摘要
[ON HIATUS UNTIL FEBRUARY 20th] My name is Cassius Blackwood, I am the illegitimate son born between the greatest swordsman in the empire, and the master of the Magic Tower.
Yes, the one people expected to be a 1-in-a-million genius.
As a result, I grew up in a house full of love and kindness despite being illegitimate.
That is, until my tenth birthday when I failed my awakening ceremony.
You can imagine how people started treating me after that.
My parents, who had high hopes for me, abandoned me.
After 10 years of training in hopes of awakening, I succeeded. But only as a "systemless hunter."
And as we know, it's impossible to succeed as a hunter without a system.
When 'The Blackwood Trial' took place, which is meant to determine the next head of house Blackwood, as everyone expected, I was the first to die.
So, why did I go back to when I was 10 years old right before my awakening ceremony?
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Tags:
#transmigration (the MC isn't the transmigrator)
#regression ( the MC is obviously the regressor)
#reincarnation
#no-harem #romance #singlefemalelead
#revenge #evil #cruel
#mage #swordsman
#returnee #fantasy-empire
#dungeons #system( Fake system)
#cultivation (done differently)
#rarebloodline #action #fantasy #secretidentity
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It's really going well in the 9 chapters that I'm going through. There is still a lot to be developed, so in the future I will continue updating the review as the story updates and advances. I would give him the highest rating but I see inconsistency in a recent character
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the way the MC just lowkey decides to suffer just so he can make his dad suffer is so petty xD. but other than that i like the story and though the writing style is a little weird it makes it enjoyable. good luck author!
To start, congratulations author for releasing this novel on the platform. Although this novel is for a monthly contest and is one of your first works, it is severely lacking. I am an honest reviewer and will not inflate stars on a review simply for your benefit, and to tell it how it is - this story has many grammatical errors, there is much lacking in the exposition department, and the pace is too fast for any emotional connection between readers and this story. For further clarification, we get a 1-page backstory that Cassius basically died as a failure, got reborn, and is now powerful. This writing system leaves much to be desired and is meant only for eye-candy, a story someone will read to pass time. You may argue that this story has only been out for a short while and grammatical issues would be present because of that; the problem for me is that the author decided to publish these chapters, and once a chapter is published-it’s final. I’m only reviewing what is put in front of me, and what is currently there is lacking. I will only change my review if you edit your story, author. If you have any questions about my review, whether you’re the author themselves or a reader, please ask in the comments. I’ll respond honestly without bias. Have a good day! 😀
Good things, the background is from the beginning, at least you are not lost in what novel, or where you are getting into, the character in the two chapters is developed well. The writing style is not difficult but it makes it enjoyable. The only issue at the moment is that the chapters seem a little long for the action that takes place in them but otherwise it is a good job
This story is pretty good. I am curious about what will next. Though there were some grammatical errors, it never affected the plot. Keep up the great work
I don't want to spoil much, but I'll say the world-building and setting are very interesting and the writing is incredibly high quality! So far, it has kept me just wanting to read more and it's very hard to put down.
so here are my thought's the story from the very first chapter makes you curious to read the next chp length is perfect, character design is good.moreover the best thing i can say author says that he never read a webnovel but man your writing is awesome to much of my taste so yeah and i'm waiting for future chps.
I can tell this novel will go far. I have faith in you author, the quality of this novel is well written there’s simply nothing more i can say about it because of how good it is. keep writing author!
This story so far is pretty good. I'm excited to see what the future holds!!
So far, the story is progressing really well. You are given more than enough reason to care for Cassius and the story doesn't waste time getting to the gist of its plot. However, I think the grammar aspect could use a bit of work.all in all, a potential-filled work!
can't tell if its been dropped but if not its a good story so far I hope it keeps updating
The novel's great overall. The character development and the explanation are enjoyable and easy to understand. Although there's room for improvement, it's still great for a novel that's just starting. Keep up the excellent work!
This is a great book, I hope the author eventually updates more chapters cause this has serious potential. Love the world-build and system, an easy 5.0 rating. Will highly recommend it. 😍❤️
Wow okay, quite the ride. This story's world is pretty interesting, especially with the latest chapter's development. A very different and very cool take on the use of systems in a novel. I like it, it will lead to a lot of new development for the genre. There are some definite grammar and punctuation errors, and some parts seem slightly rushed, but with polish, I think this story has a lot of potential (story essence is far more important than technique that can still be refined). I can nitpick a few other things, but in the end, it's the author's story to tell, and they seem quite capable of telling a good one. Good luck, and I look forward to future updates.
I am a man of few words, and when I say it's good, I mean its good. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Believe in yourself and keep working hard. Your story is okay, but I believe it's going to be really interesting.