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摘要
In a world where 80% of the population have superpowers, the yakuza clans have lost all their power.
There was no many yakuza clans that are still in activity but there are some.
One of these yakuza clans is the Jiyuu, that clan was one that was associate with the heroes, that clan was known as a clan that help the neighborhood.
That clan's leader was a great man respected by the members everyone that knew him his city, and above all his quirk was quite strong.
The son of the leader was a strange boy, he was smart and had a good quirk, everyone thought that he could become a hero but he wasn't interest.
What did he wanted to do.
This his the story of the man that help the heroes from the shadow.
I don't own My hero Academia and its characters, but I've introduced my OC (The main and many others)
I own only the story itself.
This is my first fanfic so please go easy on me.
標籤
-- 推薦票
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Too early to do a good review, but the grammar is pretty rough, I feel like first person Pov might be better for this Author. ill change this later at some point.
(Ch10) I usually read till like chapter 20 before giving a review it just got kinda boring to the point where I was skipping like 1-2 chapters at a time just to find a less boring part of the story, and I wanted to give my thoughts before dropping it. The story seems good so far with the direction it’s going in seems fine to me. The grammer seems kinda bad and the conversation between characters are stiff. Other than that it’s pretty good. Also who names the novel “The canceler” it’s like if the joker had a twitter account, it just can’t be taken seriously.