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"Excessive face powder, striking bright color robes and such an annoying attitude?! Why the hell don't you just die?! Why must you robbed my soul into your body?!"
Mo Xiu Ying was transmigrated into a body of an annoying concubine that was despised by everyone after he was hit by a van in the process of saving a girl.
Emperor "Wifey... Don't run away"
Li Xiuying "Didn't you say I'm annoying and ugly?! Then stay away!"
Emperor "But you no longer wear that 10inches powder"
Li Xiuying "........"
Emperor "Wifey.. Your hubby is turn on. Take responsibility."
Li Xiuying "I just untie my hair! which part it makes you turn on?!"
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I super love it!! like oh my gosh!! the characters interactions with each other are so interesting, mc is nice but knows how to scheme but at the same time he's so adorably innocent like! like!
Really good and cute novel! Would definitely recommend as a short and sweet read. I hope the author writes more stories in the future!!! ☺😍🙏
Currently at chapter 22. Will give more reviews as I read but I have to say I really love this! Finally a doctor that truly used their skills lol. I have see one or two doctor got transmigrated but they did not use their medical skill at all so this come as surprise, a pleasant one. Here, take this 5* from me
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Very fulfilling story with a lot of drama action love scenes passion.Cheering on the side for the characters. This was a marathon reading . Worth the extra money spent on it.
So far the story is interesting, I do like how the main character doesn't immediately fall in love however it makes it seem like he won't ever fall in love with the king, which is not an ideal romance story. Gets confusing when he suddenly starts having feelings for him even if it's mostly sympathy. It's a good concept when done right, but it is a difficult one to achieve. Basically a bland story with predictable plot, but interesting nonetheless.
Ah, I was going to wait until I've read the entire book, but I can barely get past chapter 3 without some critiques. Proper address of the servants and masters are a given, this is a period piece set in ancient China even though I haven't seen a dynasty mentioned still the manner in which the people speak is off putting. Have you ever watched or read a Chinese period novel or drama? It's a great story and plot but the voice I get from it is 'modern American'. Please consider revisions if you haven't already and you might benefit from reading 'From Ceo to Concubine' by Queeniecat on here bc that is a well written Ye Dynasty transmigration piece.
Wonderful story. I enjoy reading. Only part that could be change. As it doesn’t make sense unless the author trying to do a flashback. The last chapter they had the baby. They were doing things with the baby. However, the first bonus chapter. Is about when they returned to the castle. The baby hasn’t been born yet. Only celebrated. They are waiting. Then the 2nd bonus chapter it’s mention the baby has been born over a year so far. Just feels like at the end of the last chapter about feeding the cake to the baby should’ve been in the bonus chapter since the baby hasn’t been bonus in the 1s bonus chapter. It’s mention in the 2nd bonus chapter.
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Its an amazing story, the best i ever read, you will definely fall in love with the characters. The best author ever too, you won regreded reading this story. I [img=recommend]Strong revomendede this.
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first ever review after reading dozans of novel it's a masterpiece 😍🤩 no nonsense or extra drama 🥳🥳 it's just a cute little story one should definitely read ☺️☺️😉 ohh my gosh I read it 2-3 times already 🥰 dear author waiting for more novel like this 🥳🥳😘😘
I finally finished. This novel is good. Good job author. As I said before, I like how the MC is a doctor that use his skill for real unlike others novel. And not only the MC but other's character design is also good, everyone have their own unique charm. Here, take this 5* from me.
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The language was kind of lacking, but it was good overall 🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕
This book is short but it doesn't feel like it, I loved the story progression and the feelings weren't too rushed, also I read it after the completion so updating stability doesn't matter. Thank you for this Author-nim.
I love this story soo much. The only lack in this novel is the writing other thing is just wholesome🫶🏻
The storyline and character development were great and you can actuslly feel the feelings of the characters. I reslly enjoyed reading your novel. However, frequent grammar mistakes have become tripping points or stumbling blocks that hinder your reader from following your flow of your story. May I suggest that you get a native English speaker to help you edit this. So that your English reader will totally enjoy your story without constantly correcting the grammar or idiom usage in some of your paragraphs. Keep on writing. You have potential. Let your creativity and imagination flow. I anticipate your next novel. Please note : Your English translator of your novel should not be your English language editor of your work. This will ensure a better quality and a steadier reading flow. Good Luck and Happy Writing!
There were certain tropes that, I feel, weren't properly explored, most being left forgotten. Some things worked out miraculously, with almost no effort, understandable if there was a prophet or a system spilling all the secrets and answers, but that was not the case. At least the protagonists were distracting enough for me to ignore most of the mistakes.
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