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He felt like his body was on fire. It wasn’t something he wasn’t familiar with but every time it got more and more painful to bear. He held his stomach, curled in under his duvet and held his eyes shut tight.
He was crying and biting his pillow to hold in the painful sobs. He was called weak for whining about the pain so he didn’t bother to tell the sister.
They had been taking care of him for a very long time. He was a baby when he lost his parents and after that, they had taken care of him.
They had taken him to the doctor and concerned with every doctor they could to ask about his condition and the pain he faced every month but nobody knew what was going on with him. His health started declining just when he hit 18.
The doctors said he had maximum of 4 years to live which was a very vague estimation but he has already lived 2 years of his 4 years life.
He had accepted his fate. He knew he wouldn’t survive long enough to even complete these four years.
There was no medicine for his pain because his health sure was deteriorating but not knowing the cause of it made doctors confused as to what medicine to give him for his pain.
All he wanted was to know who he was and why was he different from others before sleeping under the layer of mud forever!
“Hey, you alright?” He heard a voice. He didn’t know who it was because he was under the duvet. But before he could open his mouth to answer or get the time to remove his duvet, he heard another voice.
“Yeah… I’m just going to use the loo.” The other boy answered the previous boy’s question which made him realize that the question wasn’t directed to him but to the boy who was out of his bed for the bathroom.
“Just wanna die soon.” He mumbled under his breath, answering the question even though it wasn’t directed to him.
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Very interesting good writing style character and plots are amazing, very good work done by the author. The author has created a lot suspense to make readers curious I can't wait to read further as to how zadkiel will escape the orphanage and what will happen when he finds out abt his real identity. Great work!
such a good book but we need more review for it. keep it up 🙂😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
A very nice write-up. It has lots of mystery which makes it interesting to read. I recommend this book to anyone who is in love with Fantasy books. Great work btw.
Well written story. Plot gets interesting as the story progresses. Pace of the story and character development is good. Overall the story manages to hold readers interest. Leads and supporting characters are well positioned and gets better as story progresses.
This is very interesting and has me wanting for more. The characters are interesting and the mysteries hidden deep within has me waiting in anticipation for more chapters. Overall a solid read so far
Love the story from the beginning. The pain of having no one to lean to when needed is awful. Nice story. I wait for more update[img=exp][img=recommend]
The characters in this book are really good and I can relate to one of them (lol)... keep putting in the great work Author, your work is amazing ❤😭
I like the cover 🥺. Good story line, interesting background. Intriguing characters and good play on words. Hoping to see more chapters soon [img=update][img=recommend].
I love this so much And that is incredible chapter that's why I'm gonna serious when I read this type genre of books 😀😅🤗🤗🤗😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
I like how the story was built up from each chapter. Amazing writing style and character development. Recommend 100%. Looking forward to the next update, please.
Story line and style of writing they both attractaa me.. Such a good story.. Eagerly waiting for the nest chapter... good work fighting... 😋
You have specific ability with words that is uncommonly clear and basically steady. All of the words stream together totally in each part, it makes it hard to turn away.The forming style is strong making this unique unimaginable and worth the read. Staggering work maker.
The creature inside me!, The name itself gets me thinking, the book itself takes me on an unexpected journey. Highly recommend this to every reader put there.
Woah 😍, I love this book, it's awesome and well written 😁 😁 😁. Kudos to the writer 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍
I am not used to reading this type of genre, so can't really assess the plot direction but the things I can assess upon are top-notch. -The sentence flow is immersive as they all string nicely together and are easy to go through. - less exposition is always a welcoming element. - Consistent Third Person viewpoint. -found no grammatical errors which are always appealing to the readers.
I'm a sucker for unique people. Reading about Zad was just so exciting!!!! I loved how the author portrayed him. All the confusion and extraordinary discoveries that made him who he was just made my day. Highly recommended[img=recommend]
While reading, I felt myself in the story. it is quite remarkable and very relatable. it is very beautifully written and if someone asked for a book of it's genre I'll definitely mention it first
a book with binge reading over and over again. i cannot wait to see more works from you. you tell very intriguing stories and the couples omg, love them!
Such an amazing plot written by the authors! The book starts slow but eventually its getting more and more interesting to go thru! I love the mysterious bits of the story! and I feel bad for the boy only have 2 more years to live his life. I need more! its too captivating! Kudos author![img=update][img=update]
=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend] Loved it so far, very, very interesting, waiting eagerly for more. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us author.