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摘要
A Douluo Dalu heavily inspired fictional story. What was originally an fanfiction is steadily being rewritten and then turned into an original story of its own.
○ Story Arc 01: The Legacy of a Poison Martial Spirit Master
-~The Official Story Synopsis~-
It follows the story of our main protagonist Sheng Yi Wang, who is a little boy of unknown origins, presumably with a mysterious background. He lives with his friends and step siblings withinside an orphanage, on the outskirts of a small town.
Everything changes when he turned six years old and awakened his first martial spirit essence, which then turns out to be an ordinary [River Grass] martial spirit essence.
《Author's Notes》
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2.10.2019 This is the author here. Well, seeing as how there is no reviews, then I will be the first one to review. I am giving myself a (3*) for writing quality, since I'm about just average. A normal reader and an average writer. Stability of Update (3*) a chapter a day. Story Development (4*), not the best, but there is still room for improvement. Character Design (4*), a bit early in the story plot to tell the character development, it's own mentality, and goals. World Background (3*), leaving myself plenty of room for improvements...
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Different point of view from the original author.. stil it is good story.. new martial soul for the mc.. I just need more chapter please, and please no harem
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This is an awesome douluo story. This story focuses on character development and the fight scenes are amazing. If your interested in slow paced story then I recommend this.
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Hey author I really hope that you can continue this one cause it’s so good and I will be supporting you”😭
Author hasn't read Duoluo Dalu at all considering all the **** he writes in this story, it's so bad that he fucks up in atleast 10 things by ch10, it's like Author didn't even look at the wiki ones before writing this story