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STORY IS NOW DROPPED, IF ANYONE WANTS TO ADOPT THE IDEA, FEEL FREE TO DO SO AFTER INFORMING ME!
Summary: Celestials. One of the Oldest races of the Multiverse, older than Galactus himself. What would a human do, when he gets reborn as an anomaly amongst Celestials, million years after all Celestials are gone? SI/OC. Half-Celestial MC. Other half undecided.
I'm still not out of depression, so don't get your hopes up. I just had to get this idea out there.
If anyone wants to write something on it, feel free to do so, but don't forget to inform me first.
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Son of an Elder God(Gaea) and a Celestial is somehow so weak its pathetic lol it makes no sense and he is over 200years old and the excuse that he is young doesnt make sense in this case with these two races... MC is an idiot with him seeing loki and thor fighting on earth and both would stomp him in a second but he tries to interfere for no reason lol story goes downhill after the strength of the MC is revealed.... honestly waste of time reading as of now with this MCs power with his heritage and past memories lol
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keep sucking d*ck because that's the only thing your good at you don't even know a damn thing about Marvel why write a fanfic about it? you fanfic canccers always ruining other series with your bs fantasy
a good idea, but poorly implemented. It is not so bad to read if you ignore some elements of the story, but I hate Nerfs of any kind. Op is life !!!! fuc * protagonists xianxia and jumpchain. weak-to-strong is garbage and only my opinion matters
very boring and time consuming, it takes 20 long chapters for something to happen and when you think there will be a time jump he starts acting like a teenager and gets into the lives of others for 0 reasons, ragnarok I dropped, without conditions the protagonist is very bad, to be honest and the only good thing i saw is the long chapters but this is still a disadvantage because the story is very boring and time consuming, if there had been a time jump to the epoch of the empires or the iron age it would be at least interesting but the land there are only primitives and he will still meddle in the life of the Asgardians for no reason
trash , mc should be stronger than his mother gea from the beginning .the mc is just plain dumb and has the lowest iq possible for any celestial or being of high power, author clearly doesn’t know what his talking about
Finally a FF related to celestial is here. Only 3 chps. and of em, only half or so, of last chp was related to MC and its still dope. the backstory and secondary MC's are what made it dope. they are celestials and knull is there. nice. PLus, other one or two FF's, I dont think they have ever been explored . And the MC, dude was born OP. SI and child of two powerful races and is pretty much ' the-celestial-god! '. really hope it continues cause this shit is dope. hope more new shit is explored. GL.
at the moment i am liking it a lot ... it is very good with only 3 chapters ... but do more than
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multiple 5 star reviews from single user. I'm here to even the false reviews out. This novel is garbage This novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbage
There is a guy on a fanfiction website copying your story word for word, I thought I should let you know as this the most annoying thing someone can do to an author and I dont want him stealing your credit. Your sincerly a reader
The development takes wayy too long. the mc just throws away all his meta knowlege after realizing that hes in marvel. he dosnt use any of the scientific knowledge from his past life to help him. And even though the mc knows about the op enemies in marvel he thinks that doing nothing but chilling is smart. the mc can see the past but he never uses it to learn Anything (ex: he see his Dead mother using her powers many times as well as many others and Just dismisses everthing he sees as just to be used for entertainment like tv. Basically high potential character is pathetic because of the reincarnates mindset and low iq.
I havent read it yet but knowing that he is the author of legend of baldur also knowing that a bunch homophobic people came and ruined the story by making the author drop because he did something that would be correct based on the mythology of the character as the gods didnt care and would even **** a hole in a tree if they wanted and it wasnt even graphic as I heard it was just one paragraph of vague acts between two dudes, the gods litterly did stuff like that ALL THE TIME! Go read some mythology or even marvel comics first man they do anything they want they go like this with their thought process “oh you are a tree ill **** ya your horse ill **** ya you a dude ill **** ya you a girl ill **** ya you my sibling or parent ill **** ya” they dont care man. Also just know that this author has little to no gramatical errors and makes the story suspenseful and doesnt just present you with the main plot points immediately he just didnt want to make an overly op character as that would be dull and he would just bitch slap most the main villains and wouldnt have any story left to write with. I still havent read past the first chapter so I might change this slightly but not much.
The fighting scene is okay, but he's a bit rigid in using his power. Like let's say the devil is inside cave, can't he just flood the cave? And lightning, is it only from sky or can he throw it from hand? Fire, earth. This all should be explored more if you want to use elemental as his main weapon..
These people must’ve been furious when it was revealed that loki was bi in the MCU and that honestly fills me with such joy. I honestly love this story, despite some minor discrepancies, it is still a great read. Thanks author.
Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots. Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots.Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots.
wow. This is really good. Cant wait for more. wow. This is really good. Cant wait for more.wow. This is really good. Cant wait for more.wow. This is really good. Cant wait for more.
The pacing is bad, not just slow. Readers beware. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Great fanfic. I don’t really review stuff so you know it’s really quite good. At least I think it’s good. Because there is a certain amount of characters needed per review Im typing this sentence.
Well this is awful !! The author does not understand at all what the MARVEL universe is and what the Celestials are !! Reading this fanfic my brain melts !! The main character is the son of the Celestial !!! A celestial being is a multidimensional being whose body is born from the energy and matter of the whole galaxy !!! Here's a wiki: Title: Celestials. Classification: Multiverse Empire of the Cosmic Gods. Social Order: All Celestials are subordinate to the Supreme and the strongest Celestials. Age: Older than the first multiverse. Population: Many billions. Technologies and abilities: Manipulation of probability, manipulation of time, manipulation of gravity, manipulation of pathos, manipulation of matter, manipulation of energy, teleportation, manipulation of reality, immortality, extra causality, dimensional attacks, dimensional manipulation, quantum manipulation, manifestation, high-dimensional existence. Cosmic power is unlimited divine energy emanating from the astral plane of existence. Penetrating into the wearer, this power becomes his basis, in fact, replacing his soul, saturating his entire being, creating a unique aura. Cosmic force is a unique and universal type of energy that essentially gives the wearer access to fundamental interactions with the universe. Space travel is a cosmic force that grants its wearer the ability to cross space in a short period of time. The hosts are able to move from star to star with ease, and more. For the carriers of cosmic power, galaxies are "stops", and the entire universe is one big "highway". Energy Manipulation - Celestials are capable of manipulating any energy, in any form imaginable. They are able to create energy barriers, use energy attacks, sense any type of energy, transform it and absorb it. Absorptions are carriers of cosmic power, both capable of controlling this force and using it to absorb other sources of energy, to immediately attack the enemy, enhance their capabilities, or simply accumulate energy for any other purpose. Manipulation of matter - most carriers have control over matter, to one degree or another. And also for the majority, certain abilities come from this ability. Carriers should generally be capable of basic control of matter at the atomic level. They are able to create matter, transform, or simply destroy matter. Manipulations of celestial bodies - carriers of cosmic power, are able to freely control the movement of celestial bodies. Control the movement of planets, stars, the creation of black holes, and many other objects. The Celestials are likely capable of both using and triggering the Big Bang and Big Squeeze reactions. Increased physical characteristics - any carrier of cosmic power has a certain level of superhuman strength. Usually, the carrier does not focus on physical performance, but he is able to increase his physical performance proportionally, with the help of cosmic power. Huge size - Celestials are simply colossal in size, they are usually considered to be 600 meters tall, but some Celestials are as large as tens of kilometers or more. Technically, their size is unlimited, and they are able to grow to such a size that the universe can fit in their hand. Cosmic senses - carriers of cosmic power, are able to feel at a cosmic level. Most are able to sense a single atom, millions of light years away. However, this ability also covers other senses, and even those that are beyond the ordinary understanding of feeling. See other dimensions, the future, the past, see the soul, astral essence, auras and much more. Celestials, as the strongest users of cosmic power, are able to see and feel everything that was, is and will be in the entire multiverse at the same time, as well as the higher dimensions. Cosmic resistance - most carriers of cosmic force have basic resistance to all kinds of influences that can affect the carrier. As a rule, most of them are able to feel normal in the vacuum of space, withstand sudden changes in temperature and also have some other resists. Celestials, however, have resistance to any impact, at their level. They can only be defeated by their superior level of abilities. Etc!! The author portrays the main character as an ordinary mortal with little strength, although he is already more than 60 years old at his age, other galaxies are already being destroyed !! Gaia the elder god, her abilities are also amazing. And many more mistakes !! Translated by Google translate