/ Book&Literature / The Lion Cub (HP SI)
摘要
Harry Potter stumbled through his life because others laid out a carefully planned path and treated Harry as a pawn since he was born. What happens when there is a Harry that refuses to accept fate? What happens when all those carefully laid plans of his enemies and allies alike go up in smoke?
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You can also find the same story in FF if Webnovel format suits you ill. https://m.fanfiction.net/u/13866153/
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Almost a great story, uniquish attempt at a divergence in the story, and an entertaining change of pace. only problem is the author seems to pander to the audience that wants a tool bag MC who should only think about benefits and gains. like this might not be his new reality. Seemingly annoyed by all the main characters. "Ron isn't useful, grangers annoying, Dumbledore is evil." Its like the author wants a decent human being as the MC but keeps listening to the critics to be more evil. its honestly kinda sad. other than that I find the story interesting. hopefully the MC remembers that the friends in the book had unquestionable loyalty for some reason he actually questions them? lol must be an AU?
Was enjoying the story until the author added some random OC “immortal witch” that is somehow Harry’s grandmother. There was no lead up to it lol just randomly “yeah he has some immortal OP grandma”. Ruined the whole story for me because of how random, forced, and pointless it was to add to the story. If the story was worse then I would’ve rated this lower but besides that random addition it was decent.
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I would give you 5 but after fleur and Daphne with Harry cheating arc I lost all the interest in the novel...this novel went from Harry being cunning to lustful kid ..you ruined the book for me at the part...
Oh come on. Need more. Hope lucius and house malfoy doesn't survive miraclously(financially).. .Oh come on. Need more. Hope lucius and house malfoy doesn't survive miraclously(financially).
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1) The quality of the letter is excellent. 2) Stability update - medium. 3) The plot development is bad. The plot changes, but the ratio of the number of chapters to the development of the plot is too large. And because of this, the plot will quickly get bored. 4) The character design is bad. Why doesn't he think about the consequences of his actions. He spends a year on the plot with the tournament of wizards and does not think at all how to develop properly. 5) The background of the world is bad. The same as in other projects.
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Good so far and I can’t wait for more soon!!! Plz make more 🤗🤗🤗🤗😌😁😁😃….….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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very good story and knowing that dumbledore is portrayed as being really a manipulative and conspiratorial guy👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
One of the best HP SI fics Strong smart MC but not ridiculously overpowered Pls update more often Pls dont drop 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
A few hours ago, i rated this novel 1 star because i thought the quality fell in the middle due to some plotpoint. I have to say i was mistaken and not only did it not fell but it got better as the story goes. im really sorry author for judging too quickly, you deserve alot more readers. I'd delete my other comment since it'll negatively affect the rating of this amazing novel.
Out of all of the fanfiction novels I've read on this app this is my favorite one. It is very emotional, catching, thrilling, and addictive to read. I find myself checking everyday to see if it has been updated because I can't wait for the next chapter.
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my guess perenelle flamel. Cant be sure but excited. Take your time author. Loving the story. ......... my guess perenelle flamel. Cant be sure but excited. Take your time author. Loving the story.
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Good chapter. I hope sirius is freed and he sues the ministry and everyone. also good story and chapters. Good chapter. I hope sirius is freed and he sues the ministry and everyone.
揭示劇透 So far good plot and story. excited to read more.. .So far good plot and story. excited to read more.So far good plot and story. excited to read more.
Nicely done. I was looking for an HP fic where Harry acts like a reasonable character but with some rough edges. I found the perfect combo of that in this Harry. Looking forward to future chapters. Good work author-san.
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Very nice seeing another HP SI especialy one with such quality, i am not the best at rating a book or fanfic but i know when i like what i read and this one i had finished late at night. Hope you will continue untill at least 30ch.
Hey Dragon, I know your novels from fanfiction.net and I really like all of them including this one. Hoping you upload more frequently here than there.