The Pinnacle Of The Supernartural

LV 2

Stiven_Callejas

here is a great suggestion this story is extremely pathetic both the development of the character and the world is boring and meaningless in addition to a morbid humor that is not at all funny and not very entertaining it is as if only the author had made a jumble of ideas with the hope that everything goes well for him in addition to a plot full of cliches such as the typical garbage of hiding his strength and not standing out

LV 4

redgrave

It's been good so far, I've been enjoying it a lot. I think the mark of Cain is a really unique and interesting power. Thanks for the story author. PS. - A personal preference would be if there was an updating auxiliary chapter where there's info on the current revealed abilities of the mark of Cain. and possibly also on the already revealed races & important characters.

LV 1

Arsene_Holmes

I'm not very good at giving reviews, but I believe this story deserves the rating given. The story has been very enjoyable to read, so much so that I find myself smiling while reading. She has a good level of humor, the characters are interesting, the dialogue is captivating, the fights are reasonably written and the world is quite fun. Hope you keep posting!!! Note: I'm not the best at judging fight writing.

LV 4

Rosana_Marques

honestly a good read that i didnt expect at all. might not the best in terms of grammar precision at times and be pretty simple in terms of developement and interactions, but its a good read to just relax and not think to much while doing it. have certainly enjoyed it so far. btw really like mc's realtionship with his father. only minus i would say is that some chapters are really short, but you kinda compensate that with a good amount of releases in a short timespan. keep up the good work 🤜🤛