摘要
A tragedy...
An abrupt departure...
Death...
And rebirth.
Pain, rage, struggle, and blood honed a sword.
A sword sharp enough to sever through reality and reveal what lies beyond.
It unveiled something,
Or rather, someone, incomprehensible and unprecedented....
A being who seems to weave the threads of fate.
Does he truly exist, or is he merely a manifestation of another's will?
If he does exist, what purpose does he serve?
Is there really a purpose, or is it just another will imposed upon him?
If it is another's will, can he defy it?
Can he turn his sword against his creator,
A being who literally writes his reality?
Or will he be consumed by the abyss from which his power flows,
Forever lost in the shifting void of his own making?
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Sorry but this novel is trash. Firstly there is too much information and the author alwys says he will describe it later. This is just dumb. Then the language skill is really low. The idea behind this novel is good, something new, but the implementation is just bad. Sometimes u read and read but it feels like the author writes about something only he knows and u cant follow the plot… Sorry but this is my first time i rate a novel with 1/10
I'll just be brutally honest from what I've read. 1. this book suffers from a lack of consistency, it feels like I'm jumping around from event to event instead of having any form of flow.2. so we have the backstory of the character and how his family is killed by aristocrats, and the plot twist with him actually having a whole nother side to his family that he refuses to connect to. 3, the MC is childish and lacks any sense of maturity,4. the battles themselves are just so hard to picture, author does a good job with the emotions the mc feels in certain portions but it just doesn't translate into the actual scenes that I'm trying to picture into my head very well.5 I really don't know how big this world is, how they get from point A to point B(specifically talking about locations.) 6. book has twists and turns which are usually good to try and keep you interested, but the last battle where MC gets taken away makes no sense, so they thought he was dead so his master/friends left him there in the banquet hall which the then emperor takes him away to try and brainwash him through torcher, which by the way we still haven't got a update on.7. When I read a story I don't mind having multiple perspectives but when you make each perspective their own miniature mcs its a big turn off. feel like the pace of this story should've been slow down a lot more cause that goes hand in hand with these other perspectives feeling to jumpy and just out of left field same with the plot twists. didn't mind reading it was just very confused in the processing of what the author is going for and i hope they take this criticism with care. considering i do want it to succeed otherwise I wouldn't have wrote my longest review and or gripe if you want to see it that way ever
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Trash novel. Hard to read, I hate the plot, animal mc, only stupid violence. 140 characters llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll
Hello people, this is _Eshwar_, the novel's author, it's currently chapter 90, and I just noticed that I haven't given any rating to my own novel. From my shameless perspective, the novel is great! 😤 Ahem! MC's character has only been unveiled partially, slightly intentionally, since his character gets messed up thanks to the title effects which would slowly create a firm foundation to his character. Do know that if you feel that the story abruptly picked up pace, it's because of the title effects, which have been shown appropriately from my perspective, slowly but surely characters will be unveiled with certain developments, anyway, it seems like I have said too much, so just join the journey and, read and imagine the story unfold!! [Thank you very much]and[Peace!]
Story was going alright until you went down the torture root to force in edge
Hello again! We have officially hit chapter 100!! This novel's first milestone!! Hmmm....since I have updated a review just recently, I don't know what to say, ah, right!! People, please write reviews, I want to know what you think of the story thus far, helpful criticism is appreciated; I am improving, or so I think and believe, so your prospective would help, a lot actually! And if any of you know, please tell me how to add images to the (fandom) character!That's all for now! Thank you very much!!And[Peace]
Hello people, this is _Eshwar_, your wonderful author~ I'm here to give you two good news. One, volume 3 [Growth] has officially ended! Second, we have stepped foot into volume 4 [Chaos Imminent], YAY!! 🎉🥳! The main focus, no, no, that'd be a spoiler, so I'll stop ;p. But, now that I'm here, I don't know what to post, anyway, I'm constantly improving my writing, criticism that helps me improve are always welcome, and I want and hope you guys support me and the book! Since I don't really know what else to say, I'll end it here, have a good and stay healthy people, you have to support me after all~ 😁 Anyway, Thank you very much, for everything till date and for the future (Until I post another review, just know that I'm always thankful to you people) Once again, Thank you, and [Peace]
I like the store of the main character and am interested in reading more please keep writing ✍️ .
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So, I will suggest others, read this novel, its prologue was enough to hook me, My brain is already imagining what might have been his state in that situation, and at such a young age, the Author doesn't care much about others' opinions, As an Author Myself I can Guarantee, Keep Writing, You will get outstanding results, Have patience, Just like I did, Now my Novel is doing great Yours will too, I like the storyline, It's thrilling and Exciting to keep me hooked. You did a great Job
Greetings people, This is _Eshwar_ once again, and this time too, I'm here with the wonderful news about the completion of yet another volume, vol 4: [Chaos Imminent]!!! I feel like more than those that like the story, those that read only the first few chapters are occupying the reviews, please do leave reviews maybe that too will help me boost the novel, either way, moving on! Volume:4 [Chaos Imminent] has come to an end, and Volume: 5 [Chaos] shall begin, here forth! Cheers to you people and me, Thank you very much for all the love and support, while I accept the fact that there still a lot of shortcomings in me, I'll fix them gradually, as there is nothing to hurry, and I feel like my stories will go elsewhere if I rushed the change, hence bare with your newbie author, once again, Thank you very much, And, As always, [Peace]]
Story is kinda Rare kind of MC a real broken person. I kind of liked that the story went diffrent trope then normal op one. The pain of the MC is feeled by the reader
Hello people! This is your author, _Eshwar_!! Has it been three months? I took a considerably long break, reading newer stories to refresh my mind as I felt stuck and continuing to write the story felt much like a burden to be honest, well, anyway I'm back, I'm sure it'll take me a week or two to get back on a proper pace, and most probably lower my inconsistencies- Either way, Somehow, it feels good to restart writing, I felt like I could write a bit better than stories out there in the same genre, of course I'm not talking about all of them, but some of them, thus I hurried back by a bit, you can say.... It feels pretty bold now that I'm saying this out loud considering I'm still a newbie, but well, It is what it is, That's all, And, As always, [PEACE]
Greetings people~, this is once again, I, _Eshwar_, I basically am here to let you guys know that the story actually starts from vol:5 [Chaos], you probably have found Ken, the main characters, stupid, dumb,and far too different from who he was in the initial chapters; the reasons behind his behaviour, his comprehension on who he was, and how he had taken the turn for the worse, his reaction to it after realising the changes, and more, everything will be revealed in vol 5, and you'll get everything you had expected from him in the first chapters, you'll get the Ken for who he was initially! I have completed the storyline just recently! Either way, I'll stop here today, I am grateful to you and your support to the story, I probably can't help my inconsistency, but rest assured that I'll complete what I have started! Now then, Thank you very much, and as always, [Peace]