/ Anime & Comics / The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
摘要
I was just going a long with life.
I simple worked as a waiter in a high class restaurant, went back home and that was it. I had no friends, never had a girlfriend and basically had no social life. My only pastimes were anime, manga and such, but there was one thing that I liked the most.
Hentai.
I couldn't count how many times I spend most of my day simple watching hentais and masturbating. Sometimes I varied and jack off to erotic games and hentai manga as well.
Sundelly I found myself in complely unkown space, in the presence of two being saying they are gods and they are offering am opportunity to live my sexual fantasies?
What the hell is going on?
*Current schedule - 1 chapter/day*
*Warning: If you are looking for a too much serious work, look somewhere else.*
*Warning: Any and all characters presented in this novel are 18 years old or above, regardless of description given in chapters.*
*Warning: This story is something I just want to write to just pass time, and I'm going to change a few things of the original stories to accomodate this fanfic*
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Don't waste ur time the mc is a fucking beta and let Anna be a whore like the original history. There's a stupid time skip without explanation (mc start a 10 old then he is 16 an automatically get cucked)
Dude............................do you really let your dick guides at this point ?! filler filler fillerfiller filler filller
ermm .. seriously man .. do you think while watching the rabbit jump jumping ... like I don't understand why you write to make a harem but so far what you do is nonsense about situations that do not help at all in the development of the story .. **** .. even Anna and Rina you just ignore it without any follow-up with just some nonsense about preventing something .. seriously .. are you stupid .. than preventing isn't the story more interesting if it starts early without letting them drift .. **** off you virgin
Lol This Shit is so trash....Dont bother reading it cuz i thought it would change and i was bored....so last time i said the girl masturbate in front of others when she went to that club...and again she went back to do it againa and she was even thinking of letting this dude join her but mc came and stop her...lol the author really keeps teasing readers with ntr...mc is Cucked bitch...
He isnt using his skills , lol.. What's the point of having a skill if you didnt use? .. Heck ,maybe just a display 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
too much nonsense chapters on some stupidly boring *** and MC is so passive that makes readers hate him. it would be better if MC gets cucked
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It's not so bad, the only problem is mc. I think he is retarded. Was it done for *character growth * or because it's some progressive massage about retards. I'm not sure....
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I like the story so far although there's alot of stuff I disliked so far it's a good novel.why is everyone shitting on the author for a passive MC if you where in MC's place you all be the same if not all of you would become rapists I mean he gets the girls to logic so they stay in his harem.some people don't understand he's a normal person you expect him to go around killing and raping people that's messed up
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I honestly don’t know why the MC is getting so much hate, I guess in someways he could be better but none of the girls in his harem have been touched so what’s the problem? Rather than just listening to peoples’ complaints, read a little bit farther and decide whether or not you want to stick with it.
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