摘要
what happens if a goddess accidentally kills you? and somehow she offers you to be reincarnated in a world of fantasy with a few hidden perks.
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I like how the story goes with many deaths and the mc isn't like those mc who didn't protect his loved one. Maybe add more detail in his action or his emotions
The story is good but needs to update more than two chap every week. Maybe add more details in the surrounded area. Like how you are shameless enough to add five star rating to yourself.
It's a good story but needs to update more. And have more words in some chap. But overall it's good............................... ,..............................
I gived my self 5 star cause I'm ungraceful........................😗......... ...................,....................................................................................................................................................................................
It's really good keep up the work..........................................................................................................................................................
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