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really good story but you focus too much on other things such as the cultivators hunting ..,.,.,..,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.. .,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Really good story. love the idea and where it is going so far, the only reason it isn’t any higher than a 3.6 is because of the lack of character design. Which I’m sure will improve in the later parts of the series. I look forward to reading the story, and hope you can bring out the best of quality while remaining healthy.
Exp is my sword, and I am a swordmaster. Give me more exp to enhance my sword so i can cut through the darkness of void. -Exp Swordsmaster
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kingdom building with decent amount of combat . I like the weapon creation parts of the story . lots of potential I'm not great at reviews .
The writing is simply way to fast like you just blowing through the beginning. like tasks 20 chapters to go from only having pants to literally having an army. there in not really much indepth background on any of the characters. and the world background is self is very minimal. But I do like the intent of the story line quite a bit.
The story has an interesting concept. This is a world where Science would try to fight against Cultivation. The author also offers different perspectives on each side by representing them with compelling side characters. The weakness here, if you may, is that the MC seemed to be at the back row most of the times. The side characters were doing the heavy lifting and experiences the challenges that the MC should also somewhat encounter. Nonetheless the eternal dilema between the two opposing side is a very good premise.
Pretty good, fast pace, worth a try if you have the time, might need more chaps for a better understanding of how the plot will turn out.
It's not really my cup of tea but I liked it a lot in addition the characters are a lot of fun and the way the author writes is quite interesting and attractive. Easy to read and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves magic technology and system it's really a good reading choice. Go continue like this I'm looking forward to finishing it.
I haven't gotten too far yet, but firstly I really enjoyed the premise of the futuristic world and an old, op monster who held onto his beliefs in humanity. Not only that, the transition from op to regression is logical and believable. After the nerf, he's still maintaining his previous personality which is something most novels have issues with. I hope to see more growth for him as your story progresses.
Here is my review now that I have read the story at 20 chapters. I would say I like where this story goes. Kingdom building, army building, and in fact any building type story is just my jam! The characters are three dimensional unlike any other stories where the characters only served to the plot and feels like cardboard. I cringe when I recalled that
I really like the theme of this story. Magic vs Technology is a common trope, but it never failed to entertain me. The characters are the most important part of this story. None of them are terrible to me. They have their own goals and reasons for their decision and behavior. Unlike the other novels where the characters centered their life around the MC.
Still one of my favorite novels other than Legendary Mechanic and Mechanical Emperor. Didn't have much to say anymore, but I really like how the story develops. Just ignore this review. I just wanted some EXP
I love your novel, very well written and the story is interesting! I hope the author has time to continue! .................................................................................
The combination of technology and magic. I have seen a few novels like this before, but I must say this one has the most potential. At least the MC didn't have 200+ IQ but still make a dumb decision. He lost his memory but most of his personality was still intact. I really like the premise of this story. In the first chapter, I know the author promised us that there will be a mech and battleship in the future. He also gave us a glance at what he would become. Maybe he will become stronger than his peak in this strange universe. Anyway. If you guys like technology VS Magic/cultivator. Interesting MC and side characters. Mysterious past, and potential worldbuilding, then I recommend this book.
12 chapters in and I've been liking it so far. I actually don't want to review this story again, but I need some EXP so... might as well say what I felt about the development of the story. I do wish the author update more, though.
I really like your novels which makes me happy watching novels I try to watch novels even though I don't like them but when I watch your novels I feel very happy so I really like your novels
The story's got an interesting premise and is fairly well paced. Scene descriptions and the exposition given in the first chapter is also pretty well done. Writing quality could be improved a bit, I noticed a wide amount of small errors crop up.
Great book love the concept about everything, good job author keep it up, would really love to read more as soon as I get time, GREAT WORK !!!!
A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]
I was absolutely taken by surprise, wow this book is amazing, my first time reading this type of genre and I love it. it was engaging and easily grab the attention of the reader's mind. well done.
Without a doubt, this story is definitely the gem. Story development and writing quality expresses me the most. Absolutely worth time of reading.
I really love the premise. I can see already that he would built an entire army around him or make lots of money by selling weapons. This is the thing that I am looking for in a story. The battle scene is also unpredictable. You won't know who win or lose in the scene
Hello, this is the author's shameless review here. I hope you guys like the story and how I write it. If you don't make sure to let me know in the comment. I'm going to update two to three times a week this month, But If I got the MGS contract then I will update every day. So expect more chapters to come!
This is what I call quality stories. I love the premises of technology against magic. And it seems like this novel is going to be similar to World online in building army or group
Haven't read the novel fully yet but it's fun to read and the story is most interesting, looking forward to reading it again. Great job author! 👍
This book is way different from others. The plot intrigues each time when it comes to a cliffhanger, so readers deal with large amount of emotions. Well-designed character development is what I needed here to be completely involved
This immersive story is extremely eye catching! The author has simply put us in a futuristic realm and displayed it well. Descriptions of surroundings and characters are on point! I actually like the MC as he is quite funny and stubborn. I believe he will have a good development in the coming chapters. Definitely added this to my library and recommend :)
The story is engaging and grab the attention of the reader to read it more and more. Although it is only 10 chapter so far, i hope the update will be faster so that i can continue it
The story has great start, it is a very nice and interesting story. Although, i have only read its starting, i can already say its gonna be amazing. I am going to read this one to the end. I recommend this novel!
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really good story but you focus too much on other things such as the cultivators hunting ..,.,.,..,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.. .,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Really good story. love the idea and where it is going so far, the only reason it isn’t any higher than a 3.6 is because of the lack of character design. Which I’m sure will improve in the later parts of the series. I look forward to reading the story, and hope you can bring out the best of quality while remaining healthy.
Exp is my sword, and I am a swordmaster. Give me more exp to enhance my sword so i can cut through the darkness of void. -Exp Swordsmaster
揭示劇透 kingdom building with decent amount of combat . I like the weapon creation parts of the story . lots of potential I'm not great at reviews .
The writing is simply way to fast like you just blowing through the beginning. like tasks 20 chapters to go from only having pants to literally having an army. there in not really much indepth background on any of the characters. and the world background is self is very minimal. But I do like the intent of the story line quite a bit.
The story has an interesting concept. This is a world where Science would try to fight against Cultivation. The author also offers different perspectives on each side by representing them with compelling side characters. The weakness here, if you may, is that the MC seemed to be at the back row most of the times. The side characters were doing the heavy lifting and experiences the challenges that the MC should also somewhat encounter. Nonetheless the eternal dilema between the two opposing side is a very good premise.
Pretty good, fast pace, worth a try if you have the time, might need more chaps for a better understanding of how the plot will turn out.
It's not really my cup of tea but I liked it a lot in addition the characters are a lot of fun and the way the author writes is quite interesting and attractive. Easy to read and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves magic technology and system it's really a good reading choice. Go continue like this I'm looking forward to finishing it.
I haven't gotten too far yet, but firstly I really enjoyed the premise of the futuristic world and an old, op monster who held onto his beliefs in humanity. Not only that, the transition from op to regression is logical and believable. After the nerf, he's still maintaining his previous personality which is something most novels have issues with. I hope to see more growth for him as your story progresses.
Here is my review now that I have read the story at 20 chapters. I would say I like where this story goes. Kingdom building, army building, and in fact any building type story is just my jam! The characters are three dimensional unlike any other stories where the characters only served to the plot and feels like cardboard. I cringe when I recalled that
I really like the theme of this story. Magic vs Technology is a common trope, but it never failed to entertain me. The characters are the most important part of this story. None of them are terrible to me. They have their own goals and reasons for their decision and behavior. Unlike the other novels where the characters centered their life around the MC.
Still one of my favorite novels other than Legendary Mechanic and Mechanical Emperor. Didn't have much to say anymore, but I really like how the story develops. Just ignore this review. I just wanted some EXP
I love your novel, very well written and the story is interesting! I hope the author has time to continue! .................................................................................
The combination of technology and magic. I have seen a few novels like this before, but I must say this one has the most potential. At least the MC didn't have 200+ IQ but still make a dumb decision. He lost his memory but most of his personality was still intact. I really like the premise of this story. In the first chapter, I know the author promised us that there will be a mech and battleship in the future. He also gave us a glance at what he would become. Maybe he will become stronger than his peak in this strange universe. Anyway. If you guys like technology VS Magic/cultivator. Interesting MC and side characters. Mysterious past, and potential worldbuilding, then I recommend this book.
12 chapters in and I've been liking it so far. I actually don't want to review this story again, but I need some EXP so... might as well say what I felt about the development of the story. I do wish the author update more, though.
I really like your novels which makes me happy watching novels I try to watch novels even though I don't like them but when I watch your novels I feel very happy so I really like your novels
The story's got an interesting premise and is fairly well paced. Scene descriptions and the exposition given in the first chapter is also pretty well done. Writing quality could be improved a bit, I noticed a wide amount of small errors crop up.
Great book love the concept about everything, good job author keep it up, would really love to read more as soon as I get time, GREAT WORK !!!!
A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]
I was absolutely taken by surprise, wow this book is amazing, my first time reading this type of genre and I love it. it was engaging and easily grab the attention of the reader's mind. well done.
Without a doubt, this story is definitely the gem. Story development and writing quality expresses me the most. Absolutely worth time of reading.
I really love the premise. I can see already that he would built an entire army around him or make lots of money by selling weapons. This is the thing that I am looking for in a story. The battle scene is also unpredictable. You won't know who win or lose in the scene
Hello, this is the author's shameless review here. I hope you guys like the story and how I write it. If you don't make sure to let me know in the comment. I'm going to update two to three times a week this month, But If I got the MGS contract then I will update every day. So expect more chapters to come!
This is what I call quality stories. I love the premises of technology against magic. And it seems like this novel is going to be similar to World online in building army or group
Haven't read the novel fully yet but it's fun to read and the story is most interesting, looking forward to reading it again. Great job author! 👍
This book is way different from others. The plot intrigues each time when it comes to a cliffhanger, so readers deal with large amount of emotions. Well-designed character development is what I needed here to be completely involved
This immersive story is extremely eye catching! The author has simply put us in a futuristic realm and displayed it well. Descriptions of surroundings and characters are on point! I actually like the MC as he is quite funny and stubborn. I believe he will have a good development in the coming chapters. Definitely added this to my library and recommend :)
The story is engaging and grab the attention of the reader to read it more and more. Although it is only 10 chapter so far, i hope the update will be faster so that i can continue it
The story has great start, it is a very nice and interesting story. Although, i have only read its starting, i can already say its gonna be amazing. I am going to read this one to the end. I recommend this novel!
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