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摘要
A pervert father that tries to hold back his nature.. A bitchy devout wife that treats him like a servant. A father in law that collects most of his earnings. This is Carl’s life. Now Carl decides that it is time to put everything behind him and start anew, but an incredible discovery about his father in law makes him decide that it is time to teach him a lesson… of course in his own, pervert way... This is my first attempt at writing. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Also, I am not a native english speaker so do expect grammar errors to pop up.
-The tags clearly indicate that this novel is not something that everyone can stomach. If you can't handle it, then don't read it. leaving a review that only says "this is disgusting" just exposes your bigotism.
-All character and situations are pure producs of my imagination. Any resemblance to actual people or events is completeley coincidental. DON'T TRY TO REPRODUCE THE ACTS DEPICTED IN THIS BOOK IN REAL LIFE! NO MATTER WHERE YOU LIVE, IT IS CRUEL AND ILLEGAL!!!
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This story is way too good! I say for your first time you have a bright future. Dont change a thing, this is really nitty gritty and has a solid foundation for some steamy smut! It makes me feel like i am wronging someone just by reading it as if this was told first hand or if they were real people. Deja Vu, writing this makes me feel like it is all going to change. If anyone says negative things about your novel then pay them little to no heed, they just want big dragon dongs with birdies flocking right out the gate.. Also people may not like it because it isnt just sex right out the gate, but the way things are building up and i can tell things are going going to go from maybe 50 (no penetration smut) to 100 (full on mind break harem) real fast. All i can say is that if you are looking for something to fap to immediately then at the current chapters (35) it hasnt quite gotten there, but i know when it does it will be satisfying! Thanks author-san, have my stones. Idk if they do anything for you cause i am gonna keep donating as the meager 2stones i get daily as long as he is doesn’t get in trouble with law or you go into unannounced 4month hiatus. I know being an author is hard so i mean no pressure. Much love!
Amazing novel!! Love it so much. The characters are realistic and the plot is great. The girls are so amazing too. A very beautiful novel about training cute girls to be daddy's good girls. No NTR so far and I hope it continues to not have NTR. The author is amazing and can write high quality amazing chapters really fast!! This novel has changed my thinking and makes me fantasize about it all day!!! I'm constantly looking forward to the next chapter and the amazing content it will bring.
Brother everything was going well until you put Yuri in, I hate Yuri, and with how much the mc wishes his daughter that you have let Tina's sister do those things for me it is out of place, they are your pets, not companions of the Crime, the guy was supposed to train them not to make them have fun with each other but that you like to see and incite the yuri so for me it is cuckold and that Mc gets excited about that says a lot about him ... I am not surprised That the wife deceives him because seeing it from his point of view, if it were with the mother and not the father, it would be fine for him, right? since he does not care to share. Brother, if you have a story without Yuri, I would like to read it well because the truth is that I liked it until then but I could not continue because for me the yuri takes away all the immersion of the little development of the relationship of the characters, maybe you think that it does it more hot but no. I would recommend that if you do threesomes that it is focused on the man and not on the girls, that the girls have more fun in bed with each other than with the mc they are already putting Ntr in his face, I liked the part in which he tells them Do not do this without me but you are already cuckold mc and he only said it so that I did not catch them the bone wife does not care if they do it without him as I said that says a lot about him ... You could put a girl love label so you save us some of reading this. Sorry if I sound annoying I had to vent. Sorry Google traductor.
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If you don't pop a stuffy while reading this you might have ED check with a doctor.
Disgusting... No matter how I see it this is a disgusting novel It's just down right gross and... idek what to say... except that I love it cough.........
A great story, one of the few great R18 content i have read that feature my fav ganre, incest,heram and slave(to an extend) but exclude the S&M play i not really into it but nonetheless i love the story. The writing is good but i would recommand the author divide the the writing into paragraph for easy reading bcs i get a dizzy reading it in a full page style, thanks and keep up the work
Overall quite a good story and smut is very nice and developed. However more stuff with his wife and his job would be better. These are just suggestions though.
If you spending time with r-18 this is must read novel author writers in a very realistic way and that’s the best part of story
R you on break? It’s been a month since the last chapter. I love and hope to see the story progress. pls give us your content At a constant rate.
Second 5⭐️ and i am trying my hardest not to just give it 100⭐️ vote from myself alone. Honestly though, author probably wouldnt like that cause it would be inauthentic and he likes his community to accrue genuinely. I am so invested in this novel that i really only have the app to read this and the 40 smut and 20 non are just collecting dust. The story may not be realistic in a sense like a 1v1 dating drama, but it is just so refreshing to have a story that builds each and every character even just a if little. The smut scenes are super drawn out depending on the situation, but to me it rarely feels rushed or dragged since it all has a purpose. I say give it a try, get caught up before you judge it. When you are caught up don’t forget to rate, vote and comment? No but seriously, it’s that good in my opinion. Don’t tread on me!
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so far in all ive read here in wn this is one of the best. its so vivid that i sometimes thought the story is based on author's real life experience.
it's been 3 months since last update, story izzz gooood but the stability of updates thoooo, i want more chapters pls 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Not gonna lie, i read a lot of 18+ novels, and this is by far the best one. Most of the one i read start of good, than the further it goes, the more unrealistic it gets. But not this one. The reason why i think this is the best one is because of how realistic it is,and i hope you keep the story that way.
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Im in love!!! Its one of the best smut novels out there! It might have a slow startup but the writing quality is phenomenal! The character design is also amazing, I can't wait to see this novel get to the good parts 😉, not saying their wasn't any, but I bet there's more juicy parts ahead. I just wish you could make the chapters a little longer, I feel like the erotic scenes end too fast. You can even add some fillers, I wouldnt mind. I would also love for the MC to eventually **** his wife over but we can save that for the ending, if we can get that far... Please author, if you can post more I wouldn't mind becoming a Pat reon ❤
Its dropped? 😢 My favorit WN its ghost of culture but that WN dropped and I just to latee find this Masterpiece, i still waiting and drop my pp for this.
Really good novel.😍 I love how realistic it is. I also love the idea/plot of the novel.👍 I can't wait for when he will go for his daughter.😋 I love the mind of the MC and the characters are very well written.👏👏👏 But as someone who puts himself as the MC when reading a novel, I hope there will be no netorare. Even though I don't like his wife I don't want to find out she's been cheating on him so I hope there is no netorare... I also don't want his slaves to cheat on him and go for other diks that's not his at anytime in the novel. Yeah... Pretty much I just don't want any Netorare. (NTR) Because I love this novel and think it's a perfect 5/5 right now but it wouldn't be if there was any NTR because like most people, I'm not a fan of it. Anyway. I hope this novel continues for a good while so I can read more of it's amazing chapters.