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寫檢討Alright, I'm leaving a review after reading all four available chapters. And apart from the minor grammatical errors, the story in itself has potential. You just have to patiently read it to understand it, and you'd find it rather interesting.
The book is interesting! and the plot is still on hold... waiting for more chapters [img=update]