摘要
With the War Machine System, Hax will create the deadliest machine throughout the universe!
It is the 200th Millenium. Humanity has conquered the entire universe.
Now, they set their sights on the multiverse.
Hax, a human prodigy created with the brightest genes humanity could offer, create the technology for humans and waged war against the other universe.
They have conquered one universe, it won't be long before they take another one.
But Hax never thought the enemy would come from within.
Banished into a strange universe with his past long forgotten, Hax will have to start from the beginning.
This time with the War Machine System!
His deadly war machine took the new world by storm! He equipped his army with his machine and dominates his enemy. Through increasing his wealth, power, and influence, Hax stormed through every opposition.
But as his strength increased so does his enemies. His journey will be filled with peril and hardship.
"Nothing can stop my war machine!"
What can you expect from this book?: Kingdom-building, army-building, Technology, Magic.
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Hello, this is the author's shameless review here. I hope you guys like the story and how I write it. If you don't make sure to let me know in the comment. I'm going to update two to three times a week this month, But If I got the MGS contract then I will update every day. So expect more chapters to come!
The writing is simply way to fast like you just blowing through the beginning. like tasks 20 chapters to go from only having pants to literally having an army. there in not really much indepth background on any of the characters. and the world background is self is very minimal. But I do like the intent of the story line quite a bit.
I really like your novels which makes me happy watching novels I try to watch novels even though I don't like them but when I watch your novels I feel very happy so I really like your novels
kingdom building with decent amount of combat . I like the weapon creation parts of the story . lots of potential I'm not great at reviews .
The story has an interesting concept. This is a world where Science would try to fight against Cultivation. The author also offers different perspectives on each side by representing them with compelling side characters. The weakness here, if you may, is that the MC seemed to be at the back row most of the times. The side characters were doing the heavy lifting and experiences the challenges that the MC should also somewhat encounter. Nonetheless the eternal dilema between the two opposing side is a very good premise.
The story's got an interesting premise and is fairly well paced. Scene descriptions and the exposition given in the first chapter is also pretty well done. Writing quality could be improved a bit, I noticed a wide amount of small errors crop up.
Great book love the concept about everything, good job author keep it up, would really love to read more as soon as I get time, GREAT WORK !!!!
A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]
I was absolutely taken by surprise, wow this book is amazing, my first time reading this type of genre and I love it. it was engaging and easily grab the attention of the reader's mind. well done.
Without a doubt, this story is definitely the gem. Story development and writing quality expresses me the most. Absolutely worth time of reading.
I really love the premise. I can see already that he would built an entire army around him or make lots of money by selling weapons. This is the thing that I am looking for in a story. The battle scene is also unpredictable. You won't know who win or lose in the scene
This is what I call quality stories. I love the premises of technology against magic. And it seems like this novel is going to be similar to World online in building army or group
Haven't read the novel fully yet but it's fun to read and the story is most interesting, looking forward to reading it again. Great job author! 👍
This book is way different from others. The plot intrigues each time when it comes to a cliffhanger, so readers deal with large amount of emotions. Well-designed character development is what I needed here to be completely involved
This immersive story is extremely eye catching! The author has simply put us in a futuristic realm and displayed it well. Descriptions of surroundings and characters are on point! I actually like the MC as he is quite funny and stubborn. I believe he will have a good development in the coming chapters. Definitely added this to my library and recommend :)
The story is engaging and grab the attention of the reader to read it more and more. Although it is only 10 chapter so far, i hope the update will be faster so that i can continue it
The story has great start, it is a very nice and interesting story. Although, i have only read its starting, i can already say its gonna be amazing. I am going to read this one to the end. I recommend this novel!
really good story but you focus too much on other things such as the cultivators hunting ..,.,.,..,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.. .,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Exp is my sword, and I am a swordmaster. Give me more exp to enhance my sword so i can cut through the darkness of void. -Exp Swordsmaster
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The combination of technology and magic. I have seen a few novels like this before, but I must say this one has the most potential. At least the MC didn't have 200+ IQ but still make a dumb decision. He lost his memory but most of his personality was still intact. I really like the premise of this story. In the first chapter, I know the author promised us that there will be a mech and battleship in the future. He also gave us a glance at what he would become. Maybe he will become stronger than his peak in this strange universe. Anyway. If you guys like technology VS Magic/cultivator. Interesting MC and side characters. Mysterious past, and potential worldbuilding, then I recommend this book.