The Potato God Of Time And Space

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PervyHermit

ARE YOU GONNA DROP THIS ONE TOO???.... DUDE, PLEASE STOP RUINING THE SITE.... (IT'S NOT YOUR GRAMMAR, IT'S THE ATTITUDE)!!! [we dont need regular updates, but dropping them in middle of nowhere is *********** @#$@$$$#@!!!!]

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Wum8oRum8o

To be honest, I get that you are trying to make a story full of comedy about the growing cheat known as the potato god, but can you make it have a bit more sense. Usually, when a being is born, it is curious about its surroundings as It will slowly get smarter as time passes. But you suddenly jump to terms such as that only a ******** area wee-a-boo would say and this becomes unfitting for the situation. I do not mind if you don't clarify why the potato has been those thoughts later on but please keep in mind about making the novel Have more sense please.

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PotatoGodofTime

Author here...deep deep deep ok me bad grammar and English but hope you all enjoy my potato thing novel...pls...140 words so one potato combines with potato mmm...2 potato hahaha moooo I milk my cows to extreme power levels IDK wit I'm saying duck me...

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Everything_Forever

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potatodaoist

Oh senior daoist, this junior greets your excellency...we must spread the dao of potato to entire multiverse. The senior's attempt at this monumental task is praiseworthy but unfortunately lacking. I urge the fellow daoist to reconsider your approach to his method. The difference between your comprehension in the dao of potato to mine in difference is heaven and earth. So please enlighten these uncultured folks with your dao. Thank you..😋😛😝😜🤪

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DaoNotExist

This is not potato, i known you, you are not any potato, You are the PoopGod of time and space, i heard that you were initially a female poop but changed your gender to male poop to do yaoi poop things.

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ImmortalBunnyDrago

Pretty good.... so,e Grammerr errors tho but still a new idea well 140140140 dkdkdkdkdkdkkdddkdkkddkkddkkddkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdddd (hdnhdnhnddnhdnhdnhdndnudnudny

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Zhandii

Great idea idc about execution of idea the synopsis -> 3 stars + Title = 5 stars ez 140char140char140char140char140char140char140char140char140char140char

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Dexetron

i'm giving three starts just for the synopsis of the story. ill change it if i like the story. gud luck author may this turnout well! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD