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well i think i had to many expectations in regards to this very medioca novel, MC suffers from transmigration sickness this is when he believes that he has the world secrets up his sleeves. symptoms include Irrational fear of being caught as a transmigrators, unbelieveable high Arrogance and a poor me attitude , the way he acts like he had the best life but im pretty sure im more well off than he is. so i dnt knw why wants to go back his body is probably dead.
One of the best I have read so far that incorporates the meaning of fanfiction that has nothing in common with cannon. It gives a fresh perspective of what could happen if you change things and make it your own but also include the characters and environment of cannon
The more I read, the more I get disappointed. Where did this immortal grandma come from? _______________________________________________________________
This novel is good, but it's annoying to read because it's a really slow-paced story. For example, it took 30 chapters for the Triwizard Tournament to be over.
If you love Harry Potter fanfics, love long funny, action pact chapters that keep you entertained from begging to end i highly suggest everyone gives this and any of his other works a try you will not regret it but will be disappointed when you catch up and are craving for more chapters
Great character development ilove how deep and profound the mc is he has problems and isnt perfect unlike most other HP MC where they are perfect and loyal and just the epitome of what a guy should be with only one girl and such. other fanfics while great i mean who doesnt like a op main character but it gets repetitive and boring especially when all they do is hide their powers this piece of work is more realistic in my opinion its a great read and would highly recommend everyone to give it a chance the only issue is i wish there were more chapters
Good novel but I dropped it cause endgame was daphne. Harry x Fleur all the way.
its amazing story, that sometimes forgets that harry is a person reborn, and forgets key information that could shorten the process of lots of things, though am ultimately dropping the story with how poorly they ended the relationship with harry and fleur, would have loved to see it progress more, but harry decided to stay with daphne bc of the connection with her father, he already established and met with his grandma, but stays with her bc of soem guilt trip that she sees him everywhere she looks and loves him, i mean harry did start dating her than fleur snatched him up, but there wasnt any chemistry for me with daphne after halfway through the goblet
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One of the best HP SI fics Strong smart MC but not ridiculously overpowered Pls update more often Pls dont drop 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Ohh this one was really good. The grammar and plot of this fic are one of the best that I've read, my only problem being the weird two-timing that MC was doing with Fleur and Daph. Thankfully it has been resolved, because that one thing made me wanna drop this fic immediately, I'm happy that I stuck around to read till the latest chapter. Everything else is solid and really entertaining to read, SIs being competent is always a plus. The MC sometimes doesn't act his age but that can be attributed to him going through puberty again, all in all it's a 4.4/5 from me. (Why do all the good fics have the lamest names)
overall I love your character I think it's going to be really cool because it does start in his I think it's I haven't really got that far into your book but I think it's his 4th or fifth year I do really wish that it would have been that he would have had a little bit of extra time instead of making it feel like it's really rushed so we could build up to other stuff I really think it would be cool for him to have started in his like last third year close to last so he has all that summer to figure out stuff so I thought that would have been really cool other than that I think the book is really well done
A few hours ago, i rated this novel 1 star because i thought the quality fell in the middle due to some plotpoint. I have to say i was mistaken and not only did it not fell but it got better as the story goes. im really sorry author for judging too quickly, you deserve alot more readers. I'd delete my other comment since it'll negatively affect the rating of this amazing novel.
This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfic. The way author added the content about Harry being the grandson of Perenelle Flamel was fantastic.
This book is awesome. I get bored easily but this book kept me reading and wishing for more.
I would give you 5 but after fleur and Daphne with Harry cheating arc I lost all the interest in the novel...this novel went from Harry being cunning to lustful kid ..you ruined the book for me at the part...
Was enjoying the story until the author added some random OC “immortal witch” that is somehow Harry’s grandmother. There was no lead up to it lol just randomly “yeah he has some immortal OP grandma”. Ruined the whole story for me because of how random, forced, and pointless it was to add to the story. If the story was worse then I would’ve rated this lower but besides that random addition it was decent.
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Out of all of the fanfiction novels I've read on this app this is my favorite one. It is very emotional, catching, thrilling, and addictive to read. I find myself checking everyday to see if it has been updated because I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Oh come on. Need more. Hope lucius and house malfoy doesn't survive miraclously(financially).. .Oh come on. Need more. Hope lucius and house malfoy doesn't survive miraclously(financially).
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my guess perenelle flamel. Cant be sure but excited. Take your time author. Loving the story. ......... my guess perenelle flamel. Cant be sure but excited. Take your time author. Loving the story.
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1) The quality of the letter is excellent. 2) Stability update - medium. 3) The plot development is bad. The plot changes, but the ratio of the number of chapters to the development of the plot is too large. And because of this, the plot will quickly get bored. 4) The character design is bad. Why doesn't he think about the consequences of his actions. He spends a year on the plot with the tournament of wizards and does not think at all how to develop properly. 5) The background of the world is bad. The same as in other projects.
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Almost a great story, uniquish attempt at a divergence in the story, and an entertaining change of pace. only problem is the author seems to pander to the audience that wants a tool bag MC who should only think about benefits and gains. like this might not be his new reality. Seemingly annoyed by all the main characters. "Ron isn't useful, grangers annoying, Dumbledore is evil." Its like the author wants a decent human being as the MC but keeps listening to the critics to be more evil. its honestly kinda sad. other than that I find the story interesting. hopefully the MC remembers that the friends in the book had unquestionable loyalty for some reason he actually questions them? lol must be an AU?
Good chapter. I hope sirius is freed and he sues the ministry and everyone. also good story and chapters. Good chapter. I hope sirius is freed and he sues the ministry and everyone.
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well i think i had to many expectations in regards to this very medioca novel, MC suffers from transmigration sickness this is when he believes that he has the world secrets up his sleeves. symptoms include Irrational fear of being caught as a transmigrators, unbelieveable high Arrogance and a poor me attitude , the way he acts like he had the best life but im pretty sure im more well off than he is. so i dnt knw why wants to go back his body is probably dead.
One of the best I have read so far that incorporates the meaning of fanfiction that has nothing in common with cannon. It gives a fresh perspective of what could happen if you change things and make it your own but also include the characters and environment of cannon
The more I read, the more I get disappointed. Where did this immortal grandma come from? _______________________________________________________________
This novel is good, but it's annoying to read because it's a really slow-paced story. For example, it took 30 chapters for the Triwizard Tournament to be over.
If you love Harry Potter fanfics, love long funny, action pact chapters that keep you entertained from begging to end i highly suggest everyone gives this and any of his other works a try you will not regret it but will be disappointed when you catch up and are craving for more chapters
Great character development ilove how deep and profound the mc is he has problems and isnt perfect unlike most other HP MC where they are perfect and loyal and just the epitome of what a guy should be with only one girl and such. other fanfics while great i mean who doesnt like a op main character but it gets repetitive and boring especially when all they do is hide their powers this piece of work is more realistic in my opinion its a great read and would highly recommend everyone to give it a chance the only issue is i wish there were more chapters
Good novel but I dropped it cause endgame was daphne. Harry x Fleur all the way.
its amazing story, that sometimes forgets that harry is a person reborn, and forgets key information that could shorten the process of lots of things, though am ultimately dropping the story with how poorly they ended the relationship with harry and fleur, would have loved to see it progress more, but harry decided to stay with daphne bc of the connection with her father, he already established and met with his grandma, but stays with her bc of soem guilt trip that she sees him everywhere she looks and loves him, i mean harry did start dating her than fleur snatched him up, but there wasnt any chemistry for me with daphne after halfway through the goblet
揭示劇透 One of the best HP SI fics Strong smart MC but not ridiculously overpowered Pls update more often Pls dont drop 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Ohh this one was really good. The grammar and plot of this fic are one of the best that I've read, my only problem being the weird two-timing that MC was doing with Fleur and Daph. Thankfully it has been resolved, because that one thing made me wanna drop this fic immediately, I'm happy that I stuck around to read till the latest chapter. Everything else is solid and really entertaining to read, SIs being competent is always a plus. The MC sometimes doesn't act his age but that can be attributed to him going through puberty again, all in all it's a 4.4/5 from me. (Why do all the good fics have the lamest names)
overall I love your character I think it's going to be really cool because it does start in his I think it's I haven't really got that far into your book but I think it's his 4th or fifth year I do really wish that it would have been that he would have had a little bit of extra time instead of making it feel like it's really rushed so we could build up to other stuff I really think it would be cool for him to have started in his like last third year close to last so he has all that summer to figure out stuff so I thought that would have been really cool other than that I think the book is really well done
A few hours ago, i rated this novel 1 star because i thought the quality fell in the middle due to some plotpoint. I have to say i was mistaken and not only did it not fell but it got better as the story goes. im really sorry author for judging too quickly, you deserve alot more readers. I'd delete my other comment since it'll negatively affect the rating of this amazing novel.
This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfic. The way author added the content about Harry being the grandson of Perenelle Flamel was fantastic.
This book is awesome. I get bored easily but this book kept me reading and wishing for more.
I would give you 5 but after fleur and Daphne with Harry cheating arc I lost all the interest in the novel...this novel went from Harry being cunning to lustful kid ..you ruined the book for me at the part...
Was enjoying the story until the author added some random OC “immortal witch” that is somehow Harry’s grandmother. There was no lead up to it lol just randomly “yeah he has some immortal OP grandma”. Ruined the whole story for me because of how random, forced, and pointless it was to add to the story. If the story was worse then I would’ve rated this lower but besides that random addition it was decent.
揭示劇透 Out of all of the fanfiction novels I've read on this app this is my favorite one. It is very emotional, catching, thrilling, and addictive to read. I find myself checking everyday to see if it has been updated because I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Oh come on. Need more. Hope lucius and house malfoy doesn't survive miraclously(financially).. .Oh come on. Need more. Hope lucius and house malfoy doesn't survive miraclously(financially).
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my guess perenelle flamel. Cant be sure but excited. Take your time author. Loving the story. ......... my guess perenelle flamel. Cant be sure but excited. Take your time author. Loving the story.
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1) The quality of the letter is excellent. 2) Stability update - medium. 3) The plot development is bad. The plot changes, but the ratio of the number of chapters to the development of the plot is too large. And because of this, the plot will quickly get bored. 4) The character design is bad. Why doesn't he think about the consequences of his actions. He spends a year on the plot with the tournament of wizards and does not think at all how to develop properly. 5) The background of the world is bad. The same as in other projects.
揭示劇透 Almost a great story, uniquish attempt at a divergence in the story, and an entertaining change of pace. only problem is the author seems to pander to the audience that wants a tool bag MC who should only think about benefits and gains. like this might not be his new reality. Seemingly annoyed by all the main characters. "Ron isn't useful, grangers annoying, Dumbledore is evil." Its like the author wants a decent human being as the MC but keeps listening to the critics to be more evil. its honestly kinda sad. other than that I find the story interesting. hopefully the MC remembers that the friends in the book had unquestionable loyalty for some reason he actually questions them? lol must be an AU?
Good chapter. I hope sirius is freed and he sues the ministry and everyone. also good story and chapters. Good chapter. I hope sirius is freed and he sues the ministry and everyone.
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4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.