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i say that's too good thank you.if you do more efort you'll give us a perfect novel and i'm waiting for your seconde novel. do your best and good work.
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寫檢討i say that's too good thank you.if you do more efort you'll give us a perfect novel and i'm waiting for your seconde novel. do your best and good work.
作者 Mouniim_1
I think you're a beginner, but it's a great short novel, if you work more than you, you will give us a piece of art, good job, kkeep workin, and thank you for this