摘要
Alfred, a history teacher on Earth is suddenly thrown into the body of Prince Alfred Lindonfall, the twelve-year-old prince and heir to the throne of the Kingdom of Ammar. With the abrupt death of his father, the responsibility to rule a Kingdom falls on his shoulders. Having to navigate a medieval court and world, his journey to creating an empire and putting his knowledge into practice sees him become a man he never knew he could be, being shaped by the new world and unique circumstances he faces.
There are many characters who get a lot of focus and can be called a lead in their own right, but I won't put their character descriptions in as it would be too much of a spoiler for chapters in future.
A rough map of the local realm: pls don't laugh I know it's bad.
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/1064890274397856571/
If unable to see its also in the first chapter comments now.
Cover Art: not mine so here is the credit.
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/351912463658203/
標籤
-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
20 chapters in so far and I have to say I’m surprised this dosent have more traction. This is actually pretty well written so far and im looking foward to seeing it continue on a good path. I’d recommend you give it a try it has a decent pace for the goal of the main plot and things don’t seem to be stagnant. Examples being authors who write storys where so much happens in a few days. I will update my review when I read more to warn you of any danger lol. <3
This is a great story. Although it's still at the beginning, I can already see a lot of potential in it. Some qualities I've identified are: It has chapters every day, there are hardly any grammatical errors, the plot is well thought out and, best of all, the characters aren't stupid. I also have a couple of criticisms: the beginning of the story is too rushed and the lack of reaction from the church of that world when it finds out about someone who has revived and claims to have known God. (The two problems I mentioned could be solved with extra chapters focused on world-building). (I'd like to say that I'm enjoying the story and wish it success.)
Hi everybody the author here. I'm putting this here to tell everyone that reads to please leave feedback to my writing as I know new writer can have many flaws. Any criticism is appreciated and valued. if you wish to see a map of the local realm then just check the synopsis and look at the Pinterest link. this is also a shamless review but I think 5he story is very good and can goo many way :)