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The Kuto was originally a Clan hidden in the world of Naruto. Undisturbed by the war's around them they lived a life of secrecy and peace thanks to their clan's special talent. They did not have Dojutsu like the Uchiha nor were they large like the Hyuga.
Instead, they had an innate talent when it came to using the sword. However, nothing lasts forever, and when the Clan is attacked and destroyed one of the sole survivors Rei sets off on the path of revenge with a special weapon like no other by his side.
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Its actually pretty good, i cant wait for more! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
At first I liked the idea of building a souls society, but I don't like the idea of him being considerate of others even though he's a Shinigami
The potential here is too high to be true. Keep it up 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Ryujin Jakka, The Greatest Zanpakuto of all time. I wish you would have made it a three year time skip but it's all right. Nice Story Mate! [img=recommend]
original idea, original character, focus on progression, action, and growth. romance not a main point. so far pretty perfect compared to most work I've read on here. keep it up!
very well done I hope to see more of this also the update is good but just change the name lance okay TFJVHUANNKJJABUHJAUGHFGHJHCVBHGYSGG SEHHHHEHEHEHHEBEHEHEHEHHH
this sword has the potential to be Ryūjin Jakka so 5 star for now.............................................................................
my favorite element is of course fire and since I read the title of the story,I was excited to read everything and to my not surprise face,I loved the bleach and naruto coming together with a goal to reach for the mc,so please keep it up I love this story please.
When I read the synopsis Saying they're good using at Swords my hand just automatically press the "Add to Library" damn HAHAHAHA 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Great story to read I love it. Also I get the feeling someone possibly does not like sasuke. But that's just my impression so who is to say really.
if the MC is a transmigrator the story would have been better. its like giving a Nuclear missile to a chiwawa who does not know what to do with it nor knowing anything about the plot of the naruto verse? is it really enjoyable reading about the MC that keep questioning things(acting dumb) when we the readers already have the answers to? sigh...i am not even curious about the capabilities Ryujin jakka and I even know the plot of naruto verse. When I see the naive MC being oblivious to all this without anything new to add its kind of annoying and boring.Not to mention when the MC jumps to conclusion sigh. for example all these could happen : seeing black zetsu "who are you? I will join you to bring my parents back"............. seeing Obito, "I believe you because you are madara"................... seeing Danzo "I will put my life on the line to protect you benefactor"... seeing Hinata "I realize that I love you" ..instant rip to boruto seeing Ino "I realize that I love you" ..instant rip to inojin seeing Jiraya/tsunade "sorry I have to kill you because you are friends with the snake"... conclusion: A NAIVE DUMB MC WITH A FAKE RYUJIN JAKKA WHO IS A PHEONIX INSTEAD OF A DRAGON. Writing Quality-4 STAR.................................good Story Development-2 STAR.........................not interesting Character Design - 1 STAR.........................irritating World Background-4 STAR.........................got narutoverse vibe
His clan was massacred, his parents were killed infront him. But he is worried about some cheap bandits life who tried to kill him. Why is searching for Orochimaru. To tell him killing is bad and do not kill people in the future? then you can be my best friends. See how awesome hero I am. I can become friends with the murderer of my parents .
haven't read it yet but it looks good. also is that picture from that manga drifters. reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo
Он хочет отомстить ,но как только получил немного силы сразу же побежал за Орочи , нет бы пару лет потренироваться но зачем..................................
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please come back one day I remember reading this story and it's always in the back of my mind.
Is everyone named Rei? the first chapter itself is too confusing, why would author set up mc rei to be killed by enemy ninja rei when he could've choosen any names since none of them were important named chracter.
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I love this so much and would love to see it continued but either way i had so much fun reading this.
It's great. The mc actually have development which is crazy, you don't find this very often here, his powers are cool and even if he is op there's situations when it's not that clear so is not boring cause you know he'll always win without any cost. The writing is very good and you can feel like the characters are people not mannequins, and they have personallity which means they take decisions based on that personality which means they make mistakes which means no gary stu or mary sue. The story of a guy that makes a deal with a sword, in exchange of power for revenge he'll have to build a place for the souls to live after death.