........................................
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Nice please don't drop!!.. Nice please don't drop!!..Nice please don't drop!!..Nice please don't drop!!..Nice please don't drop!!..Nice please don't drop!!..
good stuff good cheat simple story simp MC😊 but i like stories like these, Normal cultivation stories are too boring compared to this gem😃
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HAREM? NOT STARTED YET #TeamHarem