/ Anime & Comics / The Demon of the Wind (Naruto)
摘要
This story takes place in an AU Naruto universe. This means that some things will be very different but some things will also be the same. The story will follow the adventure called life of Kotaro as he battles against the legendary ninja you love and hate
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So the MC acts like a “True Mandalorian” and when it is time for his Mandalorian coming of age test and his last jedi test... he just lets his 5 year old sister “tag along” lol so out of character sne an awful idea. Also, we then find out that his little sister is also force sensitive and doing her jedi training lol so he isnt unique at all anymore? Story was great until all of this garbage showed up. He would never allow someone to come along for his tests that are meant to be done alone or to test him personally as a mandalorian lol this was just awful. Would rate this a 1/5 but it was a good story before this trash.
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Very entertaining and will definitely be very popular with a little work. Only reason why it’s not five star is its early on and that the character description/development isn’t that great. Certainly not bad, but could use a little more description or longer character developments, as the author is trying to push forward to get to the clone war’s early on.
aight i put 4 stars cus its only 2 chaps atm. but i already know this gonna be BUSSIN cus ive read Frosts Greed so just take my word that this will be great
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got deleted with no warning dont read author doesn't finish works (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*(*(* (*(*(*(*(*(*)*(*
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