/ War / The Ink Collector
摘要
Jhin Herangel was once a prodigy merchant on Earth. Through his talent and luck, he became a billionaire at the young age.
He was acknowledged as The Einstein of Business. His ability to command his employees was unparalleled; any task given was done with great efficiency and quality.
However, it all changed after he was killed and died with eyes unable to close.
When he thought it was the end, he accidentally signed a contract which brought him to a new world. A world where the horns of wars echo all year-round. A place where the myriads of races fought over resources just to survive.
[Ding! You have successfully integrated with the Devil King's Legacy]
[Ding! Please fill up the System Creation Form]
He was given the ability to design his own system but in exchange… He must kill a million creatures within two years.
Watch as Jhin Herangel, the one who fell from grace starts his journey in the bloody Chaos World and design a system to accomplish his goals.
…
[Ding! Discovered the tower of achievements. Do you wish to write your name and your greatest accomplishment?]
“Sure!”
[Ding! Please pick among your three greatest achievements.]
1. Vomiting in a God's head
2. Vomiting on the enemies' commander.
3. Flirting with the enemies' commander.
“Forget it!” Jhin sighed as he reluctantly looked at the magnificent tower.
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Author here! This book of mine has finally stepped on its 101st chapter. In relation to that, I want to thank everyone for their supports! Especially those who criticized my work and point out my errors. Thank you very much! My growth is all thanks to you! Also, I'm quite excited to announce that the real plot is going to take place soon. It can be said that the previous 100 chapters were considered as my exploratory phase. I think I've practiced enough, and it's time to start the real deal. Including this book, I'm going to publish a new one too. Let's go for the challenge!
I like it but my goodness is this MC annoying please author fix him this guy says hes done with business and wants to make meaningful connections but his goals are to build anothe business empire and return to earth to get revenge and everytime a piece of gold is in his path he goes crazy for it especially the test that he had for the treasure room or the cat, he has to be forced to take the cat when before he even had this test he said if something like that would happen he wouldn't choose the wealth
I can see how knowledgeable the author is just by reading the chapters 1-3. I like how they explained everything clearly so that you could imagine it well. It doesn't look rushed, well prepared rather. I'm giving my 5 stars!
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I overall liked the story until the MC becomes this slave that is dragged around all the time and ultimately doesn’t do anything business related nor grow his “empire” that he planned on creating. Maybe the story will progress more but my personal preference when I go into stories that make the MC seem like he will be better and ultimately makes him a slave it’s not my cup of tea. But overall it’s pretty good other than the character.
The story isn't perfect but it's enjoyable, might be my standards tho. writing quality is good, I don't think the story is too fast or slow, but 2 chapters a week obviously isn't enough but I guess the author must be going through it. The mc is just so inconsistent, Don't even get me started on how he's just getting dragged along in the story by the system, it's the reason he's a slave rn. Mc just keeps getting slapped around by everyone for no apparent reason. Even tho it say he custom designed the system it's obvious he just made an ability and put it an already existing template. Well at least the world background is very unique and interesting, it is simply a wonderful concept.
There are some grammar errors, but the writing is both simple and descriptive, which I like very much. I think it works well for this type of story. The story is also fast paced and gets right to the action and adventure. I like that the MC doesn't take himself too seriously. Even though he's experienced betrayal, he's still somewhat light-hearted.
This book has the potential to be a masterpiece. The Mc is very comical allowing for the reader to engage with the story more. The plot is also not that bad, although I do feel like it's missing something but I can't put my finger to it. The pacing of the story is also not that bad, so the story develops in a fine manner. Characters were well thought out and especially the army commander yandere, she was a good character to add to the story to spice things up. Overall, the Author did a Great Job. Keep it up Author!
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The Valentines Day chapter deserves 10/5 stars alone. I really enjoyed reading the character development. I definitely need more backstory. The system intrigues me and I am curious to see how you use it going forward. This shall stay in my library dungeon for future reading. Plz update lots so I may binge it.
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This one deserve 5 star, coz why not? chapter 1 got me hooked already. Words were pleasing in the eyes and easy to read and understand. Thank you for writing this author! looking forward for more chapters!
I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!
Very nice so far, not sure about the stability of updates though, so I gave a 4. The story sometimes moves a little more quickly than it should in my opinion, it leaves some holes that should be filled early on rather than later. The writing quality could be improved, I saw several typos early on, nothing major as the book is still well written. (Maybe do some double checks when using caps lock?) The characters seem ok, though the female (lead?) is a bit strange in description compared to how she acts in the story. Though it is early on so I could be over-analyzing. The world-building leaves something to be desired; although the MC needs a guide, the writer immediately throws that part out the window and instead leaps straight into another situation, just seems a bit rushed. Overall, i'm excited to see where the author will take the story, 5 stars is indeed shameless so take this 3.8 into consideration.
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5/5 because from the synopsis alone, my interest was already piqued. This is one of the page turner novels you would surely not regret reading 😊😊 kudos author!
I've got to say, this novel is amazingly written. Grab some popcorn and sit down, as you certainly won't regret picking this book up and giving it a read.
The story is great so far! I love the world building and the protagonist’s skills to slowly improve his skills chapter after chapter as he learns how to deal with his system. The writing and grammar is also good overall. Good job!
Mysterious, decent writing, good world background, different plot, all gathered to make up a beautiful story, Nice choice to be picked. [img=recommend]
This story has one of the best hooks and prologue were one of the best I have ever seen. The story sounds unique and the world-building is strong but also mysterious. The story has infinite potential and it shows how much the author has put into this story. Best of luck author!!
The story has a great beginning. I loved the narrative and the descriptive writing. Didn't feel too long or too much to handle, really the perfect balance. Even though the transmigration theme has been used plenty, the author manages to capture it in a slightly different manner, which gives the story a feeling of authenticity. Looking forward to reading more! <333
Writing Quality: Little to no grammar mistakes and if there is one, it wouldn't hinder your reading experience. what more could you ask for? Story Development: Seems like the revenge type from what I have read but even if it was, it was quite good. the genre is executed very well. Character Design: I can't comment much about the mc other than he isn't one dimensional that only spoke his dialogues. He is a prodigy and he acted like one. But even so, he makes mistakes and that was makes him human. Very realistic. Updating Stability: Author will update daily. I bet my money on it. After all, author wouldn't want to miss the MGS money. World Background: Set up in a fantasy world and the readers are given snippets of the world the mc is in so it isn't info dump which is excellent. Overall: This novel is my cup of tea and I like it. I can say that the novel is underrated. Quite similar to my novel that has low views and collections but is quite good. In other words, this novel is a must read. I believe that nothing is perfect so this novel doesn't get five stars.