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寫檢討This is an awesome douluo story. This story focuses on character development and the fight scenes are amazing. If your interested in slow paced story then I recommend this.
Author hasn't read Duoluo Dalu at all considering all the **** he writes in this story, it's so bad that he fucks up in atleast 10 things by ch10, it's like Author didn't even look at the wiki ones before writing this story
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Different point of view from the original author.. stil it is good story.. new martial soul for the mc.. I just need more chapter please, and please no harem
2.10.2019 This is the author here. Well, seeing as how there is no reviews, then I will be the first one to review. I am giving myself a (3*) for writing quality, since I'm about just average. A normal reader and an average writer. Stability of Update (3*) a chapter a day. Story Development (4*), not the best, but there is still room for improvement. Character Design (4*), a bit early in the story plot to tell the character development, it's own mentality, and goals. World Background (3*), leaving myself plenty of room for improvements...
Hey author I really hope that you can continue this one cause it’s so good and I will be supporting you”😭
This is an awesome douluo story. This story focuses on character development and the fight scenes are amazing. If your interested in slow paced story then I recommend this.
Author hasn't read Duoluo Dalu at all considering all the **** he writes in this story, it's so bad that he fucks up in atleast 10 things by ch10, it's like Author didn't even look at the wiki ones before writing this story
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Different point of view from the original author.. stil it is good story.. new martial soul for the mc.. I just need more chapter please, and please no harem
2.10.2019 This is the author here. Well, seeing as how there is no reviews, then I will be the first one to review. I am giving myself a (3*) for writing quality, since I'm about just average. A normal reader and an average writer. Stability of Update (3*) a chapter a day. Story Development (4*), not the best, but there is still room for improvement. Character Design (4*), a bit early in the story plot to tell the character development, it's own mentality, and goals. World Background (3*), leaving myself plenty of room for improvements...
Hey author I really hope that you can continue this one cause it’s so good and I will be supporting you”😭